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如何写著作评论（教案）

授课教师：台师高级中学

郑雅伊

班级：高三9班

时间：2019年1月8日

星期三

第八节

地点：高三9班教室

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教材分析

本单元是学习著名著作，学生通过对这单元的知识点较感兴趣，因为平时他们的阅读量较广，学了之后学生写评论可以加深学生对内容的理解。本单元的课后写作就是针对这个内容设计的。

二、学情分析

随着年龄的增长，高中学生已经具备了一定的生活阅历，能够对各种生活现象加以分析和说明，已接触了不少的课外书籍。在学习了本单元的内容后，已经掌握了评论一本著作和文章的基本方法与技能。因为感兴趣，所以学生下笔如有神。

三、教学目标

1、知识与技能

①掌握阅读的技能和方法。

②学会理解分析小说和人物著作，并学会运用。 2、过程与方法：

培养和提升学生阅读，解决问题的能力。

3、情感态度与价值观：

①经历阅读的基本过程，体验阅读的快乐。

②在老师的指导下，与同学共同探究问题，体验阅读的乐趣。

四、教学重点

①培养学生的阅读能力

②让学生具备分析和解决问题的能力。

五、教学难点

①学生深入理解并运用阅读技巧

②按要求完成著作评论。

六．教学过程

六．教学过程

1.让学生先看《鲁滨孙漂流记》述评

例子

内容提示：《滨孙漂流记》是英国小说家丹尼尔笛福

Daniel Defoe0写的出部著名小说。请根据下列要点写一篇简短的述评

（1)该书出版于1719年，它是一本最流行的历险小说。(2)简述小说故事的主要情节

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（3）该书部分是根18世纪苏格当水手AendSelkirk的事迹写的（4）小说描写细致，引人入胜。

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参考词汇：

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self-sufficient

a自给自足cannibal n食人肉者《鲁滨孙漂流记》

Robinson Crusoe

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This is a novel written by the English author Daniel Defoe, published in 1719. It is one

of the most popular adventure novels in all literature. It is the story of Robinson Crusoe

an Englishman who is shipwrecked on a lonely tropical island. He builds himself a hut, grows his own food, and beomes self-sufficient. After 23 years he meets with a group of cannibals and rescues one of their prisoners, a young native whom he calls Friday. Crusoe and his "man Friday become close friend sand when they are finally rescued four years later. both return to England Robinson Crusoe is partly based on the actual deeds of Alexander Selkirk, an 18th century Scottish sailor who spent almost five years alone on a desert island. This novel is famous for its lovely details and its expressions of belief in mans’

belief in man’s ability when left al

one in nature.

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2.分析这篇文章的亮点

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（1）.本文结构符合评论的写法，一文两段，有介绍，有评论。

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（2）所用高级句式This is a novel written by the English author Daniel Defoe, published in1719.(非谓语动词的使用) •

It is .Robinson Crusoe，

an Englishman(同位语)weshipwrecked on(定语从句)

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and when they are finally rescued four years later. both returnto England(并列复合句)。

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（3. meet with. be based on. leave alone等短语

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评论可以对人，事，书，电影等进行评论，一般包括以下几个方面：

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1.用1-2个简短的段客做下介绍：书评，要说明作者的姓名书名以反书的内容，小说，要说明作者的姓名小说名以及简要情等

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2.说出你的看法:包括你喜欢还是不喜欢的理由。对其开头、结尾、人物的语言、行为等的看法。你看后的感觉是否要向其他人推荐等，评论要有自己的真情实感

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3.评论一般多用现在时态。

评完亮点之后，给学生20分钟来练习写下面的这篇。

3.专题练习

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《麦琪的礼物》是O.Henry写的篇短篇小说:文中一对断婚夫只有两件值钱的东西，丈夫的金表，妻子的那一头美丽的长发。在圣诞节来临之际，妻子为了给丈夫买礼物，卖掉了自己的长发。给丈失买了金表链；而丈夫却把金表卖了，为妻子买了她非常喜欢的一套梳子。请你为这篇小说写一篇100词左右的评论。参考词汇:《麦琪的礼物》

The Gift of the Magi

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参考范文：

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They are a new couple They have only two valuables. One is the husband’s

gold watch, the other the wife’s long beautiful hair. But with Christmas coming, they

want to buy presents for each other; something that can match their beloved. So the wife bought her husband a gold watch chainwith the money from her hair, while the usband sold thewatch and bought a set of combs for his wife.

“It is not surprising that The Gift of the Magi still enjoys such widespread fame, for in this moving little tale of mutual self-sacrifice between husband and wife, O. Henry presented dramatically what the fundamental value in ordinary family life is. Unselfish love is shared, regardless of the difficulties .Few stories of ordinary family life in tenderness and universal appeal the qualities found in The Gift of the Magi.”such widmutualhat the fundamental value in ordinary famildramaticall. life is. Unselfish love is shared, regardless of the difficultiesFew stories of ordinary family life in tenderness and universal appeal the qualities found in The Gift of the Magi

教学反思：学生在写的时候还不是很深入，句型上需要进一步提高。