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四川省宣汉中学高二英语组 潘志菊

How to write a letter in English about making friends (如何用英语写有关交友的短文) 学习目标:学习建议信的写法,掌握建议信的常用短语和句型,正确撰写建议信. 学习重点: 掌握建议信的常用短语和句型. 学习难点:组织恰当的语言,正确撰写建议信.

写作任务

假定你是李华，最近你的英国朋友Tom发来邮件向你咨询如何交友。请你给她回一封邮件。给予建议。

注意：词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数). Dear Lori, ___________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely,

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Li Hua Step1 审题定调

本写作要求写一封建议性,建议性可以写给个人就其遇到的问题提出看法.也可以写给某个机构或组织就改进其服务等方面提出建议或忠告.本篇文章要求对如何交友提出建议,体裁为应用文.建议信要求写出写信的原因,建议的内容,提出建议的理由,同时语言要委婉’礼貌. 时态为一般现在时为主,人称以二人称为主. Step2谋篇布局

本写作内容可以分为三段: 首段:点出问题,表明写作意图

主体段落:对于如何交友提出建议

结尾段:对提出建议进行总结,表达愿望,希望,祝福.强调自己写信的目的. Step3 组织语言

1.At first ,let the students discuss the topic about”

friends”

a)

Qualities of a person we would like as a friend 答案: 1. Honest 2. Friendly 3. Open-minded 4. Generous 5. good-tempered 6. Trustworthy 7. Careful 8. Easygoing 9. Outgoing 10. warm-hearted 11. Selfless 12. Tolerant 13. Intelligent... b)

A person who couldn’t be a good friend

01.selfish 自私的 02. dishonest 不诚实的 03. tricky狡猾的

04. mean 吝啬的 05. impatient 不耐烦的06. lazy懒惰的

07. narrow-minded

心胸狭隘的08. gossipy闲谈的

Test the students’ memory by remember ing the Chinese meanings of the eight words 2.Then let the students share some sentences about the importance of making friends a)

A friend in need is a friend indeed.

b)

A friend without faults will never be found.

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c)

Friendship is love with understanding.

d)

Friendship adds joys and shares sorrow. e)

A life without a friend is a life without a sun. f)

Be slow in choosing a friend; slower in changing. g)

A friend to everybody is a friend to nobody a)

患难见真情 b)

没有缺点的朋友是永远找不到的 c)

友谊是爱加上谅解 d)

友谊可以增添欢乐，可以分担忧愁 e)

人生在世无朋友，犹如生活无太阳 f)

选择朋友要审慎，摒弃更要审又慎。 g)

广交友，无深交

3.Since friends are so important .Do you know how to make friends? Do you have any suggestions about how to make friends?(three days ago ,students wrote a letter about how to make friends, then share the letters of some students )

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A:建议信开头常用句式(beginning) I am writing to express my views concerning... 我写此信来表达我关于……的观点。

You have asked me for my advice about...，and I will try to make some useful suggestions. 对于你来信问我关于……的事，现提供几条有益的建议。 I’m glad to receive your email asking for my advice on how to ...或I’m very glad to have received your letter/email. Now I’m writing to/I’d like to give you some advice on how to ...。

I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble …很遗憾听说你有困难…

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B:表达建议（body) I would like to suggest that... 我建议……

Why not.../Why don't you...？为何不……？ In my opinion,... 在我看来

If I were you, I would... 如果我是你，我会……

You‘d better do.../not do... 你最好/最好不……

I think it will be a good idea/more beneficial if you could... 我认为……是个好办法/有利的。

It's important to.../It helps to...It should be a good idea to... 很重要/有帮助/是个好主意。

I am writing to put up some suggestions concerning... 我提出几条有关于……的建议。

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C:建议信结尾常见句式（ending）

Please take good consideration of my advice.Thanks. 请仔细考虑我的建议，谢谢。

I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations helpful/useful. 希望这些建议对你有帮助。

I hope that my suggestions are helpful for your decision-making anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement.我会非常高兴看到情况改善。

I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account/consideration. Whatever you decide to do， good luck with your studies/work！我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么，祝你学习/工作好运。 I hope you can take good consideration of my advice. I would be ready to discuss about this matter with you to further details.我希望你可以好好考虑我的建议。我准备好和你进一步讨论这件事情。 D:注意连贯和逻辑,合理使用连接词和短语. 首先

Firstly ,first of all, To begin with, on the one hand, for one thing 其次

最后

Secondly, besides, Finally, at last ,in the In addition, on the other end ,last but not the hand, for another, what’s least more

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第一段:点出问题(部分借鉴英语周报) 普通表达

I am sorry to hear that…

高级表达

What a pity it is to hear that…

I n my opinion ,everyone As far as I am concerned, wants to have some friends everyone had a thirsty for and…is very important

friendship and it is of great significance to…

第二段:对于如何交友提出建议

普通表达

To start with ,to make friends, you should…

In fact, it is the best way to…

Secondly ,you should .. In order to make a good first impression. Thirdly, talk to new people before they talk to you. Remember you have little chance of… unless you have a conversation first.

第三段：希望所给建议能够有所帮助

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高级表达

To make friends ,firstly, you are

supposed to…

Which is the best way to…

Secondly, it would be a good

idea for you to…

to create a favorable first impression. Last but not the least, make the first move Bear in mind that when you talk to someone , you are creating the opportunity…

普通表达

高级表达

I hope you will find these suggestions useful.

范文展示

Dear Lori, Hopefully these suggestions will be of great help to you. What a pity it is to hear that you are having trouble making friends. A s far as I’m concerned , everyone has a thirsty for friendship and it is of great significance to know make friends. To make friends ,firstly ,you should join an organization or a club ,which is the best way to meet people with common interests. Secondly, it would be a good idea for you to dress neatly and talk politely and confidently to create a favorable first impression .Last but not the least , make the first move. Bear in mind that when you talk to someone, you are creating the opportunity to make a lasting friend. Hopefully these suggestions will be of great help to you. Yours sincerely, Li Hua

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