Writing优秀获奖教案

Reading makes a full man, conference a ready man, and writing an exact man. 读书使人充实，讨论使人机敏，写作使人严谨。——培根

英语书面表达经典集

（一）

Notice

Attention, please! I have an announcement（宣布）to make.

The boys in our class will have a football match with Class Two on the playground of our school. Girls of our class should prepare drinking water for them in advance （提前）, which you can buy in the supermarket of the school. Our head teacher班主任

will also go to watch the football match at that time, so all the girls are wished to watch it.

That’s all. Thank you.

书信类

（二）

Dear Bill,

I’ve heard from you. I know you want to visit China. That’s a good idea. As you know, Beijing is the capital of China. It has a long history and there are many places of interest: the Great Wall, the Imperial Palace, the Summer Palace and so on. Summer and autumn is the best time to come here. You can go surfing in Dalian or Qingdao, the waves there are terrific. You can also visit Hainan, where the weather is always warm, no matter in summer or in winter, so you can go scuba diving. I think you’ll have a good time.

I hope you’ll come soon and wish you have a lot of fun.

Yours,

Wang Qing

（三）

Dear Peter, 写信格式

I’m really glad to learn that you will visit China next week. You know I have been expecting to see you for a long time. Here I will show you how to get to my house.信的开头

When you arrive at the airport到达机场, the best way to get to my house is to take a No.6 bus. Get off the bus until it arrives at Dongfang Square. Then you can walk along Shengli Street to the west. It will take you about 5 minutes to get to Xinhua Bookstore. Then please turn right into Anle Road and take the second turning on the left在第二个十字路口左转. You will see my house on the right. Opposite to my house is a park. I am sure you will not miss it.

I’m looking forward to seeing you soon.结束语

（四）

Dear Shirley, 写信格式

Thank you for your last letter.信的开头

You asked me to tell you something about my hobby. Football is my favorite. I am a football fan and enjoy football matches very much. Besides, I have joined our school football team and we practice three times a week. Although there is still a long

1 way to go before I become a professional专业的

player, I will insist on坚持

my dream. You know my favourite player is Mike Owen, a real football star, so I will keep on继续

learning from him.

Playing football really benefits me a lot使我受益匪浅. Not only can I keep healthy保持健康, but also I can make many friends and learn how to get along with others. Do you want to join us?

I’m looking forward to hearing from you.结束语

Yours,

（五）

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m writing to apply for申请

the position职位

on the notice. I am confident that I am suitable for适合的

the job.

My name is Tony and I’m 17 years old. I’m outgoing and friendly so I can get along well with相处

children. I have lots of hobbies in my free time, such as reading, listening to music, swimming and so on. If I can be one of your members, I will tell interesting stories and play sports with kids. Besides, I have learned

piano for 6 years so I’m capable有能力的

enough to teach children music.

I’m sure I’m the right one you are looking for. Look forward to your reply答复.

Yours Sincerely,

Tony

发言稿

（六）

Dear friends, 发言稿称呼

I’m very glad to introduce myself to you发言稿开头. My name is Zhang Bin. I’m fifteen years old and from Hangzhou--- the City of Heaven. I like drawing very much. During my free time, I take part in many different kinds of activities过渡句, such as going camping , drawing pictures of birds and enjoying the singing of birds in nature. Though I have lots of hobbies过渡句, what I want to do most in the future is to become a biologist when I grow up. Because I want to help people have a better understanding of nature and live with nature in harmony使文章更顺畅充实. Let’s do our best to make the earth a better place to live on.

It’s my honor to stand here to be with you过渡语. I hope in the following days we can learn from each other and become good friends.

That’s all. Thank you for listening. 结束语

（七）

Dear Miss Lucy,

My name is Li Lei, on behalf of代表

our president, welcome to our school. I’d like to tell you the weather here.

