Using LanguageⅡ第二课时教案

高三英语书面表达——建议信

【学习目标】

学习建议信的写法，掌握建议信的常用短语和句型，正确撰写建议信。

【学习重点】

掌握建议信的常用短语和句型。

【学习难点】

组织恰当的语言，正确撰写建议信。

【学习过程】

Step Ⅰ Lead-in 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。

Questions: What’s your advice on how to how to learn Chinese well? 短文改错

Dear Peter,

I am glad to receive your letter ask for my advice to how to learn Chinese well. Here are few suggestions. First, this is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspaper and magazines in Chinese

whenever possible.Beside, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easier. You can also make more Chinese friends. He will tell you a lot about China or help you learn Chinese.Try and write to me in Chinese the next time. Best wishes! Yours truly, Li Hua Step II Letter of advice 学习内容

1.建议信：作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。

2. 对象：

(1）写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；

(2）写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。

3. 基本框架：

开头（beginning）---- 开门见山，向对方陈述自己的观点.(state your idea) 主体(body)---- 对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，接着提出自己的建议(reasons and evidence) 结尾(ending)---- 呼应开头，重申观点(restate your opinion.) 适当运用模板

Dear **, I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _____

(引出主题).

Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to _____ . Then, it also helps to _____ . Besides, it should be a good idea to _____ . You can also _____ . (此三句不同的句式提出建议)

As to _____ , I suggest _____ (有时根据需要具体到某一反面). In addition,

(其他建议). I'm sure _____ (预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心).

I'm looking forward to _____ (表达愿望). Sincerely yours,

* * *

4. 注意事项：

(1）建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力；

(2）基本时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。

5. 常用套语

A．建议信开头常用句式 (照应材料,表明写作意图) 1. I am very glad to hear that you want to…

2. I know you have trouble in…after reading your letter

3. I am writing to share some advice/opinions with you. 4. You have asked me for some advice on … and I will try to make some suggestions. B. 表达建议（body）

1. I think it would be more beneficial if you could …

2. I would like to suggest/recommend that…

3. If I were you, I would…

4. Why not …?/ How (What) about doing …

5. In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action. 6. When it comes to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you should…

C.建议信结尾常用句式

1. I believe you will take my advice into account/ consideration. 2. I hope you will find these suggestions practical/ useful/ helpful. 3. I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions. 4. I feel that it would be beneficial if you stick to it. Step III Writing 假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom想在他的学校以“Chinese poetry”为主题举办一系列活动，他写信向你求助，请给他回信，提供至少两条建议。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

1.

审题

思考的问题

第几人称？（person）

文章的体裁是什么？

要写的文章主题是什么？

(topic) 样题分析

第一人称

一封信

为朋友举办“Chinese poetry”主题活动提供建议

怎样安排信息点的顺序？

(order) 说理逻辑性

动作是什么时候发生的？

(when) 一般现在时

2.

搜索相关词组或句型

(1）introduce the history of Chinese Poetry (2）share the different forms of poems with students (3）call on students to read more poems (4）encourage students to write some poems by themselves 3.句式

Paragraphy 1 点明写信目的

推荐句型：

I'm very glad to hear that... I'm writing to give you some advice. 非谓语结构：Knowing that... , I'm writing to give you some advice. 词汇升级：very glad = more than delighted 句型升级：可加非限定性定语从句: , which is to make the activity... 合并为疑问词+ to do结构：

I'm writing to give you some advice on how to make the activity... Paragraphy 2 列举具体建议

常见连接词

罗列观点：

Firstly, / First of all, / To begin with, / Above all, / In the first place, / On one hand, For one thing... Secondly, / Besides, / Apart from… / What’s more, / In addition, / Furthermore, / Moreover... Finally, / In the end, / At last, / Last but not least... 适当增加连接词和细节

you'd better do... as far as I'm concerned... 固定句型

It is a good idea for… to do….

It is recommended that... 4.Ask two students to write on the blackboard and correct their mistakes. Step IV Homework Revise your writing passage and rewrite it in your exercise books.