Writing课时教学实录

对口高职英语作文复习导学案

English composition writing

一．学习目标

At the end of this lesson, students should be able to: (1)

Learn some useful linking words and sentence patterns to beautify their essay. (2)

Learn how to write an essay in English style.

(3)

Summarize the five points to make high marks in composition writing. 二．学习重难点：

（1）重点：过渡词；万能句式的运用。

（2）难点：汉式写作向英式写作的思维转换。

三．学法指导

高考倒计时50天作文提分的五大秘诀：

（1）

卷面：clean and clear. （2）

分段：体现行文逻辑，减缓阅卷老师视觉疲倦。

（3）

遣词造句：

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造句（英语写作无生词）：“鬼话”

“人话”

“英语”

“神话”

练习(一)：1，老头儿晒太阳。

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2，教室里来了很多老师。

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3,Alisa紧张得手发抖。

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4,我们应该好好和她配合。

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i i 升级：添词;换词；句式更换（巧用万能句式）

eg. （1）添词：

Undoubtedly 的添加：助动词，系动词，情态动词之后，实意动词之前。

（2）换词：

Should do sth

=ought to do sth

=be supposed to do sth

=why not do sth

=It is high time that you did sth

=If I were you,I would do sth

=It is beneficial for you to so sth

(3)巧用万能句

It is clear that…很明显…(清)

It is obvious that…很明显…(明)

There is no doubt that…毫无疑问…（疑）

No one can deny…不容否认（否）

Needless to say…不用说（不用）

It goes without saying that…不言而喻…（走）

…，for the reason that…

…,因为…/

…;as a result, …（4）

过渡词

;所以，

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练习（二）：请运用过渡词的知识将练习（一）的句子雕琢成一段话。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (5) 内容要点

i “全”（若少要点，则按挡扣分！）

i i “简”（将汉语文采简化，只需把话说清楚！）

练习（三）：

假如你是李华,以前的英语老师sue wood,已返美任教,请给她写封电子邮件,

要点：1，表达对她的感谢之意。

2，介绍她离开后班内情况。

3，希望了解她近况。

要求：不少于100词。

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片段练习(将要点1扩展成一段话) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Homework _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 作文自评标准：

Whether the essay is divided into three parts. Whether there are transitional expressions or not. Whether there are mistakes on following aspects:

punctuation (标点), capital letter (大小写), single forms or plural forms of nouns(名词单复数), subject-verb agreement(主谓一致), tense(时态), and so on.

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