In a word, the weather in our city is comfortable for living. The weather in spring is similar to

Reading makes a full man, conference a ready man, and writing an exact man. 读书使人充实，讨论使人机敏，写作使人严谨。——培根

the weather in autumn, and they are the best seasons to have an outgoing郊游. The average temperature平均温度

is 18 degrees. However, it’s quite hot in summer, so you’d better bring some sunscreen防晒霜

to protect yourself from the sunlight. Besides, don’t forget to bring warm coat,

gloves and scarves because it’s really cold in winter. Swimming and making snowmen are good ways to relax ourselves in summer and in winter.

I hope my introduction can give you some help. I can‘t wait to see you. 希望尽快见到你。

Yours,

（八）How to use the class library

Good afternoon, everybody. We’ve had our own library in the class. It can help us to improve促进

our English and other subjects. So in order to为了

make good use of好好利用

it, we make some rules about it.

Firstly, we can only borrow one book at a time每次. Secondly, each time we can only keep the book for one week, and pay attention to returning注意归还

it in time及时. Thirdly, we should take good care of 好好照顾books, and don’t lend them to others. Finally, I hope that we can follow these rules遵守这些规则. Thank you!

Li Lei

the library and the playground everyday to make sure确保

we are living in a healthy environment.

Let’s work together to create创造

a clean school. I believe your contribution counts我相信你的贡献是值得的

十

请假条

Dear Mr Cheng,

I’m very sorry to write and tell you that I cant’ go to school today. It rained hard yesterday, but I didn’t take my umbrella with me so I was caught in the rain淋雨

on my way home. I got a cold. This morning, I felt quite uncomfortable. My mother took my temperature量体温

and found that I got a fever. She took me to see the doctor, and the doctor said I had to stay in bed for 2 days.

Now I’m writing to you to ask for two-day sick leave请两天病假.

Your student,

Li Hua

人物类

十一

My best partner

Dick was my deskmate in my middle school. We were partners for 2 years. Though we are now in different schools, our friendship won’t change.

Dick is an intelligent智慧的

boy who is good at all subjects. He often helped me with my English. Thanks to多亏了

him, I have made great progress取得很大进步. Besides, Dick is friendly, outgoing and helpful. When I had some difficulty/ trouble in my daily life, he was always the first one to comfort安慰

me and give me some good idea. In my view, Dick is an excellent boy. He not only does well in study, but also has a gift for有天赋

sports. Swimming, running, and playing basketball动名词做主语

are his favourites.

As for me , he is more a model than与其说…，不如说… a deskmate. I will keep on learning from him and become as wonderful as him.

十二

Dear Miss Wang,

I am writing to recommend推荐

Linda as作为

our monitor班长. Firstly, She is friendly, easy-going and always ready to help others. Besides, Linda is a humorous girl who has a gift for speech, so I think she can get on well with the whole class.

Secondly, she does well in her study but never shows off炫耀. In this way, she can be our model榜样

in study. Thirdly, Linda is energetic精力充沛的

and patient耐心的

enough to deal with all kinds of class affairs班级事务. In a word, I think Linda is best suitable one to be our moniotr.

Yours,

Li Ming 2 倡议书

(九) 写给全校师生

语气相对委婉

Dear teachers and schoolmates,

We are sorry to see so much waste in our school. We often see some students leave the lights on when they leave and leave the water running after washing hands. In the classroom, we often see a lot of paper is wasted. At the dining hall餐厅, most students can’t eat up吃光

their meals and then just throw away.

Wasting can be seen everywhere in our school. In order to save energy节能

and make the best use of 充分利用school supplies学习用品, I suggest let’s make good rules and form a good habit of saving.

Let’s work hand in hand携手; Let’s do it from now on.

（十

）

Keep our school clean

Good afternoon, everyone!

As students, it’s our duty to keep our studying environment学习环境

clean and tidy. A clean and comfortable school is good for our study. Here I have some suggestions to share with you.与你分享

Firstly, don’t

spit吐痰

or throw litter扔垃圾

everywhere, as因为

keeping clean is as important as cleaning itself. Secondly, It’s not good to draw on the wall. Thirdly, clean the classroom,

Reading makes a full man, conference a ready man, and writing an exact man. 读书使人充实，讨论使人机敏，写作使人严谨。——培根

说明文

十三

Save water

As we know, water is the origin起源

of life. Without water, we human beings can’t survive生存

on the earth. So it is of great importance to make the best use of water.

