Writingppt课件课堂实录

Teaching procedure

Step One: Greetings

Step Two: Lead-in

Look at the screen and stress the importance of neat and beautiful handwriting in the composition again.

Make the score grades of different compositions clear

Step Three: New Lesson A.

Error correction 1. He said that she has made great progresses through her effort. 2. We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope you can figure out a way fastly, because we lack of time.

3. What really inspires me that not only my family but also my teachers care about me. 4. The sun gives off heat and light, this makes it possible for the plants on the earth to grow. 5. Being an honest man, Tom worked very hard.

B. 强调高级、复杂概念的四个原则：

1. 词组优先

原文: A new railway is being built in my hometown. 改进: A new railway is under construction in my hometown. 努力：make every effort to do 成功: make it 进入大学：be admitted into the university 即将到来：be around the corner 很有可能：chances are that…

2. 地道

原文: Through traveling, I learned a lot of knowledge 改进: Through traveling, I gained/ obtained a lot

of knowledge. 3.

避免重复

原文：I like reading while my brother likes watching TV. 改进：I like reading while my brother enjoys watching TV. 4.

后、高、长

very=

rather、extremely pay attention to=attach importance to

C. Know the structures of sentences Three categories of sentences:简单句、并列句、主从复合句

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Lead the topic in by emphasiz- ing the importance of neat and beautiful hand- writing

Make sure that the written sentences

are correct

The usage of

advanced

words and ex- pressions makes the articles more vivid

Teaching procedure

Exercises: (1)

宾语从句：

He told me the news. 他告诉我比赛已经取消了。

他告诉我他何时会离开去巴黎。

主语从句和定语从句：

He helped the anxious man. 他做的事帮助了那个人，那个人的车子坏了。

状语从句：

Put the book on the desk. 把书放在你找到它的地方。

(2) Translate the Chinese into English with an elliptical sentence 除非被邀请发言,你应该在会议上保持沉默. Unless ________to speak, you should keep silent at the meeting. (3) Complete the sentences with a non-predicate verb. 尽管被告知许多遍,他仍然重复这个错误。

_______________many times, he still repeated the mistake. (4) Sentence patterns are always useful. ▪You will have to work hard for years to speak good English. ▪_______take years of hard work ____speak good English. ▪The dog jumped into the river and pulled the girl to the bank. ▪____ was the dog _____jumped into the river and pulled the girl to the bank. ▪The square is near the Great Wall Hotel. ▪______the Great Wall Hotel is the square.

Step Four: Expand the short composition.

假如你是李华，你的美国朋友David了解到你即将参加高考，来信询问你的近况。请你给他写一封回信。内容如下：

1.感谢牵挂

2.学习状况和心理状态

3.老师和父母的关心

4.畅想未来

注意：词数不少于100，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear David,

I am glad to receive your letter.

________________________________________________________________________________________________________

How is everything with you? I am looking forward to your reply. 3

Use complex sentences to attract the teachers’

attention

Teaching procedure

Yours,

Li Hua

提示：Thank you for your concern. I am studying hard. Sometimes I feel stressed and upset. My family and my teachers care about me very much. I love them. After going to my dream university, I will go abroad to study.

Step Five: Summary

Step Six: Homework

假如你是李华，请根据下面的提示，给王明写封回信。

提示：

1.告诉他其实英语写作并不难，学会写句子很重要。

2.提几条建议，如：掌握基本句型，灵活运用句式，增加过渡词等等。

3.鼓励他爱上英语，爱上写作。

Do exercises to test the results of this class

Design of Blackboard

make every effort to do make it be admitted into the university be around the corner chances are that…

按句子结构划分：

简单句

并列句

定语从句

主从复合句

状语从句

名词性从句

主语从句

宾语从句

表语从句

同位语从句

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Teaching Plan

Teacher Subject

Teaching

aims

Ability aims Liu Dan English Knowledge aims Class 2.5 Type

Writing Time Topic 2017.12.07

Writing Skills

1.

Master the structures of sentences

2.

Write each sentence in the composition without error 3.

Use transitional sentences, advanced vocabulary and complex sentences in the composition when necessary Develop the students’ ability to expand the content of the composition

Emotional

Let the students eliminate the fear of writing and aims cultivate the interest of writing Important

Use complex sentences and non-predicate verbs correctly points Difficult

points

Key

points Analyze the starting points

How the

difficult points Teaching

tools

Teaching

ways

Expand the content of the composition

Train the students’ ability to write high score compositions

By looking at an excellent composition, the students should know the importance of neat and beautiful handwriting to

By putting forward questions and discussing in groups , let the students know more information about expanding the content of the composition deal with blackboard,

multimedia,

exercise papers

Listening and speaking

Practice

Discussion

Task-based language teaching

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