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A Teaching Design for Writing

课题

Writing 西安市长安区第一中学

雷娜

课型

教学时数

新授课

1 选用教材

教学目的

人教新课标选修八Unit 3

本节课是一节以训练学生思维为主导的探究性写作课，目的是要让学生掌握如何写一封申请信。通过学生自主学习、合作探究、教师点拨、归纳总结等过程帮助学生寻找到申请信的写作方法。同时让学生运用课堂所学的知识，小组内合作完成写作任务，并通过自我评价、生生互评和师生互评学会如何修改一篇作文来使之更加完善。最终把学生独立写作作为作业来呈现，以达到学有所用，以学致用的目的。在这堂课中，教师仅仅是提出问题、提示思路的导演，学生才是课堂的主角。所以应以学生的课堂表现和最终是否通过独立思考和小组合作来呈现作文来评判这节课的价值。

教学难点

文章框架的确定和相关写作要素的积累

教学重难点

教学重点

发现申请类信件的写作要素和方法

三维目标

知识与技能

帮助学生了解和应聘工作相关的表达，发现并掌握申请类信件的写法，提高学生的写作能力和自主学习能力。

过程与方法

通过思考、讨论、总结、写作、修改、评价、再总结等一系列自主合作和过程性写作，启发学生们从材料中找方法，从讨论中促进步。

情感、态度

让学生们初步认识应聘工作这一社会活动；与此同时，通过学生与价值观

的小组合作和探讨，激发学生的写作兴趣，提高学习的热情。

教学方法

探究法、交际法教学、任务型教学、小组合作的体验式和过程性写教学策略制作模式。

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教学工具

黑板、多媒体课件、教材

教学过程设计

Teaching procedure Lead-in:

Question: What kind of job do you want to do in the future? Several pictures about a job hunting: What’s in their hands? Purpose

To arise the interest of students and lead in the topic------a letter of application

Step One: Lead-in

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1.

Guessing game

Give each group a sheet which has a description on it. Let students guess: what kind of job does he/she apply for?

A My name is LiHua. I studied in Xi’an Jiaotong University and graduated this summer. I like computer and English best and I am very Through a good at them. Last year, I won first prize in the school computer guessing competition. I want very much to devote my life to computer game let engineering. students B have a I am Zhanghong, female. I was born on July 4, 1980 in Qingdao and sense of graduated from Qingdao Teachers’ College in July 1999. I have application learned English for twelve years. I am good at listening and spoken letter and Step Two English. I’m patient and can get along well with others.

help them Pre-writing

C find out the I’m Wangjing, a world champion in pingpong. I began to play necessary pingpong at the age of seven. I trained hard and have won scores of information gold medals in international table-tennis games and won great honour that may be for our homeland. To train more excellent athletes is my ambition. used in D writing in My name is Fangwei. I once worked in Jianguo Hotel for three years. I the next like singing and dancing. Besides, I can cooperate with others well. In part

my spare time, I have studied Business Management and practise speaking English. I think I’m qualified as a duty manager.

Answers: A. Computer engineer B. English teacher C. Pingpong coach D. Duty manager

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Step Three Writing

To find out some common information for application

letter and

prepare for

their

writing

To let 3. Let’s read and find Read the model on page 27 and find out some useful writing skills students from it. (any aspect is accepted) find out how

to write an

application

letter by

themselves

To guide the 1. Let’s practise

Will you be my TA(teacher’s assistant)? students Writing Task: Write a letter to your English teacher, telling her that learn to you want to be a TA of English subject. (100 words) evaluate Let students cooperate with group members to finish the letter with their instructions. After that, ask the students to evaluate their writing, and writing and then present 1 or 2 in the class. let them be Guide students to find out the merits and shortcomings of other aware of group’s writing and think together to make the writing a better one.

their

advantages

and

disadvantag

es in writing

To develop 2. Let’s polish Discuss in groups to polish your writing. You may change some words students’

and sentences if necessary. (use a red pen) ability to Evaluate their writing again and then present 1 or 2 in the class. Guide polish their the students to find out their improvements they have made by looking writing and at their own revisions . let them

have a

knowledge

of the

criteria of a

good essay

2. Let’s brainstorm What information should be included in an application letter? (based on the descriptions) Let students discuss in groups and the representative write down their ideas on the blackboard, and teacher will guide students to conclude together.

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1. Summary

Let students think about what they have learned in this class:

Did I enjoy the class?

Have I learned some writing skills?

Have I participated in group discussions politely and helpfully?

I have made progress in ______________________________

I need to improve in _________________________________

Step Four Post-writing

2. Teacher’s words to students: My dear students, Rome is not built in a day! You can not master all writing skills in just one class. Keep trying , and you'll gain confidence and pleasure from learning.

