Learning about Language教案3

短文改错教学案

教学重点：短文改错口诀

教学难点：非谓语动词，句子成分分析

短文改错口诀

动词形，名词数；

注意形和副；

非谓动词细辨别；

代词格，细领悟；冠词连词常光顾；习惯用法要记住；

句子成分多分析；

逻辑错误须关注。

一、动词形

1.动词的时态和语态错误. 2. 主、谓不一致的错误。

高考链接１：

When the air move, we have wind.

move改为moves 二、名词数

指名词单、复数形式的用法错误。

高考链接2：

We write to each other all the times.

times. 改为time 三、还要注意形和副

１．修饰名词，be动词，系动词要用形容词

２．修饰动词，形容词，过去分词，整个句子用副词

３．比较级和最高级的使用

高考链接３：

It is still hardly for me to write in English.

hardly改为hard 四、非谓语，细辨别

不定式符号to的多余与遗漏

现在分词与过去分词混用

高考链接4

Li Ming came see me every day.

came后加to

五、

代词格，细领悟

1．人称代词，物主代词的使用．

２．反身代词oneself 的使用．

３．人称代词的主格和宾格．

４．不定代词的使用．

５．Both,

all,

either,

neither,

none的使用. 6.

Whose 和who’s，

its和

it’s的区别．

高考链接5：

I heard that Mr. Wang would teach our English this term. our 改为us 六、冠词连词常光顾

１. 冠词a,

an和the的用法错误．

２．连词but，and，or, so和although的用法错误．

高考链接６：

What a good news we’ve heard.

去掉a

2. I’m sorry, and I won’t be able to come tonight . and 改为but 七、介词短语须关注，习惯用法要记住．主要考查固定短语，固定介词的搭配。

高考链接7：

The man is sitting next his son. next 后加to 八、句子成分多分析

不同的句子成分要用不同的词类；不同的语境要选择不同的词语。只有对句子结构和成分作细致的分析，才能找出用词不当的错误。

高考链接8

She looked at me and started to laugh. “How are you laughing?”

I asked.

How 改为Why 九、逻辑错误须关注

与句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，属于逻辑性错误，如称谓上的张冠李戴。

Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurt my foot.

while 改为

when

Four points that you should pay attention to ①标点符号不改. ②大小写不改. ③词序错误不改. ④在纲外生词不改(带汉语注释的词).

Exercise 1

The Dragon Boat Festival has a history of over 2,000 years.There are many tales about their origin.The most popular is that the festival is celebrated in honor of Qu Yuan.Qu Yuan was more concerned about his country but was not understanding by the rulers. Feeling desperately, he jumped into the Miluo River on the 5th day of the 5th lunar month,278 BC. Before he died, the fishermen sailed their boats to look up for his body.People throw zongzi into the water, hoping to keep possible fish attacking his body.That's because people later celebrate the festival through such activity as dragon boat racing and eating zongzi on that special day. Exercise 2 With the development of science and technology,intelligent robots will be wide used in the future.In families,robots will help people do some housework and taking care of the elderly, babies and patients. In addition to these task, robots will even be able to play the chess and do exercise with people.In factories,robots will be used to perform some dangerous jobs avoid accidents. Robots will change our future life by many ways, what will make it more colorful and comfortable. Therefore , we shouldn’t depend on intelligent robots too much, for they were. made to help humans rather than replace us. As helpers of we humans, robots should be used properly.