Water plays an vital生死攸关的

role in all aspects方面, such as washing, cooking, farming, industry工业

and so on. If there were no water, we couldn’t brush teeth, wash face, cook meals, and do showering; if there were no water, plants and animals would die and we would starve to death饿死; if there were no water, nothing would be possible. So I really can’t imagine the life without water.

In order to protect water, let’s make some rules.

First and the most important ,recycle循环

water and make full of it. That is to say, you can use the water to clean floor or toilets after you washing clothes. Besides, don’t pollute污染

water. In a word, saving water depends on you and me.

Have you ever heard of endangered濒危的

wild animals ? Some animals, such as tigers and pandas, are in danger due to human beings. People hunt wild animals for their fur皮毛, meat and bones to make money. Besides, many of their habitats栖息地

are destroyed摧毁

by mankind人类

to build factories.

However, we human beings人类

can’t live on the earth without any animals or plants. So we must protect them in order to make the world more harmonious和谐的. The government should make laws to punish惩罚

those who kill endangered animals. As students, we can plant trees and call on more people to take part in this project. As long as we pay great attention to protecting wild animals, they can survive生存

on the earth and benefit利于

us.

十七

On the Internet The Internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life. It brings us great convenience便利

and benefit利益. On the net, we can learn news both at home and abroad国内外

and all kinds of useful information as well. We can also send messages by e-mail, make phone calls, go to net schools, read various kinds of books and learn foreign languages.

Besides, we can get lots of fun through the Internet. For example, we can enjoy music and play computer games. On the net, we can even do shopping, have a chat with others and make friends with them.

In a word总之, the Internet has made our life more colorful and enjoyable

十八

The Yellow Mountain

The Yellow Mountain, a famous place of interest in China, is located=lies位于

in the south of Anhui Province. Its charming迷人的

and fantastic scenery极好的风景

attracts a large number of tourists from all over the world全世界=at home and abroad国内外. So it’s a good choice选择

for your summer vacation. Besides ,it’s convenient便利的

for you to go there. You can take a bus, a train or a plane.

During the journey, you can enjoy great sight all the way from the foot of the mountain to the top. You will be amazed by the sea of clouds, wondrous pines and unique rocks. After climbing to the top, you can appreciate欣赏

the sunrise in the early morning.

十四

How to improve English In my opinion, there are many ways through which we can improve English.

First, we should read as many English books, magazines and newspapers as possible. Second, we must listen to English programs on the radio every day. Third, it is necessary for us to seize every chance抓住每个机会

to practise spoken English口语

both in and after class. Finally, it is also very important for everyone to form the habit of形成习惯

taking notes and keeping diaries in English. Only when have followed these rules above以上规则

, can we speak and write English well, and can we communicate with people properly正确地

in English. 十五

Learn to smile

As we know, smile/smiling is a universal普遍的，通用的

language. It really plays an important role in our life. So let’s smile everyday.

First of all, learn to smile to yourself. Smiling to yourself is a good way to forget something unhappy. For example, when you fail in your exam, please just smile and tell yourself you can do better next time. Smiling can develop confidence发展自信

because sometimes yourself is the greatest enemy. You are beaten by yourself if you don’t have enough courage勇气

and confidence自信.

Then learn to smile to others. Smiling is a sign标志

of friendship. Smiling makes it easier to make friends.

Smiling doesn’t cost anything, but it brings you happiness,

confidence and friendship. So let’s keep smiling every day.

十九

日记

October 1st, 2014

Monday

Sunny

Today is National Day and it is sunny, so my classmates and I decided to go to the West Lake Park. We had a good time there. Later, we bought some ice cream and threw the paper on the ground. Just then a little ran to us , picked it up捡起来

and put it into a dustbin nearby附近的垃圾桶. We felt very sorry and decided to help collect rubbish收集垃圾

in the park so that we could make some contributions to protecting the environment为保护环境做一些贡献. As we know, your 3 十六Why should we protect wild animals ?

