Writing优质课教案

作文的提高与润色

Teaching aim:

Enable the students to composition with the help of given information. Teaching difficulty and importance: 1.

train the students’reading skill and writing skill. 2.

How to train the students’s writing skills. 一：高考书面表达常用的标点符号：

1.句号.(句号表示说完一句话后的停顿，用在句子末尾。英语句号的写法是一个实心点，有别于汉语的空心点。

2.逗号（逗号表示一句话没有说完而暂时的停顿，,用在句子中间。逗号的主要作用有：a.当两个成分或句子并列时，需用并列连词，当三个或三个以上的成分或句子，最后两个句子或成分需用并列连词，前面的句子或成分可用逗号隔开。b.表示独立成分。c.表示同位语。d.表示句首的状语（非谓语动词做状）e.表示句首或句尾的非限制性定语从句。f.表示称呼语。g.表示引出直接引语。

3.问号？（表示疑问，用于各种疑问句末尾）

4.引号

单引号‘

’、

双引号“

”（引号主要表示直接引语。引号分两种：双引号和单引号，在引号之内再用引号只能用单引号。

5.感叹号！（主要用在感叹句，感叹词和表示强烈感情的祈使句后面。）

6.冒号：（主要用来引出下文，表示举例。）

7.破折号—（表示后面是前面的解释，也表示意义的递进。）

8.分号；（表示比逗号长的停顿。分号主要用在没有连词的情况下把句子分开。另外，在however，therefore等副词前也常用分号。

9.省略号...（表示言犹未尽的省略或相同内容的省略。英语省略号是三个点，居下。

10.连字号-（表示复合词的连接，连字号比破折号短。）

1.Mary got up early

dressed herself quickly and went to school. 2.The teacher

to tell you the truth

is his father. 3.Kofi Annan

the former Secretary General of the UN

has made great achievements for the development of the world. 4.Hearing the good news

the little boy jumped with joy 5.As everyone knows

he is the winner of the english contest 6.Mary

close the door. 7.The boy shouted

be careful

8.They often play basketball they are getting more and more healthy. 9.The whole plan is as follows

10.What are you going to do this weekend 11.What a fine day it is today 12.

help!help

Everyone heard the voice from the river over

there just now 13.The whole country welcomes your visit

your visit

to our country. 14.a five

year plan 二：英语基本句型：

1.主语+系动词+表语

常见的系动词有：be（是），become（变成），look（看上去），

seem（看起来），appear（显得），get（变得），feel（摸起来），

grow（变得），turn（变成），remain(仍然是），come（变得），fall（变成），hold（保持），keep（保持），stand（保持），stay（保持|），smell(闻起来），sound（听起来），taste（尝起来）等。常用作表语的词有：名词，形容词，非谓语动词，介词短语，从句等。

2.主语+动词（这一句型中的谓语动词是不及物动词，没有直接宾语，但常带状语）

3.主语+动词+宾语（这一句型句型的谓语动词是及物动词，它必须带有自己的宾语）

4.主语+动词+间接宾语+直接宾语（常见的谓语动词有：give，send,bring，tell，leave，pass，read，write，show，teach，get,award，lend,rent,buy,pay,hand。（直接宾语表示动作的承受着，一般是物。间接宾语表示动作是对谁或为谁做的，一般是人）

5.主语+动词+宾语+宾语补足（有些及物动词的后面常带复合宾

语结构（即宾语+宾语补足语），在这一结构中，宾语补足语与前面的宾语存在逻辑上的主谓关系和系表关系。宾语补足语可由名词，形容词，动词不定式，分词或介词短语担当。常带有复合宾语结构的及物动词有：elect,feel,find,get,have,hear,imagine,keep,make,notice,see,let,smell,believe,call,catch,allow,ask,cause,consider,expect,know,tell,think,want,wish,listen to,look at等。

判断句子类型：

eg:This machine is in good condition. eg:The water is boiling. eg:He has a sister eg:She bought me a blouse. eg:We elected him our monitor. eg:The garden smells pleasant. eg:The train will leave soon. eg:They wanted to have a rest. eg:Pass him the dictionary,please. eg:The news made me happy. 三：过渡衔接：

1.时间顺序：to begin with ,in the beginning,at first,first of all, in the end,at last, finally,at the end/beginning of...,now,later,afterwards,before long(soon),after that,meanwhile,in

the meanwhile,at the same time. 2.因果关系：because，so,therefore,as a result/consequence(of)....,thanks to...,due to.... 3.转折关系：however，but,in spite of..,despite 4.比较关系：by comparison,on the contrary,on the other hand 5.例举关系：for example,such as,for instance,in other words,as follows,that is to say 6.递进关系：to make matters worse,more importantly,in addition (to)...,besides,and then,moreover,furthermore,what's more,also 7.表示观点：in my opinion/view,in my point of view,as far as I am concerned, as for me, personally 8.表示总结：

in short/brief/conclusion，in a word, to sum up,all in all,on the whole,,in general,generally speaking. first of all,besides,last but not least.at the same time,thanks to...,however,on the one hand,on the other hand,as follows,to make matters worse,as far as I am concerned.however.therefore.despite （用以上的词填空）

1.eg:I'm glad to receive your letter for asking me how to study English well.My advice is ____________: 2.eg:_________ ,You should learn words by heart and read aloud every day. _______ ,you

should listen to the teacher carefully,whic will help you a lot.____________ ,you can join an English

club,where you can meet some foreigners. 3.eg:___________,as long as we do more listening,speaking,reading and writing,we will learn English well. 4:________________,I'd like to make some money for my living next term.___________,I want to get some some experience before graduating. 5.eg:__________ ,it's not good for us students to use mobile phones at school. 6.eg:I state that she has all the qualities of being a designer._______ ,

I recommend her to you with all my heart. 7.eg:Middle school students are too young to take care of themselves and that they are lack of life experience._________ ,the cost for life and study is too high. 8.eg:He knows a lot._______ ,he doesn't get good grades. 9.eg:Her voice was shaking _______all her efforts to control it. 10.eg:Everyone knows about it now, ________you. 11.eg:She was laughing and crying ___.

