Writing说课稿【一等奖】

一、善用高级词汇(which is better?)

1. A .We have endless homework to do at the weekend.

B. We have a lot of homework to do at the weekend .

2. A. Of all my teachers, I still remember Mr. Mao. B. Of all my teachers, Mr. Mao gave me the deepest impression. 练习：使用高级词汇改写下列句子

1. I had a good idea. _____________________________________________________________________ 2. The weekend is coming . __________________________________________________________ 3. Nowadays, people think education is very important . ___________________________________________________________ 二、善用高档句式

使用从句或非谓语动词

1. They arrived at the school. They felt the happy atmosphere. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. I will be given another chance. I will succeed. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 强调

1. The children won’t come home until 5pm.(强调)

____________________________________________________________________ 2. He went there yesterday. (强调) ____________________________________________________________________ 感叹句

3. To prevent the pollution is very important. (感叹句)

_____________________________________________________________________ 倒装

1. He didn’t realize his foolishness until he returned home.(not until)

____________________________________________________________________ 2.We can save the earth by changing the way we live.(only) _____________________________________________________________________ 3.He is clever but he does not work hard.(as / though) _____________________________________________________________________ 4.The tower stands on the other side of the street. (On the other side of the street) _____________________________________________________________________

主动转被动

People suggest that the conference be put off.

(一般)

that the conference be put off.

(高级) We expect the advisor to work 4 hours a week .

The advisor ________________________________4 hours a week .

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with 复合结构

With + 宾语+adj./adv./prep-phrase/to do/ doing/ done 1)在何老师的执教下，我们进步很大！

We made great progress______________________________ 2) 种了很多花，我们学校呈现出新的面貌。

______________________________，our school took on a new look. 3)不要满嘴巴食物说话。

Don’t speak ________________________________. 4)由于无事可做，我就看了一部电影。

___________________________, I saw a movie.

三、

使用恰当的连接词

首先_____________________

更重要的是____________

起初______________________________

结果__________________ 同时______________________________

因此_____________ 从那时起_______________________

也就是说_______________________

直到现在____________

说实话________________________ 不久以后__________

一方面…另一方面____________________ 随着时间的流逝____________________________

相反的____________ 就我而言___________________________

另外,此外___________________________

众所周知___________________________

事实上______________ 总之________________________________

然而，很可惜的是_____________________ 更糟/严重的是_______________________

练一练：使用恰当的连接词填空

1）We can go downtown and do some shopping. __________, we can pay a visit to some places of interest. 2）I shared the cost of the gas with my friends .___________, I saved $80. 3）Eating sugar is bad for our teeth. ___________ , it may make us fat.

四、善于合理添加句子附加成分作解释说明

（一）附加成分作解释说明

这样更方便照顾父母。（原因

）

It will be much more convenient to look after your parents，___________________________________________________________________. 2、因广告过多，

影片放映晚点

。(后果) There were so many advertisements that they delayed the time of showing the film, _______________________________________________________________________. （二）举例说明

青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球

We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.For example we can_______________________________________________

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Improve this composition, try!

Now students in China celebrate their birthdays in many ways.

Usually, a party is held. Best friends and relatives will come to the party. They usually buy a gift. They show their best wishes. Sometimes, people send short messages too and it is becoming very popular.

But I think that it’s better to help other people. We know that it’s important to learn to help other people. Helping other people can do us a lot of good. People will help you because you’ve helped them and you’ll be happy…

(1)

Now students in China celebrate their birthdays in many ways.

(2) Usually, a party is held. Best friends and relatives will come to the party.（用where定语从句）

(3) They usually buy a gift. They show their best wishes.（合并句子）

(4) Sometimes, people send short messages too and it is becoming very popular （用which定语从句）.

(5) But (替换）

I think （替换）

that it’s better to help other people.

.(6) We know that it’s important to learn to help others. Helping other people can do us a lot of good.

(7) People will help you in return and you’ll be happy （用For one thing, For another 替换）.

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2014年全国卷高考英语作文题目：

一家英语报社向中学生征文,主题是“十年后的我”,请根据下列要求和你的想象完成短文

1、家庭

2、工作

3、业余生活

注意：1.次数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

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