Writing Help教学实录与评析

A letter of Thanks 教学设计

Teaching Aims: 1.

How

to

get

the

students

to

write

a

letter

to

express

thanks

with the help of key words, key phrases and topic sentences.

2.

How to add details to their writing. Teaching Important Points: How to write topic sentences and add details to writing. Teaching Difficult Point: How write a standard letter of thanks. Teaching Method: Cooperative Learning & Research Teaching Procedures: Step

One:

The

Introduction

of

the

procedures

of

how

to

write

it

in Chinese. 开门见山地表明写信的目的 陈述自己的感受或对方的作用 表示自己希望有回报的机会 再次表示感谢 表达祝福

引出感谢

交代感谢的原因并感谢对方 总结对方的情意对自己的影响 提出回报对方的方式 Step Two: The Topic of the Writing Task 假定你是李华，在London游玩期间

你的英国朋友Anne招待了你。请你给她写信，表示感谢。要点如下：

1. 简述你的伦敦之行；

2.感谢她的招待；3. 邀请她来北京旅游。

参考词汇：招待 entertainment

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，

以使行文连贯。

Step

Three: The

students

work

in

groups

to

write

according

to

the guidance of the teacher. Para 2 topic sentence Have a good time have fun What did you do in London? Students discuss and make a list of the famous sights in London. Big Ben 大本钟 London Tower 伦敦塔

London Tower Bridge伦敦塔桥 The River Thames 泰晤士河 The British Museum 大英博物馆

Para 3 topic sentence invite sb. to do sth. 邀请某人做某事

What will you do to thank her? make sb. at home 让某人宾至如归

show sb. around 带领某人参观 places of interest 名胜古迹

Students discuss and make a list of the famous sights in Beijing. The Great Wall 长城 Tian’an men Square 天安门广场

The Heaven Temple 天坛 The Summer Palace 颐和园

The Forbidden City 紫禁城

Step Four: Groups choose a member to show their writings . Step

Five

: The

teacher

makes

comments

on

their

writings

and summarizes the main contents in this class. Step Six: Homework 1.

Take notes on how to write a letter of thanks. 2.

Finish their writings.