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（河南省开封市10-11学年高一月考）

Today is Sunday. I have been studying all day long. On the morning,

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I had a dry breakfast. We have no water to drink because

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the water supply had cut off. The water had come back in

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the evening, I did maths then. I didn't stop after 12 o’clock.

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After a short lunch I had the break. Then I went to my

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Sunday English Class.

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After a long and tired class for more than two hours, I got

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to home. Some work had been done but some hadn’t, I must

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review all my subject such as the Science, the Humanities,

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[来源:学#科#网] which include Chinese, English, Politics and History as

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well. That’s terribly! Especially when there was no water.

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黑龙江省鹤北林业局高级中学09-10学年高一下学期期末考试（英语）

One day I told Mr Wang,our math teacher,was ill.

61.________ 62.________ 63.________[来源:学+科+I was worried about him and went to see him after the school. When I enter his room,he struggled up to welcome 网] me.I let him lay down again.Mr Wang looked pale. Z,X,X,K][来源:Z§xx§k.Com] I asked about his trouble.He said he was having

64.________[来源:学,科,网

65.________ 66.________ 67.________ 68.________ 69.________ 70.________

a bad cold.Then he had a bad cough.After take some

medicine he was getting better.He asked me that we liked the teacher who took place.When he heard

everything was all right,I could see he was pleasing.

Finally I asked him don’t to worry about the work

and have a good rest. 答案

61.解析：表示“我被告知”。答案：told前加was 62.解析：school此处为抽象名词，表示“上学”。答案：去掉the 63.解析：过去的动作。答案：enter→entered 64.解析：lie此处是不带to的不定式，作宾补。答案：lay→lie 65.答案：√6.解析：taking是现在分词。after taking相当于after he took...答案：take→taking 67.解析：ask（询问）后接whether/if（是否）。答案：that→if（whether）[来源:学科网] 68.解析：take his place代替他。答案：place前加his 69.解析：please表示“感到高兴”。答案：pleasing→pleased 70.解析：ask sb. not to do sth. 要求某人别做某事。答案：don’t→not 3、

（河南省方城县月考）

Dear Mary, I receive your E-mail just now. Don’t worry about me. I’m getting on well with my research work in the lab. But to my greatly surprise you say you will give up learn English. The reason is because you have not done well in it recently and you have lost interests. I’m afraid I couldn’t agree with you . I know it is difficulty to learn English, and English is widely used in the world today. It will be important tool in our future work. Beside, it is becoming more and more important in our daily life. If you study hard, you will be succeed. Do remember that where there is a will, there is a way. I’ m looking forward to hearing good news from you.

Yours,

Li Hua 答案

work . Beside, it is becoming more and more important in our daily life. If you study hard, you

Besides will be succeed. Do remember that where there is a will there is a way. I’ am looking forward to

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hearing good news from you. 4、

（河南省郑州市第47中学高一第一次月考）

71. You will go somewhere quietly to calm your friend down.

71.__________ 72. She and her family hid away for nearly 25 months after they were discovered.72.__________ 73. I’ve grown so crazy about everything to do with the nature.

73.__________ 74. End your friendship with this boy would be a stupid thing to do.

74.__________ 75. As we know, there are more than one kind of English.

75.__________ 76. English is one of the official language used in India.

76.__________ 77. Although I still smile, but I’m not that happy.

77.__________ 78. Why not join discussions and show interest in other people’s ideas.

78.___________ 79. He wonders that the Smiths will come to his party.

79.___________ 80. I have many hobbies, such as play basketball and so on.

80.__________ 答案

71 quietly改为quiet

72. after改为before 73. 去掉the

[来源:Zxxk.Com] 74. End改为Ending

75. are改为is

76. language改为languages 77. 去掉but

78. join后加in 79. that改为if/whether

80. play改为playing 5、

（河南省郑州市盛同学校高一第一次月考）

English is the most wide used language in the world.

Methods of learning English has been improved greatly

since the begin of this century. Learning English is

76. ______ 77. ______ 78. ______

not just a matter of knowing a lots of grammar rules

or words. English is not a “subject” like the geography

79. ______ 80. ______ 81. ______ 82. ______

83. ______ 84. _______ 85. ______ or history, but a “skill” like swimming and football.

You learn to swim by getting on the water and swimming.

