Task(1): Writing an article about problems and solutions: Skills building 1 and 2教学设计范文

期初测试评讲

2018.09

Part one:书面表达

最近，你们班就长江污染的问题作了一次深入的讨论。现请你根据下面的提示要点用英语作一个总结，适当举例并提出自己的看法（至少两点）。

开头已为你写好。

尽量使用本单元词汇。

长江受污染的状况引起了世人的关注

问题

结果

原因分析

看法与

建议

一、评分标准：

1、要点齐全

2、句型丰富，语句流畅,会使用复合句

3、词汇富有变化

4、表示逻辑关系的连接词

5、使用本单元词汇

6、书写整洁

二、学习范文

1．用水量大增

2．排放到江里的有害物质和城市污水急剧增长

1．众多鱼类和野生动物濒临灭绝

2．饮用水安全受到威胁

3．生态平衡遭到破坏

1．迅猛的工农业发展

2．人口急剧增长

1．

2．

As the third longest river in the world, the environmental problems of the Yangtze River have raised concern both nationally and internationally. Not only is the amount of water taken from the river rising, but the waste being pumped into the river has also been increasing. As a consequence, a wide range of fish and wildlife are endangered. In addition, the drinking water, which millions of people rely on the river for, is unsafe now. Therefore, the balance of the ecology has been badly broken. The main reason for the present situation of the Yangtze River is the sharp increase of the population as well as the boom of agriculture and industry.

In order to focus on water conservation and survival of the wildlife, effective laws are needed and more measures should be adopted forcefully to prohibit factories and cities along the river from sending out waste and sewage into the river, and only when every one of us does our part will we become winners in the battle against the pollution.

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易错点订正&词汇拓展

1.

取自长江的水量大增the amount of water( taken from the river) is rising 2.

废水，污水the waste, sewage 3.

被排放到江里is pumped into the river 4.

种种不同的a wide range of fish and wildlife, various, a variety of

5.

珍稀物种rare species 6.

濒危be endangered 灭绝

go extinct 7.

安全safe-safety-unsafe 8.

威胁到饮用水的安全pose a threat to the safety of drinking water 9.

生态平衡the balance of the ecology 10.

有几个原因可以解释...There’re several reasons accounting for ...

11.

人口population 流行popularity 12.

剧增the sharp increase, boom, explosion 13.

（政府）立法(the government) make effective laws 14.

采取措施adopt measures 15.

（个人）尽自己职责(individuals) do our part 16.

并列：for one thing... for another, in addition,

17.

因此：

as a consequence, in consequence, consequently 18.

重申、强调

It’s essential that immediate measures should be taken to ... Only through joint efforts can we ... From what has been mentions above, we may safely conclude that...

三、总结：

What’s good writing?

1.

clear structure 开头是否清晰地表达自己的观点？

段落是否清晰？

结尾是否有感触或者建议？

2.

rich content

证据是否充足? 是否有生动的情节和描写？

全部内容是否与主题有关？

是否体现出自己的辩证思维？

3.

fine language

是否有佳词佳句？

是否有尝试创造画面感？

是否借鉴了教材中的语言？

技巧：好词好句积累，美文素材朗读

技巧：多用辩证思维思考事件的前因、后果、利与弊

技巧：TS+SS+CS

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四、练笔：

简要分析中学生培养自信心的重要性（不少于两点）；

思路：

自信属于正能量的范畴，正能量的因素很多，譬如：motivation, purpose, passion, active, success, brave...而且互为因果，即：你可以说自信的人有激情，自信的人有目标等，同样，我们也可以说有激情的人有自信，有目标的人有自信等。

第一层：self-confidence is a constant source of passion. 第二层：self-confidence encourages one to overcome whatever gets in the way. Self-confidence undoubtedly facilitate/promotes our pursuit of goals and keeps our passion. For one thing, it is not uncommon for us to come across many difficulties on the way to success. With confidence, we can cultivate/develop a positive way of thinking and rise up to challenges instead of giving up with fear. For another, self-confidence serves as a constant source of enthusiasm, which is a must to success. It is also the driving force motivating us to develop our potential to the full.

分析：

1. undoubtedly之类的词不能少，起到润滑剂作用

2. facilitate相当于help 3. pursuit虽说不在3500里，但是太常见了，动词是pursue，能提高观感

4. It is not uncommon that...这也是高考真题的常用句型，用句型能有效防止汉式英语的出现，所以建议考生要多几个it句型

5.cultivate这个词同样也是鸡汤文里常见的词

6.rise up the challenges迎难而上

7.instead of doing...用一个选择性的表达加强对比，等于rather than 8.serve as代替be动词是一个很好的形式

9. make sb happy可以用a source of happiness代替

10.driving force是比喻，现在英语文章中少不了比喻。

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Part two：阅读理解

阅读理解正确答案特点：

1、关键词直接复现

2、对原文关键词进行同义替换或转换

阅读理解干扰项的特点：

1.

张冠李戴

2.

无中生有

3.

范围扩大或缩小

4.

答非所问

5.

以偏概全

6.

半对半错

7.

绝对化

8.

未然当已然

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偷换概念

Facts

vs

Opinion facts包括example/story/figures/quotes/chart等等，它们在文中的作用是为了说明和支撑一个opinion观点；换句话说，为了证明一个opinion，作者必须紧随其后列出supporting details也就是facts.

更多关于facts vs opinion的问题：

1、Passage A里children of paradise这个例子想说明什么？

2、Passage B里最后三段的关系是什么？Professor Alex的话说明了什么？

3、Passage C里ask your mum to buy food which has been grown locally这个例子说明了什么？

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