Reading makes a full man, conference a ready man, and writing an exact man. 读书使人充实，讨论使人机敏，写作使人严谨。——培根

contribution counts.正如大家所知道，你的贡献是值得的

二十

September 2

Wednesday

Fine

Today I went shopping with my friends. When we were going around四处逛逛, we saw an American couple were talking with a shop assistant about a camera. But from their facial expressions, it seemed that they had some difficulty in understanding each other. I told myself it was high time to show my English, however, I was a bit shy and not brave enough to offer my help. After the inner struggle, I persuaded myself---don’t hesitate as long as it’s worth doing. I came to them and explained my intention. The American couple was filled with joy as if they met an angel. Finally , they got the camera at a reasonable price and thanked me. I was delighted and proud of what I had done--- thanks to my English

(23)

Should we students go to a restaurant for our birthday?

Nowadays, it’s more and more popular for students to have a birthday party in a restaurant. Yesterday our class had a discussion about this phenomenon现象. Different students have different ideas.

Some hold the view that it’s a good chance to communicate with each other and improve our friendship. Besides, we can relax ourselves after school. However, the others feel it’s a waste of time and money. It will also lead to the bad habit of vying with each other攀比

crazily/ showing off炫耀.

In my view, it’s not a good idea to have a birthday party in a restaurant as students, as there are more disadvantages than advantages 因为缺点大于优点

.

（24）

Nowadays现在，当今, more and more people are going on a diet节食. It prevents people from growing too fat and can avoid避免

some inconvenience不便

and diseases due to obesity肥胖症. However, if carried too far, going on a diet can become extremely dangerous. This often happens in the cases of some young girls who are eager to keep slim保持苗条

and have a beautiful figure身材. They even risk冒险

their health to lose weight.

In my opinion, every coin has two sides凡事有两面, so does going on a diet. The best way is to put our health in the first place. If it’s good for your health, stick to坚持

it. If not, give it up.

25 如何度过高中生活

Dear friends, Welcome to our school. Now summer vocation is over. You have become a high school student. Meanwhile, you will start a new life. As a senior three student, I will share my feelings and ideas about high school life in the following. As we all know, the study of high school is important for our life, therefore we should focus our attention on studying. However, it’s an important thing to solve the problem about studying and amateur activities. At the same time, we should also learn to face the pressure from parents and society. Actually, it is wise to take the parents’ expectation as motivation.

As far as I’m concerned, as a senior student, we should have our own ideas. What’s more, we had better adapt ourselves to the life of high school as soon as possible. I hope all of us can be admitted to the university.

Thank you. 议论文

Dear editor,

（21）

We had a discussion about shopping on line网购

at the class meeting yesterday.

Some of us think shopping on line is very interesting. You can shop at any time as the on-line shops are open 24 hours a day. Besides, it is often cheaper to buy goods through the Internet.

However, others think the on-line shops网店

just show you the pictures of goods so that you can’t check the quality核对质量. What’s more, you can’t enjoy walking around the shops with your friends.

In my opinion, everything has two sides. I enjoy this new way of shopping.

Yours sincerely,

Wang Fang

（22）

Dear Miss Lin,

I am writing to join the discussion加入讨论

whether it’s good to make friends on line. I’d like to show my views.

I am fond of喜欢

surfing the Internet in my spare time在我空余时间. I can chat with my friends no matter where they are, and we can share our happiness and sorrow/sadness with分享快乐和悲伤

each other. Sometimes when I feel confused/puzzled迷惑的, I can ask for advice from them. I even can communicate with foreigners through the net, which can improve my English and enrich my vision丰富视野.

As far as what I’ve stated above据上所述, it’s good and convenient to make friends online. However, you must learn how to protect yourself from harm. You’d better choose some famous and reliable webs可靠的网站

to make friends in case以免

that you are cheated欺骗

by others.

In a word, take care before making friends online.

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