Remember, practice makes perfect!

Show the homework on the screen and also by speaking Individual writing:

(Use what we have learned today) Step Five The editor of 21st Century Newspaper wants to employ some high Homework

school students as part-time journalists. Write an application letter to him to ask for a job.

A Letter of Application

Information may include:

What we find: Group 1

Purpose: apply for a job

Structure: 板书设计

Part 1 Beginning Group 2

Personal details

Part 2 Body Group 3

Work experience

Part 3 Ending Group 4

To let students summarize what they have learned in this class and have a clear mind about their learning today

To stimulate the interest of writing and give them confidence to learn English

To consolidate the writing skills learned from the class

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本节课是一节以训练学生思维为主导的探究性写作课，目的是让学生掌握申课后反思

请信的写作方法。我设计的思路是想让学生经历自主学习、合作探究、教师点拨、归纳总结等过程寻找到申请信的写作方法并通过自我评价、生生互评和师生互评学会如何修改一篇作文来使之更加完善，最后把独立写作作为作业布置下去。以达到学有所用，以学致用的目的。反思这节课，我觉得有以下几点值得自己在以后的教学过程中继续实施和发扬：

1. 授人以鱼不如授人以渔。本课注重培养学生运用自主思考策略和小组合作策略从所给素材及课本范文中获取信息，引导学生学会学习、学会发现。通过过程性写作教学，使学生初步了解写作该类作文的基本步骤和方法，激发学生的写作兴趣，促进学生学习习惯的养成。为了避免传统写作教学当中存在的学生语言积累不够，感到难无从下笔的情况，我力求从多方面整合教材，大胆改革，实现写作的快乐化、高效化，并为学生的思考、讨论、构思、写作过程、修改及评价进行有效策略指导。

2. 教学环节层次分明，环环相扣，前后统一，共同服务于教学目标。从课前导入，到写guessing game环节后的归纳总结，到阅读课本范文的探索发现，到小组合作完成写作模板并修改润色，到课后作业使用课堂所学独立写作，每一个环节都为了让学生通过合作式体验和过程性写作感知英语申请信作文的写作特点，并模仿范文进行了写作训练，最终达到提高学生此类体裁的书面表达能力的目的。

3. 打破传统，考虑学生的实际情况，力求让各个水平的学生体验成功的快乐。充分考虑到我们学生的现状，我把课堂上传统的individual writing变成了cooperative writing,把个人独立写作当做作业布置下去，从而和课堂上的学习形成一个整体，体现了以学致用。这样做一方面消除了一些原本英语水平较弱的同学的自卑心理，让他们敢于探讨，敢于参与，敢于表达自己想法，另一方面通过小组合作，，使程度较弱学生知道怎样构思、怎样下笔写一篇作文以及怎样的作文是一篇好的作文，从哪些方面入手，最后以小组的形式呈现，这激发了学生的学习兴趣，调动了学习的积极性，尊重了不同智力类型的学生，让更多学生体验到了学习的成功和快乐，让他们爱上学习、爱上写作。

4. 侧重学生的自主合作学习。自主合作学习模式是经过专家论证的高效学习模式，有利于学生改变传统的被动接受的学习方式而采用积极主动的、参与式和合作式的英语学习方式，发挥自己的学习潜能，提高学习效率。从写前的guessing game 到brainstorming，从阅读文本发现写作要素到共同合作完成作文，从组内探讨修改文章到小组之间互相评价，自主合作学习充分的发挥了它的积极作用，实现了课堂的有效教学，促进了学生能力的发展。

当然，课堂是一个不断追求卓越的平台，对这节课我也有感觉遗憾，有待继续完善的地方。首先，对课堂临时出现的情况未能有效处理，例如在学生黑板上呈现讨论结果的过程中，有的小组写的答案超出了表格所给范围，导致板书布局有些偏差。其实，学生能想到更多的personal information是值得表扬与鼓励的，虽然在形式上影响了板书的美观，但对于课堂来说，就并不重要了。其次，在教学过程中，由于考虑课堂时间的关系，我最后的修改后作文呈现略显着急，节奏有点赶。总之在自己的教学中，我还存在者很多不足，在今后的教学中，我会不断的超越自己，更好的提高自己的教学水平，服务于全体学生。

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附：Evaluation Form(作文评价表) Items

structures

Criteria

1. Structure is clear(beginning, middle, end).

2. Ideas are well organized.

Language

1. Spell the words correctly. 2. Use linking words properly. 3. Make no grammar mistakes(esp. verbs). Before A

After B C A B C

4. Employ beautiful advanced words and

expressions. 5. Use varieties of sentence patterns. Handwriting Neat, beautiful, easy to read.

A: excellent

B: satisfactory

C:

need improvement

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