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Writing

How to write a better Application Letter

StepⅠ. Basic information about writing StepⅡ.Cooperation and conclusion（合作探究，讨论总结）

A．Beginning (to show your writing purpose): 1.I am writing to apply for…

2.I am writing to you hoping that I may obtain an opportunity to…

3.I learned from the advertisement that your company wanted a …

and I am very interested in it. B.Body part( useful phrases): be in good health, be good at, be expert in,have rich working experience, enjoying doing sth,in one's spare time,be strict with, be kind to, get on well with C.Ending (to show your appreciation):

1.I would be very thankful if …

2.If I have a chance to work in your company，I will try my best to be a good employee. 如果您能给我面试的机会，我将不胜感激。

3.If you should grant me a personal interview, I would be most grateful. 如果您能尽早回复我，我将不胜感激。

4.I would appreciate it if you can give me an early reply.

Step Ⅲ. Practice writing 假设你是新华中学的学生李华，得知某英文报社招聘兼职记者，请按下列要点给报社写一封自荐信。内容要点如下：

1）表示感兴趣；

2）说明优势：知识面、英语水平、合作精神、相关经历；

3）希望得到回复。

注意：1）100词左右

2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Let’s try（写作演练，展示交流）

(1).Draft

Dear Sir or Madam,

________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________.

I think I am the right person for the job. _____________(作为一名学生), I've read different books.Furthermore,________ ______________________________(我擅长英语，口语也很好). __________, _____________________(此外，我很容易相处)and like working together with others. Above all, I once attended a course about the skills in broadcasting. ____________________________________________(所以我确信如果我能获得这个职位我会把它做好).

I am looking forward to your reply soon.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

(2).Refine by using good phrases a.I'm interested in the news that you want some part-time reporters.

→I_______________________ the news that you want some part-time reporters. b. I think I am the right person for the job.

→I think__________________________________________________for the job. c. As a student, I've read different books.

→As a student, I've read_________________________________________books. d.I am good at English and do well in speaking.

→I_____________________________of English and do well in speaking. e.I'm easy to get along with and like working together with others.

→I'm easy to get along with and _____________________________________. (3).Refine by adding good adj. / adv. a.I show interest in the news that you want some part-time reporters.

→I___________________ the news…

b. I think I am qualified for the job

→ I think__________________________for the job. c.I have a good command of English and do well in speaking.

→I have a good command of English and do ___________________well in speaking. d.I'm easy to get along with and have a sense of cooperation.

→ I'm easy to get along with and have a _______ sense of cooperation.

e. I am looking forward to your reply soon.

→I'm looking forward to your________________ reply soon. (4).(Refine by enriching sentence structures

a.As a student, I’ve read varieties of books. （用非谓语扩展信息) 作为一个学生,我看过各种书籍，这使得我很容易去处理各种意外情况。

→As a student, I've read varieties of books,______________________________ b.I'm easy to get along with and have a strong sense of coorperation . (变为倒装句）

→_______________________________________________________________ c.Above all, I once attended a course about the skills in broadcasting .(用复合句扩展信息) 更重要的是，我曾经参加过关于播报技巧的课程，在那课程里我接受到了专业的训练。

→Above all, I once attended a course about the skills in broadcasting________ ________________________________________________________________. StepⅣ. Assessment &Homework（随堂评价，布置作业）

Rewrite your composition after class and recite it.