Task(2): Writing an article about problems and solutions: Skills building 310分钟试讲教案

写作微专题– 30字概况

一、

类型; 文(说明文)+图类/ 单独

图

主题

（趋势）

二、30字概况的模式：

主题

（趋势）

现象/主题

概况方法：

首段中心句；写作要求中寻；高频词串联；

三、真题研析：

(2017•江苏) 请认真阅读下面有关我国电影票房收入（box-office income）的柱状图及相关文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。(2017江苏高考) 用约30个单词概述柱状图信息的主要内容

参考范文

The box-office income of Chinese movies witnessed a constant increase from about 17 billion yuan in 2012 to over 40 billion in 2015. However, that increase slowed down in 2016. 主题：The box-office income of Chinese movies 趋势概况：increase from about 17 billion yuan in 2012 to over 40 billion in 2015. However, that increase slowed down in 2016. 四、模拟仿写练习：

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Have you ever paid for knowledge online? According to Bloomberg, a platform, the De Dao app offers written articles and podcasts from famous personalities that the users must pay for, with topics ranging from music to economics. By May 2017, De Dao had 7 million users. As is reported in People’s Daily, Ximalaya FM, another popular online learning platform, had about 450 million users as of January 2018. The platform allows people to pay for and listen to online learning courses. Many Chinese people used to be unwilling to pay for content online. However, many internet users’ attitudes have changed since they began to see quality content as valuable. In fact, 75% of internet users are happy to pay for quality content, according to a 2017 report by Chinese science news website Guokr and Internet Netease. 【写作内容】

1．请以约30个词概括上文和图表内容；

2．请以约120个词谈谈你对“Pay for Online Knowledge”的看法，包括如下要点：

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分析哪些原因促进了网上知识付费市场的迅速发展（不少于两点）；

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你愿意为网上知识买单吗？请阐述你的理由（不少于两点）

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Car-sharing Is Catching on 1

Car-sharing is a new concept. Previously，car ownership helped to develop China’s economy and its cities. But now people have found that it has led to traffic jams and other challenges to the environment and economy. Conversely，car-sharing serves as a model to provide car access without the requirement of ownership. Unlike traditional car-rentals over the counter，car-sharing refers to services where users can gain access to vehicles，often by the hour，online. The cars are usually parked at designated parking lots，where drivers can get to and return them. More than 40 companies in China currently offer car-sharing services，while most cars are new energy vehicles. China’s Ministry of Transport has recently voiced its support for the development of the car-sharing industry.

写作内容

1.用约30个单词概述柱状图信息的主要内容；

2.谈谈推广共享汽车的益处(上述文字仅供参考)；

3.就如何促进共享汽车的健康发展提两条建议。

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请认真阅读下面有关我国共享汽车情况的柱状图及相关文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150 词左右的文章。

【写作内容】

用约30个单词概述图表信息的主要内容

Numbers of Shared Cars in China and Tendency

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对比范文：

As we can see from the diagram, in 2016, China only possessed 28,000 shared cars. It is predicted that the number will continue to rise and by 2020, as many as 300,000 such cars will be put onto the market. 写作指导：如何写概括

第一段：主题句+举例：例子就不要管了，主要体现越来越多的人付费网上知识。

再看图：数据从2017涨到2020。不过请注意：2020年还没有到，说明这是预测。

概括以上内容，即：越来越多的人付费网上知识付费产品，从2017年的多少到2020年的多少。

参考范文1:

Nowadays, many online apps have witnessed more and more people paying for online knowledge. It’s estimated that, by 2020, China’s online paid knowledge market will expand 5 times what it was in 2017. A growing number of internet users are keen on paying for content online, predictably promoting the market size from 4.91 billion yuan in 2017 to 23.51 billion yuan in 2020.（后半句仿照2017年的）

参考范文2：

As we can see from the diagram，in 2016，China only possessed 28,000 shared cars. It is predicted that the number will continue to rise and by 2020，as many as 300,000 such cars will be put onto the market. 参考范文

With the development of technology，robots are coming for our current jobs. When some people show their concern about the issue,77% of Americans consider it normal to have a robot in their homes. 3