Writing名师课堂实录

“三五”基础写作法—写对句子

从近几年尤其是2017年全国卷的书面表达模式看,基本都是(半)开放的,此类作文的审题最为关键。审题时应做到三定：①定要点；②定人称；③定时态(帮助写出正确句子)。

一

写作要先从最基本的句子抓起。“三五”基础写作口诀如下：

写

作

先

需

定 要

点 , 漂

亮

书

写

争

颜 面；

“三五”

正

确

是

关

键 , 从

句

套

路 会 出

彩。

“三五”指的是：两个一般(一般现在时，一般过去时)，两个现在(现在进行时，现在完成时)，一个将来(一般将来时) （一）

五 种 基

本

时

态的结构是: 1.

2. 3 4. 5.

（二）

五

个

变

化

规

则（三动、一名、一形\副）

1．请按要求给出下面动词的三单、过去时和过去分词或ving (1)三单stay________ fix__________ pass ________ go_________ Watch_______ finish ________ have ________ do_________ (2) 过去时和过去分词 go ________ _______ hide ______ _________ Write________ ________ admit________ _______ study _________ _______ (3)动词的.ing write ________ stop ___________ destroy__________ lie __________ die _____________ permit _____________

2.可数名词的复数 box ________ watch_______ leaf________ brush ___________ hero _________ tomato ___________ 注意：以f或fe结尾的名词变为复数时，一般直接加s， 海湾

边的

悬崖，屋顶上的

首领

、信任

、保险箱

_________ ________ , ________ ________ _________ __________ 3. 比较级和最高级

.

hard________ _________

nice

_________ ________ easy _________________ ______________ hot_________ __________ important ________________ ______________ good ________ _________ （三）万变不离其宗的五

种

基

本 句式

1 2. 3 4. 5. 二 写作实例2017 全国III卷 书面表达（满分25分）

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假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他加入，内容包括：

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1.球队活动；2.报名方式及截止日期。

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注意：

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1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Dear Eric, •

I’m

writing

to

tell you some good news . The Student Table Tennis Team of our school is looking for new members right now •

. I would like to invite you to join , since you are good at table tennis , and you are the mot suitable person. •

Our team , apart from regular training, will join in a variety of activities , such as participating in some national competitions on behalf of our school . After every game ,we will select the best players. •

If you will join , you may send your information to intlpssppt@gmschool .com. The application time is scheduled for October 5-10, 2017. •

I would appreciate it if you could reply to me at your earliest convenience.

三 写作练习 （Practice） （一）常见开头\结尾句式

英语书信开头常用语：

1.How time flies！ 2. How are you getting on with everything? 3.How nice to hear from you again. 4.I’m glad to have received your letter of... 5.I’m glad to know that you.... 6.I’m writing to thank you for your help .... 信件结尾常用语：

1.With best wishes !. / Wish you success !. 2.Looking forward to your reply.. 3.Expecting to hear from you as soon as possible. 4.I’m looking forward to your early reply. 5.I look forward to hearing from you soon. 6.I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier （二）在高考写作中如能适当地引用一些谚语，可以为文章增光添彩。

①活到老，学到老。

Never too late to learn.

②知识就是力量。

Knowledge is power.

③

患难见真情。

A friend in need is a friend indeed. ④

熟能生巧

Practice makes perfect

⑤不劳无获 No pains, no gains. ⑥失败乃成功之母 Failure is the mother of success.

。

⑺有志者事竟成 Where there is a will, there is a way. ⑻健康胜过财富。

Health is better than wealth.

（三）浑然一体的过渡

1.在我看来（I think）

In my opinion /As far as I can see/ As far as I know /As far as I am concerned/ etc. 2. 随着时间的推移 As time goes by / With time going by

3.说实话 to be honest/ to tell you the truth/ honestly speaking 4.总的来说， Generally speaking 5. 俗话说 As the saying goes

6.毫无疑问…… There is no doubt that ... 7.据说……据报道 It is said / reported / that ... 8.众所周知

（1）As everybody knows\ we all know/As is known to all(定语从句) (2)It’s known to us all that （主从）

(3) What is known to us all is that （主从和表从）

(全国高考)假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心(Learning Center)的帮助。根据学校规定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：

1．本人简介； 2．求助内容； 3．约定时间；

4．你的联系方式(Email：lihua@1236.com；Phone：12345678)。

注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3．开头和结束语已为你写好。

Dear Sir/Madam，

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________———————————————————————————————————————_ Look forward to your reply. Yours，

Li Hua 四．Sum up and homework.