You learn to play football by going and kick a ball.

And you learn English by using it, without by knowing about it. A student’s mastery of a language is measured by

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·（河南省郑州市智林学校高一第一次月考）

Every morning John goes to work by trains. He always

76.________

77.________ 78.________ 79.________ 80.________ 81.________ 82.________ 83.________ 84.________ 85.________ buys a newspaper, it helps to make the time pass more quickly.

One Thursday morning, he turned on the sports page. He wanted

to see the report about an important football match the night

before. The repot was such interesting that he forgot to get off

at his station. He didn’t know it when he saw the sea. He got

off at the next station, and have to wait a long time for a train to

go back. Of course, he arrived very late at the office.

His boss were very angry when John told him why he was late.

“Work is very more important than football!”

答案

76.trains → train 77. it → which

78. on → to 79. see → read 80. such → so 81. when

→until 82. wait 后加a 83. √ 84. were → was 85. very → much

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浙江省余姚中学10-11学年高一上学期第一次质量检测（英语）

I have just got some good news to tell to you. I win a national prize for painting last week. My father was so pleasing that he suggested I went to England for a holiday. I’d like to staying there for half a month, visiting place of interest or practicing my English as well. We’ve been often writing to each for a year and a half now. I have often dreamed of talk face to face with you. I imagine you’ll be at vacation yourself by that time.

Perhaps we could go out to do some sightseeing together.

答案：改错I have just got some good news to tell to （去掉to）you. I win(won) a national prize for painting last week. My father was so pleasing(pleased) that he suggested I went(go) to England for a holiday. I’d like to staying(stay) there for half a month, visiting place(places) of interest or(and) practicing my English as well. We’ve been often writing to each (加other) for a year and a half now. I have often dreamed of talk(talking) face to face with you. I imagine you’ll be at(on) vacation yourself by that time.

Perhaps we could go out to do some sightseeing together.

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浙江省温州市任岩松中学10-11学年高一第一次月考（英语）

Ladies and gentlemen,

May I have your attentions, please? In Saturday, July 27th, there will have a few visits to different places. Everyone is welcomed. All the visitors will be divided into four groups. Each group of visitors can visit one of the place – a factory, a farm, a school or a hospital. Please you sign your name at the Service Desk before 9: 00 a.m. and say what place you wish to visit. We’ll set out after the breakfast at 8 and we will return in the afternoon. We will have lunch at place of visit.

We hope you a pleasant journey. That’ s all. Thank you. 答案

Attentions改为

attention In

改为

On Have

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be welcomed改为

welcome place

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places Please you改为Please say what place 改为say which place after the breakfast 改为after breakfast at place 改为

at one place We hope改为We wish

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浙江省南马高级中学10-11学年高一9月月考（英语）

Some students don’t like talking about their parents often as if their parents love them very much. Are you

going on well with your parents? You and your parents will be very happily if you can be friends. Here are some way to have a good talk with them. Find a good time to talk, like when you’re eating dinner, going out for walk and watching TV. Tell them something you’re interested in, or ask them about their lives when they are young. They love to talk about our past! Meet them face to face and listen to them carefully. Be honesty, and your parents will trust you more. 答案

Some students don’t like talking about their parents often as if their parents love them very much. Are you going on well with your parents? You and your parents will be very happily if you can be friends. Here are some way to have a good talk with them. Find a good time to talk, like when you’re eating dinner, going out for walk

and watching TV. Tell them something you’re interested in, or ask them about their lives when they are young. They love to talk about our past! Meet them face to face and listen to them carefully. Be honesty, and your parents will trust you more. 10、

浙江省嘉兴一中10-11学年高一上学期10月月考（英语）

My interest has been in books instead in food since I went to high school. In the past I was real

interested in all kinds of food. In summer day I liked to buy ice cream and cold drinks, while in winter I

like to buy sweets and some another food. Whenever I went for a walk with my parents I would ask them

buy me something. However, after I went to high school, I found I was putting on weight. So, I gave up

habit of eating and began to spend money on all kinds of books, and my parents are always complaining

that I am a money spender! 答案

1instead∧--of 2real--really 3day--days 4like—liked

5another--other 6∧buy--to 7∧habit--the

8and--but 11、

四川省南充高中顺庆校区10-11学年高一第一次阶段性考试

（英语）

短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）

I’d love to tell you something about my vacation. I’ve been

86. __________

looking forward to visit the East Lake for a long time.

87. __________ Yesterday, with my friends, I paid a visit it. We set off at

88. __________ 7:00 am by bus. It is 8 kilometers far away from our city, and

89. __________ 90. __________ when we got there, it was 7:20 am. There we have a wonderful

time. We spent the whole morning boating and fished on the lake.

91. __________[来源:学+科+网Z+X+X+K] Then we had a picnic in the lake. In the afternoon, we climbed

92. __________ the Snake Island, picking the beautiful flowers and took a lot of pictures.

93. __________ Time passed very quick. Before we knew it, it was already 16:00,

94. __________ but we had to go back. How about your vacation? Please write

95. __________ me as soon as possible. 答案

86.

正确

87. visit 改为

visiting

88. visit 后加to

89. 去掉far

90. have改为had 91. fished改为fishing

92. in 改为by

93. piking改为picked

94. quick改为quickly 95. but改为and 12、

山西省孝义三中10-11学年高一单元测试（一）（英语）

单句改错。（每题一分，共10分）

1 .My hometown is ten miles far away from here.______________________ 2. I am amazing at what you have told me .___________________________ 3. Senior High teachers are not similar with Junior High teachers .________ 4. It is a great fun to swim in the river on a hot day._________________ 5. There are four times as many girls than boys in our class.___________ 6. What’s your attitude of the problem?_______________________ 7. The words appeared on the special screen.______________ 8. A man calling John Smith is asking to see you.____________________ 9. The climate here is warmer than it in my hometown. _______________ 10. I’m looking forward to have a chance to go abroad.____________ 答案

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辽宁省沈阳二中10-11学年高一上学期10月月考（英语）

[来源:学科网] I often dream of being a teacher. I dream of standing in the platform in the classroom and give lessons to lovely boys and girls. I teach them, play with them, watch them growing up. I am always young when I was staying with them. I know there is not easy to be a teacher. Without enough knowledges, you can never teach good. Besides, you have to make friends with your pupils and take good care of him. Though I am a student now, but I will work very hard to make my dream comes true. 答案

I often dream of being a teacher. I dream of standing in(改成on) the platform in the classroom and give(改成giving) lessons to lovely boys and girls. I teach them, play with them, (此处添加and) watch them growing up. I am always young when I was (改成am)staying with them. I know there(改成it) is not easy to be a teacher. Without enough knowledges(改成knowledge), you can never teach good(改成well). Besides, you have to make friends with your pupils and take good care of him(改为them). Though I am a student now, but (but去掉)I will work very hard to make my dream comes (改为come) true. 14、

辽宁省大连市二十三中学10-11学年高一上学期第一次月考（英语）

[来源:Z#xx#k.Com] Jim arrived at home and discovered that he has forgotten his door key. He rang the bell, but nobody came to open the door. He rang again and waiting, but still there was not reply. He walked round the house to see if he could find a open window, but they were all locked. It was beginning to rain, he did not

know how to do. Kate, his wife, had obvious gone out. He didn’t know where she had been or when she’d return. Finally, he picked up a stone and threw them at the kitchen window. Just then, his wife came back. 答案

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吉林省扶余一中10-11学年高一上学期第一次月考（英语）

单句改错

76．We must make use every minute to study.

77．The football match was put off because the bad weather. 78.

More than one student have failed in the examination. 79．The teacher is concerning about his students’ health. 80．We’re going to do some shopping. Will you join in us? 81．There is no such a thing as standard English. 82．A number of people who were killed or injured reached more than 400，000.[来源:学.科.网Z.X.X.K] 83．While he walking the dog in the park,he happened to meet an old friend. 84．How are you getting along well with them? 85．Ever since middle school, my sister Wang Wei and I dreamed about taking a great bike trip. 答案

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吉林省东北师大附中10-11学年高一第一次月考（英语）

81. Last night, his father came back late as usually. 82. At the end of 16th century, about five to seven million people spoke English. 83.

The Mekong River becomes rapids as it passes across deep valleys. 84.

This is the reason why she explained to me just now. 85.

The boss requested that all the work must be finished as soon as possible. 答案

81 usually 改成

usual 82在16th前面加the 83across改成

through 84why改成which, that 或去掉

85must改成should /去掉must