Using LanguageⅡ优秀完整教案

How to describe a place 一、When you want to describe a place, what aspects will you write about?

1.Location (位置):

“某物位于……”

sth. lie/ stand / be located /be situated + in/at/on… + 某处

e.g

广州位于中国的南部。

Guangzhou lies / stands / is located /is situated in the south of China .

2.Area (面积): 1) 某地+covers an area of+……square meters

2) take up 3)某地+ has / with an area of+……square meters

e.g 这个城镇

面积

100多平方公里

The town

covers/ has an area of over 100 square kilometers.

3.Surroundings (周边环境)

1) surrounded by 被包围被环绕

2)at the back of

3)in front of

Surrounded by mountains on three sides, the small village faces a clear river on the east.

“东，南，西，北”的表达

sth. is +in/to/on the east (south…)of+某处

1) Guangdong is ___ the south of China. 2) Beijing is ___ the north of Guangdong. 3) Guangdong is ___ the east of Guangxi.

4.Population (人口)：

1) has / with a population of,

2) the population of … is…,

3) 百分数

of the population … are …

这个村子有5000人, 大多数人为渔民。

The village

5000, most of whom are fishermen.

这里百分之八十的人口是农民。

here

farmers.

5.History (历史)

… has / with a (long )historyof …

1）

埃及是一个具有历史的阿拉伯国度。

Egypt is an Arabian country

6.Places of interest (名胜)

1）The places around our city are rich in natural resources.

2)The city, known as…, attracts

millions of visitors from all over the world.

3)The city is well-known / famous

for its…/as…

7.气候特征：

There is a variety of climate: warm,pleasant,dry, humid潮湿的, cold, sunny, stormy暴风雨的, rainy…

neither too hot in summer nor too cold in winter

The average temperature of Hong Kong is about 22℃ . The rainy season is between May and July.

练习：请根据以下的情景说明，使用5个规范的英语句子描述全部所给的信息。

汕尾市位于广东省东部，是一个有很长历史的沿海城市。总面积5271平方千米，总人口359.23万人。东临汕头，西接惠州市、深圳、东莞市、广州市，素有“粤东桥梁”之称。汕尾自然资源如矿产、森林、农产品等非常丰富，气候宜人，冬不寒冷，夏不酷热。汕尾市著名的旅游胜地如凤山祖庙Fengshan Temple旅游景区红海湾旅游景区等，每年都吸引大量游客。

Let’s make preparations.

第一步，提取信息：注意句子内容的完整性

(Completeness) Translate the following sentences: 1.汕尾位于广东东部。

Shanwei is located/situated/lies in the east of Guangdong province. 2.汕尾是一个有很长历史的沿海城市

。

It is a coastal city with a long history. 3.汕尾总面积5271平方千米。

It takes up/ covers an area of 5271 square kilometers.

4.汕尾总人口360万人。

It has a population of about 3600 thousand. 5.汕尾东临汕头，西接惠州市、深圳、东莞市、广州市

with Shantou on its east and Huizhou ,Shenzhen, Dongguan, Guangzhou on its west. 6.素有“粤东桥梁”之称

it is called the “bridge of eastern Guangdong ”

7.汕尾气候宜人，冬不寒冷，夏不酷热。

The climate here is pleasant, neither too hot in summer nor too cold in winter 8.汕尾自然资源如矿产、森林、农产品等非常丰富。

It is rich in natural resources, such as mine, forest, farm produce and so on. 9.汕尾市著名的旅游胜地如凤山祖庙Fengshan Temple旅游景区红海湾旅游景区等，每年都吸引大量游客。

Every year, the famous places of interest such as Fengshan Temple, Red Bay attracts many tourists from different places for its beautiful scenery.

Ⅲ．Analysis and Finding(分析与探究)How to combine sentences? 连句成章：句子结构的正确性(correctness)，句子结构的复杂性(Variety)，句子内容的连贯性(Coherence)

Ⅲ Sentence Integration (句子整合)——将简单句转为较复杂的句子

[方法]运用“插入结构”或“with的复合结构”

可用作插入结构的有：分词短语，介词短语或从句，同位语结构等，使文章简洁，通顺

Located in the east of Guangdong province, Shanwei is a coastal city with a long history. It covers a total area of 5271 square kilometers with a population of about 3600 thousand. With Shantou on its east and Huizhou, Shenzhen, Dongguan, Guangzhou on its west , Shanwei is also called the “bridge of eastern Guangdong”. The climate here is pleasant, neither too hot in summer nor too cold in winter and it is rich in natural resources, such as mine, forest, farm produce and so on. There are many famous places of interest, among which is the Fengshan Temple, Red Bay whose scenery is very beautiful, attracts lots of tourists from different places every year.

Summary 认真审题，明确要求。

1)短文必须包括全部信息内容，不能遗漏任何一点；

2)确定短文的主题；

主题：

3)确定短文的人称和时态。

人称：

时态：

2.划分信息块，列出写作要点，明确写作的先后次序。

3.确定可能用到的短语、主要句型。

4.扩展成句，连句成篇, 至少用上2种插入结构。