四：肃清基础语言错误：

1主谓不一致

eg:My father and I likes going fishing by the lake. eg:large quantities of soil has been washed away. eg:Mr.smith,together with some students,are coming to our school

2.时态，语态混用

eg:last night,I had enjoyed a party. eg:The painting on the wall

damaged seriously. 3.句子成分残缺

Eg:I stood up and saw

there

a boy. eg:The young man

running in the street. 4.

习惯搭配误用

eg: We passed away the building. eg:I once heard from the animal like this. 5.名词单、复数不分

eg:I made many friend in the summer camp. eg:We can get some informations from the internet. 6.赘词现象多发

eg:I hope you can return back to our school soon. eg:We'll hold a party on next sunday. 7.近义词的误用

eg:The school requests that all the students should wear the school uniform. eg:I quarreled with my teacher about my grades. 8.基本词汇拼写错误

eg:This will be done immediatly. 9.前后人称不一致

eg: The boy was born in a poor family but she works hard. eg:We watched a few movies and we loved it. 10.动词原形做主语/宾语

eg:Take a walk after dinner is very good for you . eg:At that moment,I didn't feel like take a walk. 11.逻辑主语与主句主语不一致

eg:Preparing dinner,the doorbell rang. eg:Walking in the street,a car hit an old man. 12.一个简单句出现两个谓语

eg:There was no work to do,he went back home. eg:I received you email,I was very excited. 13.中式英语

eg:Next week have a party.

. 五：句型：

1.祈使句+and/or+陈述句

Eg:If you work hard，you will succeed.

=________________________________ Eg:If you don't hurry up,we'will be late. =__________________________________ 2.形容词，副词比较级：the+比较级，the+比较级

Eg:If you work hard,you'll get good results. =_______________________________________

3.形容词做状语

Eg:We are tired and hungry.we return to our hotel. =________________________________________ 4.with复合结构，做状语和定语。

eg:He stared at me,and his mouth was open.

=_________________________________ eg:As the time passed by quickly, I improved a lot. =_____________________________________ eg:The woman is my sister.The woman holds a baby in her arms. =__________________________________________________ 5.状语从句

省略：when/while/once/unless/although...+doing/done eg:Be careful when/while you are crossing the street. =_______________________________________________ eg:When one is offered help,one often says“thank you.”or“it's kind of you.|”

=____________________________________________________ 6名词性从句

What impresses/interestes/shocks/frightenes/amazes/surprises/saddenes/entertaines/amuses/benefits

sb

most

is (that)................... eg:Literary book interests me most,especially those by famous

writer =_________________________________________ (2)that's because+句子(那是因为.....) that's why+句子(那是......的原因）

the reason why........... is that........

.........的原因是因为.......... eg:I met with an old friend on the way,so I was late for the appointment.=__________________________________________

=___________________________________________

=__________________________________________

7.定语从句：

1.As we all know,books are the source of knowledge.

=___________________

,books are the source of knowledge.

=__________________

are

the source of knowledge. 2.My favorite sport is playing football,and it can makes me feel relaxed and refreshed. ____________________,which+can do......... 8非谓语动词：定语

eg: The girl is standing there.I know her.

=_______________________________ eg:There will be a film at the new century cinema tomorrow afternoon.its name is Lost in Hong Kong

=_______________________________________ 9.非谓语做状语:分词做状可表示时间，原因，结果，条件，让步，伴随等

eg

I stood by the door and didn't dare to say a word. =_____________________________________________ eg:He comes home very late every evening,and it makes his wife very angry. =____________________________________________ eg:If you go straight down the road,you will find the department store. =______________________________________________ eg:Because I know that you like Chinese traditional culture most,I'm writing to invite you. 10.倒装：

1.not only...but also...... eg:We will not only have some shows,but also we will have some activities. Not only

__________________, but also we will have some activities. 2.only in this way,can we+do.....

only by doing ,can we+do......... 翻译：仅用这种方式，我们能够保持健康并且过幸福的生活。

__________________________________________________ 11.强调句：it is/was+被强调部分+that/who...........

eg:You like Chinese culture most. =___________________________________ 12.感叹句：

what+a(an)+adj.+n.+主+谓！

=how+adj.+a(an)+n.+主+谓！

eg:It is an interesting trip. =________________________________________ 13.虚拟语气：

It is high time that ..........did/should do....... eg:It's high time for us to take strong measures. =___________________________________________ 14.谚语：(Just) as an old saying/proverb goes(says),“___________.”

翻译：正如谚语所说的，不劳则无获。

________________________________________________ 六：大胆使用基本的修辞手法：

比喻：所有学生都在忙着准备考试。eg: All the students aree busy preparing for the coming exams.

All the students are as busy as bees preparing for the coming exams. 夸张：我感觉压力很大。

eg: I feel a great pressure.

I feel as if I were under a mountain and i can't even bteathe. 拟人：

我感觉所有的同学都在嘲笑我。

eg:I feel all my classmates laughing at me.

I felt as if even the birds on the trees are laughing at me.

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