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短文改错导学案

合川中学高2018级英语学科组

周魏

How to Deal with Proof-reading 短文改错

课堂设计思路：现象归纳---技巧方法---练习实践

教学目标：

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基础目标：了解近年高考短文改错的考点分布及试题结构；

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能力目标：提升学生识别校正语篇的能力及上下文逻辑能力；

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情感目标：使学生在愉快中了解短文改错的方法，增强自信，直面高考。

一.改错的方式及题型设置

1. We can go to there after lunch.___________ 2. She didn’t like playing piano.___________

3. He had cured her for her illness.___________ 二、解题策略及答题原则

I.从词法和逻辑错误分析

（一）、动词

1. (2017全国1）Once I started the car, my mind goes blank. 2. (2017全国3) I had grown not only physically, but also mentally in the past few years. 3. (2017全国2) When summer came, they will invite their students to pick the fresh vegetables. 4. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. 5. Among the park’s trees there are a science hall, an art centre, a gym, …and…

6. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles. Summary 动词错误主要在___________________________________________

practice 1.

Not only the students but also the teacher like the film.

2.

When they came here, I will show them around. 3.

They eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of questions.

4.

I found the man standing there, explained to the audience his design. 5. He used to getting up early to take physical exercise.

（二）、连词

1.(15全国) If they had said was true, I would have a chance of winning the prize. 2.(16全国) In fact, my grandfather even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me.

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短文改错导学案

合川中学高2018级英语学科组

周魏

3. I received my mother’s call telling me she would come, but I had to cancel the appointments with you. 4.

Although I tried my best to gain his trust, but I failed in the end. 5. (17全国3）Around me in the picture are the things they were very important in my life

at that time. Summary 连词错误主要在___________________________________________ practice 1. Now many girls prefer to marry a man who owns a house and a car. Therefore, I don't

think love built on houses and cars is true love, and I doubt how long it will last. 2. On Monday, Li Ming was energetic but active in class.

3. “Should I choose a good major and a good university?”

4. They had expected to find a free place to live in, so they experienced a hard winter.

（三）、名词

（四）、

冠词

1. It felt very strange to travel without any luggages. 2. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits. 3. After learning English for several years, I have made a great progress. 4. If I choose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for another 30 minutes. 5. All in all, Joey is a very special dog because he has overcome unpleasant start in life. Summary 名词错误主要在___________________________________________ 冠词错误主要在___________________________________________

practice 1.(全国17)The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most different time for me.

2.I need more informations before investment.

3.(全国17)The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up!” “Slow down!” .

（五）、形容词、副词

1. My father was so pleasing that he suggested I go to England for a holiday. 2. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. 3. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost. 4. Being a member of the Students’ Union makes me capable of organizing various activities. However, I am convinced that I can keep the class organized and lively. 5. We gave our thanks to our teachers who had been educating us patient. Summary 形容词、副词错误主要在___________________________________________

practice 1.

He just sat comfortable in the sofa of the hall.

2.

Yes, it is clearly that your life in your country is quite different from mine.

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短文改错导学案

合川中学高2018级英语学科组

周魏

3.

His father looks much more happier today. 4.

Among all the subjects, English is my favouritest one.

（六）、代词

1. Before her leaving, I prepared a gift to show my best wishes to him. 2. To make my dream come true, I have told me over and over again that I’ll concentrate more on studies. 3. Every year more and more people start a stamp collection of your own . Summary 代词错误主要在________________________________________________________

practice 1. My uncles immediately jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the

arrows hit the target.

2. Though situations are tough today, a lot of we post-80s are making great efforts to live a good life.

3. This building has been repaired and strengthened several times over it's past one hundred years' history. 4. I think important to learn the computer well. 5. Thank you for the English dictionary that you bought it for me.

（七）、介词

1.(17全国)Now I am leaving home to college.

2. Nearly five years ago and with the help for our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes in our back garden. 3. ( 17全国)It was a relief and I came to a sudden stop just in the middle on the road. Summary 介词错误主要在_________________________________________________________

practice 1. I’m sure they will laugh to me and see me as a fool.

2.

At last we reached to the village at the foot of the hill. 3. When a young man starts to earn his own living, he can no longer expect others to pay

his food . 4. The gentleman insisted at my receiving the money.

Summary What have you learned today? 7 _____________

3_________________

4_______________ 三、强化练习

Passage

1 Our English teacher begin to teach us in 2015. She had been teaching English for more than ten year. She likes we, and she is very strict in all of us. Although she is a bit

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短文改错导学案

合川中学高2018级英语学科组

周魏

short and not so beautifully, but we consider her as our friend. She is really good teacher, which we all love her very much. We're sure that we'll get in well with each other.

Passage

2 I was a

high school student then, from the low-income family. So I have to support my family. My first one job was to clean the tables in a small restaurant. I still remember going there early and felt anxious about the new world. I worked hardly because I was afraid of losing the job. At night, I was sometimes very tired to do my homework. But

I came to understand that was not easy to earn money, and that knowledges could change my life. So what I learned from the job, in a hard way, was much more important as what I learned from school.

II.从句法的角度去分析

（一）、定语从句

1.He put it in a secret place where I couldn't find. 2.The house which Lu Xun once lived is being repaired now. 3.I'll never forget the day which

I first went to school.

Summary ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二）名词性从句

1. We would return at night to hear that he'd picked up from the radio in the day. 2. But it didn’t matter that I would win or not. 3. When people are playing games, they move a lot. That is how sports are good activities

for their health.

Summary ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二）

、状语从句

1. He got up very early that he could catch the first. 2. Make a mark which you have any doubts or questions. Summary ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （四）、句式结构

1. Only in this way can’t we avoid being cheated by someone on the Internet.

2. I particularly enjoyed driving through the countryside with you and saw the changing colors of the leaves on the trees.

Summary ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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