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A Good Way to Polish a Composition

Teaching Aims: 1. Help students to go over some linking words used in the English compositions. 2. Make sure students can master and use them freely in order to make their compositions clearer and smoother. Teaching important and difficult points:

How to make students use the linking words correctly.

Teaching method: Group work Teaching procedures: StepⅠ Greetings:

StepⅡ Presentation and practice

With the college entrance examination drawing near, more and more students are worrying about how to write a good composition. Do you have any ideas of how to improve writing? The Advantages and Disadvantages of Space Travel

There are several advantages of space travel. First, it could provide man with new sources of energy. Second, space travel helps people understand the universe better.

However, space travel also has some disadvantages. It uses up too much money which could be spent in other ways. Besides, the idea of man living on other planets is unrealistic. In a word, I think space travel is a good thing. It is of great importance for a man to explore and learn about the universe. 1．表列举

① First, …. Second, …. Third, ….

Firstly, …. Secondly, …. Thirdly, ….

② In the first place, …. In the second place, ….

Finally, ….

Last but not least, ….

③ For one thing, …. For another, ….

1. What can we learn from the Global Financial Crisis?

, we should put all our heart into study to broaden our knowledge in various fields.

, it is required that we should develop our abilities in many ways and improve our personal qualities to achieve our goals in this highly competitive society.

, learning to cooperate with others is another thing we must do, because sense of teamwork contributes to success more quickly.

2. Firstly, it is very important for us to keep a balanced diet. Secondly, we’d better exercise every day to keep fit. Thirdly, we have to get rid of those bad habits that damage our health, such as drinking and smoking. Most importantly, we should develop positive attitudes towards life and take an active part in communicating with others. What’s more, we should understand and respect others.

2. 表递进

…. What’s more,

Moreover,

Besides,

Furthermore,

In addition,

1) Maggie has been fortunate to find a job she loves,

, she gets well paid for it.

….

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2) The house is too small for a family of four.

, it is in a bad location.

A. Therefore

B. However

C. What’s worse

D. On the contrary

3. 表转折

①

However, ….

②

On the contrary, ….

③

On the one hand, …. On the other hand, ….

(1) After a day’s work, he didn't feel tired.

, he had even more energy. (2) 旅行给我们带来很多快乐，但是太多旅行会让人疲惫。

4. 表举例:

…, for example, ….

take …as an example, …

…, such as …/ such as doing…, doing and doing. (1) Noise，

，is a kind of pollution．

(2) China has many big cities，such as Beijing, Shanghai, Shenzhen and so on．

(3) I have a lot of hobbies, such as listening to music, collecting stamps and surfing the Internet. 5. 表总结和建议:

In a word/ In short/In conclusion

As far as I’m concerned/ In my opinion/ personally speaking/ From my point of view…

should do…/ try to do/ need to do/

(1)总之，

熟能生巧。

(2)我认为，只要学生能保持学习和工作之间平衡，也可以进行兼职工作。

StepⅢ

Practice ( Ask Ss to add linking words to polish the passage.) Dear Julia,

I was very happy to receive your letter telling me about your plan of opening an online bookstore with some classmates.

It would be a great idea. You can learn how to manage money. It is beneficial to you to learn how to communicate with others effectively. It will be easier for you to read new books so that you can learn more. Opening an online bookstore will take up a lot of your spare time. You have little experience in the field. If you don’t know what books are in demand, you may lose some money.

You should do some research first, and then learn how to run an online bookstore. You’d better do the business during holidays.

I’m looking forward to hearing from you again. Best wishes. Step Ⅳ

Writing词数：100~120。

假如你是李华，是英国某中学交换项目的学生，请就本校食堂服务（canteen service）的状况给校长写一封信。内容包括：

优点

食堂干净

饭菜可口

服务态度好

不足

价格偏高

种类偏少

等候时间较长

尽快解决问题…

建议

Dear Mr. Principal,

I am a senior student of our school. I’d like to say something about the canteen service in our school.

StepⅤ

Homework

1．

Learn the linking words by heart. 2．

Finish off the writing.

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