Writing板书设计及意图

Use Advanced Vocabulary

to Have More Sparkle in Your Composition writing Li Zhuang middle school Zeng Guihua Objectives: 1.

Instructional objectives After the end of the class, 80% students should be able to

1)

learn to use advanced vocabulary to have more sparkle in your composition 2)

learn to write a continuation 3)

train students’ imitative writing skills through reciting wonderful sentences and samples

2. Educational objectives After the end of the class, 80% students should be able to pay attention to the development of writing skills and use advanced vocabulary to have more sparkle in your composition 3. Personal objectives 1) Encourage students to be more passionate and patient to write their own sentences correctly. 2) Give proper adjustment to the class. Focal point: 1) write their own sentences correctly 2) express one’s opinion clearly

3) recite some wonderful sentences Difficult points: How to use advanced vocabulary to have more sparkle in your composition Teaching aid:

the multimedia Teaching methods:

Guiding, discussing, induction and correcting Teaching Procedures Stage 1 Greetings Greet the whole class as usual.

Stage2 Warming-up

Step1 Show four pictures to students and let them try to describe them in the sentence pattern “It is so____________”. Maybe they will use the similar simple words to describe such different pictures.

Step2 then show another sentences “If you do not leave me,

we will die together.”

Different people with different levels will give you different answers.

1. 你如果不滚开，我就和你同归于尽。（四级水平）

2. 你若不离不弃，我必生死相依。（六级水平）

3. 问世间情为何物，直教人生死相许。（八级水平）

4. 天地合，乃敢与君绝。（大神级别）

5. 你在或不在，爱就在那里，不增不减。（活佛级别）

If we want to get high marks, we should learn to use advanced vocabulary to have more sparkle in your composition Stage 3 writing skills

Step1 简单词替换(短语优先)

1. occur 替换

think

Suddenly I think that someone had broken into my house.

-->An idea occurred to me that someone had broken into my house. -->It occured to me that someone had broken into my house.

2.devote 替换

spend

eg.He spend all his spare time in reading.

--> He devotes all his spare time to reading.

3.appreciate 替换

thank

Thank you very much for your help. -->we appreciate your help very much. -->your help is much appreciated. 4.

exercise

1）.I don't think it is true. 2）.After walking 10 miles, we all felt tired. 3）.Plenty of memory work is undoubtedly helpful to English study.

4）. The summer vacation is coming. 5）.jack is very clever.He often thinks of new ideas. 6）.the proffessor you talked about is very famous.

7）.He is very intrested in collecting stamps. 8）.I'm very glad to learn that you are coming in September. 9）.Everyone should do his or her

best. 10）.What you do will be very important. Step2 主语替换

1.

将习惯使用的“用人作主语”换成“用物作主语”.I like English. English is my favorite subject.”

-->English attracts me a lot.”

2.

用动名词做主语

You should communicate more with your classmates. -->Communicating more with your classmates would be beneficial for you. 3.

多用实词，少用虚词。（比较大，比较泛的词）

nice----generous, interesting, smart, gentle, hospital, warm-hearted. Step3 使用高级词汇时需注意：求实避虚，贴切择词

走出房间：

一般性：walk out of the room 小偷：slip out of the room 小孩：dance out of the room

老人：stagger out of the room Stage 4 let's polish the article

Dear Robin,

I’m writing to ask that could you be kind enough to help me for a very important competition which will be held next Monday.

In fact, I am very happy to stand for my school to join in senior high school students’

speech competition in our province. Although my pronunciation is not so good, I hope to do well, trying my best to make my school happy. so if you are free, would you mind giving me some suggestions about my pronunciation and correct my article face to face? I am sorry for any inconvenience caused and thank you in advance. Looking forward to your help. ————》

Dear Robin,

I’m writing to ask that could you be kind enough to do me a favor for a significant competition which will be held next Monday.

Indeed, I feel it an honour to stand for my school to participate in senior high school students’

speech competition in our province. While my pronunciation is not so fantastic, I do hope to perform well, sparing no effort to satisfy my school. Hence, if you are available, would you mind giving me some suggestions concerning my pronunciation and polishing my article face to face? I apologize for any inconvenience caused and thank you in advance. Looking forward to your help. Stage 5 Conclusion and Homework

We have learnt how to use advanced vocabulary to have more sparkle in your composition.. After class, please read more, recite more and write effectively.