WritingPPT专用课堂实录内容

Letters---- Asking for Help I. Teaching aims:

1.Students are able to organize a passage about asking for help and find the key points.

2.Students are able to improve their ability to make correct simple sentences. II. Teaching key and difficult points:

1. To teach the students to master the skills of writing. 2. Let the students know how to write a letter about asking for help correctly. III. Teaching procedures: Step1 Lead-in

Task 1: Enjoy a short video Task 2: Listen and fill in the blanks

Dear teacher,

My name is Li Hua. How’s it going? I have some_______ in learning English, so I’m writing a letter to ask you to give me a hand.

_______, I find our texts full of new words that are very difficult for me to remember. _______, the texts are too long for me to understand. ____

_________ , grammar is also very difficult to learn. I meet so much difficulty that I have to ask you for some help. Would you like to introduce some _______ _______ to learn new words so that I can remember them easily? What’s more, I’d like you to tell some ______ to learn grammar.

I’m sure that I can make great progress in my English study with your help. I’m looking forward to your ______ .

Yours,

Li Hua Step2 Pre-writing: analyzing a passage: Task 1: Make clear of the structure of this passage and fill in the blanks: Type of writing：

Person：

_______________

_______________

Tense：

_______________ Key points：

Helps: How to find the key points quickly?

求

Greeting

Background

My problems

The Help I need

Express thanks _____________ 助信

_____________ ___________1 __

Task 2: Match the sentences on the right side with topics on the left one.

Greeting

Background

My problems

The Help I need

Express thanks

Step3 While writing 【2016 全国卷Ⅰ】

假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外资公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历(résumé /'rеzəmeI/ )。给外教Ms Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。

注意：

1.词数100左右。

2.可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。

Task 1: Organize the passage :

1). Type of writing：_______________

2). Tense：_______________ 3). Person：_______________ 4). Structure：

Paragraph 1 _______________________

Paragraph 2 _______________________

Paragraph 3 _______________________

2 Dear teacher,

My name is Li Hua. How’s it going? I have some trouble in learning English, so I’m writing a letter to ask you to give me a hand.

First, I find our texts full of new words that are very difficult for me to remember. Second, the texts are too long for me to understand. In addition, grammar is also very difficult to learn. I meet so much difficulty that I have to ask you for some

help. Would you like to introduce some good ways to learn new words so that I can remember them easily? What’s more, I’d like you to tell some rules to learn grammar.

I’m sure that I can make great progress in my English study with your help. I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua

Task 2:Make a mind map

Make a List of the words you may use in your passage

Task 3: Write a passage.

Greeting My problems Words&Phrases Back- ground The Help

I need Express thanks ________________________________________________________________ Beginning ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________Body ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ending ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ 3

Step4 Post-writing：

Enjoy a version. Step5 Summary 1. How to organize a letter of asking for help ? 2. What should you pay attention to when you write a letter of asking for help? Step6 Homework Finish your passage and correct it . _______________________________________________________________________________________

附：

一、常用词汇

1. 做某事有麻烦

have trouble/difficulty/problems (in) doing sth.

2. 给某人帮助help/do sb. a favor/give sb. a hand 3. 寻求帮助ask for help 4. 遇到一些问题meet/encounter some problems

5. 面临困难be faced with difficulty 二、求助信常用句式：

求助信开头的表达句式：

1. I’m writing to ask (for help/get some help/whether you can give me help). 2. I’m sorry that I have to ask a favor of you, with the hope that you will be kind to help me.

3. Sorry to bother you but I really get some problems recently.

描述困难的经典句式

1. But I have met some difficulty with/in ......

2. But unfortunately, I have met difficulty in...... 3. Faced with/Facing so much difficulty, I have to ask you for some help.

4. It’s really hard for me to decide/deal with ......

表达希望得到帮助的句型

1. Expecting your writing back soon. 2. Looking forward to/Hoping for your early reply. 3. Your kind early reply will be highly appreciated. 4. I wonder if you can help me with these difficulty. I really appreciate it if you could help me. 5. I believe I will benefit a lot from your valuable and timely advice. 6.I am sure with your help I can make great progress. 7. Can you manage to give me some constructive guidance? 8. I sincerely hope to get your reply as soon as possible. 三、求助信常用模板

Dear__________,

My name is ___________. I’m _______.

I have met much difficulty in________________. To begin with, ___________. In addition,

___________. What’s worse/Worse still, _________.

Faced with/Facing so much difficulty, I have to turn to you for help. Would you like to ___________ so that/in order that ________________? In the meanwhile/Meanwhile, ___________. Also, I would like you to __________ to ________.

I’m sure that I can ________ with your help./I will be much appreciated if you help me to ________.

Thank you for your time.

Yours, ______

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