A person I love教学实录

Period 7 Teaching topic: People around us Teaching type: Writing Teaching objectives:

To discuss the people you like. To learn how to write an article about a person you love. Teaching points:

How to write a person. Teaching difficulties:

Use the correct capitalization, correct punctuation, the correct spelling and the learned points. The article must be coherent as well . Instructions of teaching and learning methods: Observational Method Discussion Summary Methods Practice Teaching procedures: 1

2 A person you love

A person you loveLearning aims:To know how to write a person you love.To learn some useful adjectives.To improve the ability on getting ready for the writing.

3 Free Talk: A person You Love1.Who is this person?2.What does he/she look like?3.What does he/she do?4.What do you like about him?

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Outline (大纲)Paragraph 1: Who is the person ?(appearance)Paragraph 2:What is the person like?(personality, job）Paragraph 3: What do you like about him? (reason)

5 My grandma was a short woman with grey hair. She was always cheerful. She was a very good cook. Her dishes were probably the best in the world! I will never forget the taste, and the smell as well. Grandma took care of my family. She was really kind and patient. She died two years ago and I miss her very much.6 appearancepersonalityreason

appearancepersonalityreasonAlice is my best friend. She is a tall girl with glasses. She often tells me jokes to make me laugh, but she never makes fun of others. Alice is a smart girl. She is good at Maths. We often study and play table tennis together. I hope we will always remain friends.

7 appearanceMrLi is my Mathsteacher. He is tall and thin. His classes are always full of fun. He uses lots of games in his teaching. MrLi is strict about our studies, but he always encourages us and gives us support. He often says, “Never give up and you’ll be successful.”personalityreason

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My dad•I love my dad.•He is tall.•He has black hair and wears glasses.•My dad is a doctor.•Every day, he goes to work and helps sick people.•Sometimes he has to work all day and all night, but he still finds time to help me with my studies.•He also plays ball games with me every weekend.•My dad is hard-working, patient and kind.•He is a great dad.

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Improve your compositions in foursDo you use capitalization correctly?大小写都正确吗？Do you use punctuation correctly?标点符号正确吗？Do you use spelling correctly?单词拼写正确吗？Do you use all points we have learned?所学知识点都用了吗？Do you write a coherent article?文章连贯吗？

Today’s teaching process:

Presentation→ conclusion → observation → imitating → discussion and self-learning Blackboard Design:

Effect evaluation and reflection: