Task(2): Helping poor children: Skills building 3教案设计（一等奖）

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which benefits the homeless a lot without harming their dignity. From where I stand, it’s high time that What makes a good task-based writing? we should spare no effort to push for the event.

——The Street Store

学生习作常见错误3:

【Learning Aims】

1.

To learn how to summarize the information and enrich your composition in content. 2.

To realize the main mistakes in writing. 3. To learn to beautify your composition. 【Learning keys and difficulties】

How to learn to summarize and beautify your composition. 【

Main Problems】

I. having difficulty writing a summary of the narrative passage

II. some students’ poor handwriting III. quite a few mistakes in vocabulary or sentence patterns V. lacking the awareness of using advanced vocabulary and beautiful sentences 【Teaching procecures】

StepⅠ.Greetings. StepⅡ.Lead-in (Summarizing the information correctly and accurately.)

i): What is a summary?

S1：From the passage we can see a new activity where people donate things to the homeless and give the homeless the same dignity as customers. It became popular immediately.

S2：As can be seen in the passage, the Street Store organized an activity that helped clothe the homeless. In addition, it gave the homeless the experience of shopping, which looked up to the homeless’ dignity.

学生习作常见错误4:

S1: This report conveys an important message to us, the Street Sore gives the homeless a chance to choose some useful clothes, which also helps them achieve a retail experience.

S2:

What this passage mainly indicates is that the Street Store has been organized. It collects clothes for the homeless to try on, which is very popular in many poor areas.

iii): How to summarize:

Step Ⅲ. Correct mistakes. Avoiding making the mistakes corrected by teachers many times.

1. More often than none, governments and social groups merely provide the homeless with clothes and bread.

2. What I should do, first of all, is make the Street Store more popular, in which way can it make more

A summary is a

passage which keeps

information of the original in your

words but

your opinion. ii): Common problems in this passage 学生习作常见错误1:

S1：What the passage says that because of various ways to help those homeless people, the Street Store is becoming more and more popular in South Africa. The Street Store gives the homeless a chance to pick up clothing and a retail experience. It’s beneficial to the homeless.

S2: As we can see from this passage, the Street Store not only helps to clothe the homeless, but also gives them the shopping experience.

学生习作常见错误2:

We can see from the passage above that the Street Store has been a heated point in our daily life, 1

homeless people know it.

3. The Street Store, I think, is a charity program to help the man live in poverty.

4. It is undeniable that the action make contributions to our society.

5. The selfless donations are more considerate to the homeless.

6. As a matter of fact. All of us are kindness and are willing to help the person who are in trouble.

7. Additionally, I would appeal to other people to participate this program and make our society more harmonious.

8. I support the measures that the Street Store takes by reason of they can protect the receivers’ dignity.

9. If we give the clothes that out of our needs to the Street Store, it can…. 10. To begin with, not only does it restore people’s confidence but also give them a retail experience,

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高三英语二轮复习

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with which they could otherwise gain a lot.

11. I must appeal to more people donate their used clothing to helping poor people.

12. This step avoid making those homeless persons feel being look down on.

StepⅣ. Learning to express advanced vocabulary/sentences.

1. The way of helping the homeless is wholeheartedly supported by me.

2. If I am a member of the activity, I will throw myself into helping the homeless.

Practice: 1). Such programmes can change people’s lives by giving them the ability to provide for themselves and their families.

2). After walking 10 miles, we all felt tired.

3). The summer vacation is coming.

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3. …which, I think, can benefit both the homeless and our society.

Practice: 1). Meanwhile, shelter and access to food and clean water are big problems in the rest of the city. 改写成：

4. Different to common charities, the Street Store doesn’t just show sympathy for the homeless, but…. 5. Deeply inspired by the action, I can’t wait to want to express something …. 6. Personally, I appreciate the programme…. Practice: 1). If I am a volunteer of the Street Store, I will put all of my efforts into helping others.

2).

(诚然), teenagers’ lack of the awareness of resisting the temptation of drugs is the main reason. 3).

(和你的想法相反), I am totally in favor of the plan. 7. I will help them in a proper way in preference to….

8. The Street Store offers the poor both…and…without hurting their dignity. Practice: 1). Because the Internet is developing quickly, I can talk to my friends far away.

2). Since Elva’s photo album is coming out this month, teens talked with her about her career and life. (用with的复合结构)

9. What’s more, giving the homeless the same dignity can make them more comfortable to accept the 2

donation.

10. I will treat them as real customers to avoid making them feel embarrassed. Practice: 1). The film is set in the ancient China. It is worth seeing. 改写成：

2).

(expose) people with different values does good to children’s growth. 11. On the other hand, giving them the shopping experience of choosing what they want can give them the same dignity. 12. On a personal note, the Street Store is an undeniable marvelous activity, where the homeless can gain the warmth given by their society. 13. Not only does it help the poor without the loss of dignity, but also contributes to the construction of a harmonious society. 14. Were I to have the chance to participate in this perfect project, I would spare no effort to play an active part in it. 15. So moving is the action of the Street Store that it really gives me something to chew on. 16. So inspiring ……………………………………I can’t help applauding for it. 17. The more efforts I make, the more likely they are to have…. 18. Personally, the Street Store is to the homeless what water is to us. StepⅤ. Application & Consolidation. Rewrite your composition and further improve it, trying to make your final copy as neat as possible. StepⅥ.Homework . 请阅读下面短文, 并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

Puss, a mother cat, with her three kittens, had lived in the local cellar(地下室); but one day she thought she would carry them to the attic(阁楼).

The servant thought that was not the proper place for them; so she carried them back to the cellar. Puss was certain that she wanted them in the attic; so she carried them there again and again, five, six, seven, —

yes, a dozen times; for each time the servant took them back to the cellar. Poor Puss was nearly tired out, and could carry them no longer. Suddenly she went away. Where do you think she went? She was gone a long time. When she returned, she had a strange cat with her that we had never seen before. She seemed to tell him all about her great trouble, and he listened to her story.

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Then the strange cat took the little kittens, one by one, and carried them to the attic. After this he went away, and we have never seen him since. The servant then left the kittens in the attic, for she saw how anxious Puss was to have them stay there. Wasn’t the strange cat kind to Puss? This story should teach children to be ready to help one another. 【写作内容】

1.用约30个单词写出上文概要；

2.用约120个单词对“乐于助人”这一话题谈谈你的看法,内容包括：

⑴读完上文后你的感受；

⑵描述一件你所你亲身经历的帮助别人的事；

⑶为什么要弘扬乐于助人的精神？

【写作要求】 ⑴作文中可以使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直

接引用原文中的句子；

⑵文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

⑶不必写标题。

【评分标准】

内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

【知识清单】

Ⅰ. 用好连接词

表示罗列增加first, second, third；first, then/next, after that/next, finally；for one thing. . . for another. . . ；on(the)one hand. . . on the other hand；besides; what’s more; in addition; furthermore; moreover; another; also；especially/in particular 表示时间顺序now, at present, recently, after, afterwards, after that, after a while, in a few days at first, in the beginning, to begin with；from now on, from then on；at the same time, meanwhile till, not. . . until, before, after, when, while, as, during 3

表示解释、说明、例证now, in addition, for example, for instance, in this case, moreover, furthermore, in fact, actually, that is, namely, such as 表示转折but, however, while, though, or, otherwise, on the contrary, on the other hand, despite, in spite of, even though, except (for), instead 表示并列or, and, also, too, not only. . . but also, as well as, both. . . and, either. . . or, neither. . . nor 表示因果because, because of, since, now that, as, thanks to. . . , due to. . . , therefore, as a result (of), otherwise, so. . . that, such. . . that 表示条件as (so) long as, on condition that, if, unless 表示让步关系though, although, as, even if, even though, whether. . . or. . . , however, whoever, whatever, whichever, wherever, whenever, no matter how (who, what, which, where, when) 表示举例for example, for instance, such as, take. . . for example 表示比较be similar to, similarly, the same as, in contrast, compared with (to). . . , just like, just as 表示目的for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order to, so as to 表示概括归纳in a word, in short, in brief, on the whole, generally speaking, in my opinion, as far as I know, as we all know, as has been stated, as I have shown, finally, at last, in summary, in conclusion, to sum up Ⅱ. 用好连接句

1. 引出开头

It is well-known to us that. . . (我们都知道……) As far as my knowledge is concerned, . . . (就我所知……) Recently the problem of. . . has been brought into focus. =Nowadays there is a growing concern over the problem of. . . (最近……问题引起了关注) With the rapid development of science and technology, more and more people believe that. . . (随着科技的迅速发展, 越来越多的人认为……) 2. 表达不同观点

People’s views on. . . vary from person to person. Some hold that. . . However, others believe that. . . (人们对……的观点因人而异, 有些人认为……然而其他人却认为……) People may have different opinions on. . . (人们对……可能会持有不同见解) There are different opinions among people as to. . . (对于……人们的观点大不相同) 3. 表示结尾

In short, it can be said that. . . (总之, ……意思是……) From what has been mentioned above, we can come to the conclusion that. . . (从上面提到的, 我们可以得出结论……) Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally/reasonably come to the conclusion that. . . (把所有的这些因素加以考虑, 我们自然可以得出结论……) All in all, we cannot live without. . . , but at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope

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with the problems that would arise. (总之, 我们没有……无法生活, 但同时我们必须寻求新的解决办法来面对可能出现的新问题) 4. 提出建议

It is high time that we put an end to the trend. (该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了) There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of. . . (毫无疑问, 对……问题应予以足够重视) Obviously, if we want to do something. . . it is essential that. . . (显然, 如果我们想要做什么事, 很重要的是……) 5. 预示后果

Obviously, if we don’t control the problem, the chances are that. . . will lead us in danger. (很明显, 如果我们不控制这一问题, 很有可能我们会陷入危险) No doubt, unless we take effective measures, it is very likely that. . . (毫无疑问, 除非我们采取有效措施, 否则我们很可能会……) 6. 表示观点

From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the second. (在我看来, 支持第一种观点比第二种更有道理) I cannot entirely agree with the idea that. . . (我无法完全同意这一观点) As far as I am concerned/In my opinion, . . . (就我来说……) I sincerely believe that. . . =I am greatly convinced (that). . . (我真诚地相信……) 7. 给出原因或顺序

The reason why. . . is that. . . (……的原因是……) I quite agree with the statement that. . . The reasons are chiefly as follows. (我十分赞同这一论述, 即……。其主要原因如下。)This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons. First, . . . Second, . . . Third, . . . (这一现象的存在有很多原因, 第一……第二……第三……) For one thing, . . . For another thing, . . . =On the one hand, . . . On the other hand. . . (一方面……另一方面……) 【写作素材】

The Street Store South Africa’s Street Store doesn’t just help to clothe the homeless, but also gives them the shopping experience of choosing what they want. With the idea to give the homeless the same dignity as customers who can pay, the Street Store sets up their pop-up cardboard shop in Cape Town, inviting customers in need to browse through the offerings and choose an outfit for themselves from the hundreds of donated items at their will. The Street Store works closely with local council to get permission to pop-up their sidewalk shops in poor areas around Cape Town. Because of the social conditions in South Africa, over half of the children live in poverty, making the Street Store even more popular. 4

The Street Store displays a row of cardboard “hangers”

(衣架), with boxes neatly arranged below each one. On the hangers hang shirts, T-shirts, trousers and dresses donated by the Cape Town public. In the boxes below, multiple pairs of shoes await a new owner. Street Store volunteers also act as store consultants, offering fashion advice to their customers as they try on chosen donated items. The Street Store has already reached thousands in the Cape Town area, with over 1,000 satisfied homeless customers visiting on their first day in operation. The program gives the homeless not only a change to pick up some needed clothing, but also restores confidence by giving them a retail experience—even when pocket money doesn’t allow it.

【写作内容】

1. 用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；

2. 结合上述信息，谈谈你对The Street Store的看法；

3. 假设你是The Street Store活动的参与者，你会怎么做？（不少于两点）

【写作要求】

1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；

2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

3. 不必写标题。

【评分标准】

内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。