Reading(2)：The search for happiness公开课教案

我的探究课---改错与作文

黔阳一中

段维成

授课流程：改错（自主学习、合作）-----背诵万人迷-----写作（自主写作、改错、范文比较）-----德育渗透

方法：1）改错1818原则 2）仿写+创写

目的：1)提高速读及改错能力 2）借鉴阅读提高写作 3）背诵、迁移运用能力

Step 1短文改错（10个错误，注意标准改法）

How time flies! However, I won’t forget that embarrassed moment of my life, which impressed me most.

When I was in the second grades, I was asked to take one part in a speech competition in behalf of our class. It was not my first time to perform on the stage, so I think it was a piece of cake for me. As a result, I didn’t get prepared for it. Finally, the day came. The first four students gave excellent speeches, which made my heart beat fast. Then it was my turn. I went on stage with my leg trembling, blank in mind, complete forgetting I was going to talk about. All that they could do was stare at the audience. The whole crowd burst into laughter, or suddenly I felt my face turned red. I can’t remember how I got off the stage. I was not surprised

to come last in the competition.

What an embarrassing moment it is ,from which I benefit a lot . Not only does it broaden my horizons, but also it teaches me an useful lesson---“Attitude is altitude.”

Step 2 阅读探宝

找经典句子（万人迷)------利用疯狂英语方法：反反复复背诵“万人迷”

◆1、I will not forget that embarrassing moment of my life, which impressed me most.

◆2、What an embarrassing moment it is ,from which I benefit a lot .

◆3、Not only does it broaden my horizons, but also it teaches me a useful lesson---“Attitude is altitude.”

Step 3 Practise writing

Practise:选作题：(二选一）争取运用“万人迷”

1）以what is happiness为题写100词左右的文章。

要点：1、说明幸福的原因

2、事例证明

3、给你什么启示

2) 黔阳一中英语角将举行英语作文比赛，要求如下：人生经历多多，有失败的，有学习的，有成功的.....，你选择其一话题，写100词左右的文章参加比赛。

Step 4

Thoughts

1)Nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.

2)Sharing happiness is double happiness!

改错答案：

embarrassed---embarrssing

grades--grade

one划去

in--on think--thought

complete--completely

+what

they---I

or---and

an-a

参考范文

1）以what is happiness为题写100词左右的文章。

要点：1、说明幸福的原因

2、事例证明

3、给你什么启示

What is happiness? There is no standard answer. To me, happiness is to share with others.

It was a cold afternoon, raining heavily. Without an umbrella to shelter me from rain, I had to stand still under the roof, waiting for my father. After some time, my father arrived . I was about to rush home when I found my English teacher waiting for the rain stop. Without hesitation, I went towards her and gave my umbrella to her happily. “Thanks. But you need it , too.”

“

I can share an umbrella with my father.”

said I. Seeing her walking home with my umbrella, I smiled happily.

What a meaningful and instructive experience it is! Not only does it make me feel the close relationship between teachers and students, but also it teaches me a valuable saying----Sharing happiness is double happiness!

2) 黔阳一中英语角将举行英语作文比赛，要求如下：人生经历多多，有失败的，有学习的，有成功的.....，你选择其一话题，写100词左右的文章参加比赛。

How time flies! However, I will not forget the experience of learning swimming , which impressed me most.

I really envied other kids who swam freely in the cool water. However, no matter how hard I struggled in the water, I could hardly keep my body floating in the river. Too many failures made me convinced that it was impossible for me to swim. Seeing that, Li hua, a good swimmer, tried his best to remove my discouragement and taught me how to breathe and move my arms and legs. I swam and swam, as the saying goes “Practice makes perfect.” Finally, it paid off.

What an instructive experience it is ,from which I benefit a lot. Not only does it improve my skills , but also it teaches me a valuable lesson--- Nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.