Writing第二课时教学实录

观点对比类议论文写作技巧设计

最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票？请你根据下表提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。

60%的同学认为

40%的同学认为

1、不应收门票

1、应收门票，但票价不宜高

2、公园是公众休闲的地方

2、支付园林工人工资

3、如收票，需建大门、围墙，

3、购新花木

会影响城市形象

注意：

1、信的开头已为你写好。

2、词数：100左右。

3、参考词汇：门票：entrance fee Dear Editor, I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Opinions are divided on the question. 60％of the students are against the idea of entrance fee. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Changing entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What’s more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city. On the other hand, 40％

think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggest, however, fees should be charged low.

Yours truly

Li Hua 如何算是一篇好文章？

1.覆盖了所有的要点

2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇

3. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑

Clone

克隆的使用受到人们关注，人们观点不一。

支持的人认为，克隆能够帮助克隆器官治病；…

反对的认为，克隆可能会被滥用。…

我认为…

一、介绍讨论的主题(开头句)：

克隆的使用受到人们关注，人们观点不一。



我们举行了一场讨论，讨论内容是……

We had a discussion about

whether it is necessary to develop cloning. 

我们已经作了一个调查，调查内容是是否使用克隆

We’ve had a survey about whether …

There is a wide spread concern over the use

of cloning. 1.

…have different views on sth /

2.

…react to sth in different ways.

3.

…differ in their attitudes towards sth.

4.

The idea about the use of cloning vary from person to person.

1

5.

Opinions are divided on this issue. 二、介绍正方观点：

支持的人认为，克隆能够帮助克隆器官治病；…



①….of them hold the opinion that…



②….of them are in favor of the idea that…



③.People who are for / against the idea that…



④.Some people believe that…, others argue that…

三、介绍反方观点

反对的认为，克隆可能会被滥用。…



①.However, each coin has two sides. 

②.However,…of them hold the view that…



③.People who are against it hold the idea that... 

④.On the other hand,…people object that…



Others argue that …In their opinion,…

四、总结陈词

__________(总之), we should make good use of cloning. 总结: In short/brief;

In a word/all in all;

In general;

To sum up;

Generally speaking

______________(我认为) , we should use cloning…

I think/believe

In my opinion/it’s my opinion that

As far as I’m concerned

过渡词的使用

1.(因为)_____ his help, I finished the work at last. As a result of

Thanks to

Due to

Owing to

2. Cloning helps us a lot, __________（所以）we’ll make good use of it.

So

therefore

thus

as a result/consequence

3. Cloning is beneficial in treatment, __________此外, it helps in… .

moreover/furthermore

what’s more

besides

in addition/ besides

4. The young man didn’t enjoy his old job. _________(相反

) he finds the new job very interesting. But/yet/while

However,

On the contrary, 对比类写作演练模版

There is a widespread concern over the issue that…

But the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.

A majority of people hold the view that... There are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place,....in the second place, ....

People, however, differ in their opinions on this

matter. Some people hold the idea that... In their point of view, for one thing,...

For another,...

As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that... It is not only because ____, but also because ____... Cloning or not? 1.

克隆简介

2.

支持的观点

3.

反对的观点

2

4.

你的观点

3