Using LanguageⅡ教学实录与评析

Letter Writing Guidance ---how to enrich the body part Teaching material: 2008年全国I卷写作

Duration: 45 minutes 1.

Topic analysis Letter writing is often seen in the College Entrance Examination. Before this lesson, students have practiced several types of letter writing. In this period, students are guided to summarize the format of letter writing. Special attention is drawn to how to enrich the content. Writing steps are also emphasized. 2.

Teaching goals Language goal: to have a better idea of the format of letter writing; Ability goals: 1) to understand how to enrich the content better; 2) to know and follow the writing steps clearly. 3.

Teaching important and difficult point It is important for students to know how to enrich the content, which students may find difficult. 4.

Teaching aids PPT, overhead projector, learning handout 5.

Teaching procedures Teaching steps

Step 1 Lead-in (2min）

Step 2 Pre-Writing (15mins)

Teaching content Purposes 1.

Pictures of pandas are shown. 1.

to lead in the topic and to 2.

Brief introduction of the arouse students’ interests in panda Sulin and her mother the topic. Baiyun. 2.

to present the task of this 3.

Writing task is presented. period.

1.

Students are guided to to get the students to have a summarize the format of letter better idea of how to write a writing. letter

2.

Students are guided to summarize how to enrich the body part of a letter.

Students are guided to write the to emphasize the writing steps

passage following the writing steps.

Step 3 While-writing

(15mins)

Step 4 Post writing (10 mins)

1. Students exchange their writing and 1.

to get the students to have correct the mistakes in their partner’s peer feedback writing. 2.

to check some of the 2.

Comments are made on some of students’ writing

the students’ writing.

Step 5 Summary (2mins) Step 6 Assignment (1 min)

1. Students are guided to summarize to get the students to have a what has been covered in this period. clearer idea of what they have learned

Polish your passage and write it down To finish the last step of the neatly on the answer sheet writing 6.

Blackboard design

Letter Writing Guidance

1.

Format of letter writing

2.

How to enrich the content What Why How Reminder: relevant,

reasonable positive 3. Writing steps

Step 1: 审题

（体裁、人称、时态）

布局

Step 2: 列要点﹛

拓展

Step 3: 打草稿

Step 4: 修改+抄正

附2008年全国I卷写作题目

假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫(panda),一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣地亚哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请你根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信：

1. 自我介绍

2. 祝贺苏琳生日

3. 感谢工作人员

4. 索取苏琳三岁生日照。

注意：

1.

词数100左右。

2.

可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3.

开头语已为你写好。

Dear Sir or Madam,

Greetings from China! _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours truly, Li Hua

学生学案

Letter Writing Guidance ---How to enrich the body part 1.

Format

Letter Writing Guidance Dear Sir/Madam,

开头：__________________________________________ 正

文

结尾：__________________________________________ 结束语：I am looking forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Li Hua 各类信件套语

邀请信

发出邀请：I am writing to invite you to do sth. 期待对方接受邀请It is my sincere hope that you can come and join us. 咨询信

咨询：I am writing to ask for some information about sth. 期待回复并表示感谢

It is my sincere hope that you can do me this favor. I would appreciate it if you could do me this favor. I would be more than grateful if you could answer my questions in detail. 求助信

求助：I am writing to ask you to give me a hand. 或I am writing to ask you to do me a favor. 期待对方给予帮助

It is my sincere hope that you can do me this favor. I would appreciate it if you could do me this favor. I would be more than grateful if you could do me this favor. 申请信

申请：I am writing to apply for sth. 期待申请被批准并

It is my sincere hope that my application will be favorably considered. I would appreciate it if you could give me the chance.

I would be more than grateful if you could give me the chance.

表决心

If I am chosen, I will spare no efforts to exceed your expectations. I am convinced that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. 道歉信

道歉：I am writing to apologize for sth. I feel terribly sorry to tell you that…

再次致歉，请求原谅

I sincerely apologize again for my mistake. I sincerely hope you can understand my situation and accept my apology. 感谢信

致谢：I am writing to express my gratitude to sb for sth. 再次致谢：Please accept my sincere appreciation again. 祝贺信

祝贺：I am writing to express my congratulations on sth. I am writing to express my best wishes to sb for sth. 再次祝愿

Please accept my warmest regards. I wish you greater success in sth.

2.

How to enrich the body part (省模)假定你是李华，负责学校英文广播站。请你给广播站的顾问Dr. Brown写一封电子邮件，邀请他参加广播站十周年庆典。要点如下：

1. 感谢他的指导；

2. 告知参加庆典时间和地点；

3. 邀请他参加庆典并发言。

合理拓展

感谢他的指导

___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ 邀请他发言

___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ More examples (2011新课标卷)假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心(Learning Center)的帮助。根据学校规定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：

1. 本人简介。

2. 求助内容。

3. 约定时间。

4. 你的联系方式(Email：lihua@1236.com；Phone：12345678)。