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最近我校对高一学生入学一个多月来的学习生活适应情况做了一个调查，情况如下。请你用英语表达下表的调查内容，并提出个人观点。60%的学生认为1.高中学习很有压力；科目难度大，课后作业多；2.没有时间参加课外活动要求：1.词数100个左右；2．文章开头已给出，但不计入总词数。40%的学生认为1.适应并喜欢高中生活；2.课程更有趣，活动更丰富，受益匪浅我的观点或建议……参考词汇：coursen.课程；benefitvt.对……有益；stressfuladj.有压力的stress/pressuren.压力surveyn.调查Recently,asurveyhasbeencarriedoutinourschoolwhetherthefreshmenhaveadaptedtothelifeinseniorhighschool.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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最近我校对高一学生入学一个多月来的学习生活适应情况做了一个调查，情况如下。请你用英语表达下表的调查内容，并提出个人观点。60%的学生认为1.高中学习很有压力；科目难度大，课后作业多；2.没有时间参加课外活动要求：1.词数100个左右；2．文章开头已给出，但不计入总词数。40%的学生认为1.适应并喜欢高中生活；2.课程更有趣，活动更丰富，受益匪浅我的观点或建议……参考词汇：coursen.课程；benefitvt.对……有益；stressfuladj.有压力的stress/pressuren.压力surveyn.调查Recently,asurveyhasbeencarriedoutinourschoolwhetherthefreshmenhaveadaptedtothelifeinseniorhighschool._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

一：过渡句

从表中，我们可知不同的学生对此持有不同的看法。

Key words or phrases:______________________________________ _______________________________________ Sentences: 1.______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ 2.______________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ hold/have ; different ; opinion / view / idea There be ; hold ; according to From the survey, we know different students hold/have different

opinions about it.

According to this survey, there are different views among

the students. 二: 60%的学生认为高中学习很有压力

Key words or phrases:______________________________________ _______________________________________ Incorrect Sentences: 1.______________________________________________________

______________________________________________________ 2.______________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________ Wonderful sentences: 1._______________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________ 2._______________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________

think ; in Senior High school ; feel / have ;

pressure / stress / stressful ; great / high/big There are 60% students think the life in Senior High school is

very terrible. They have big pressure. There are who/that 60% of the students thinks that the pressure is very high at Senior

High School.

think Most of the students think the study in Senior High school is

very stressful. It is reported that 60% students think it is very stressful for them

to study in Senior High school .

三:科目难度大，课后作业多

Key words or phrases:______________________________________ 1.______________________________________________________ 2.______________________________________________________

Wonderful sentences: 1.______________________________________________________ 2.______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________

course ; difficult / hard ; a lot of / too much ; There be The courses are difficult more than those at Junior High School. ____________ more difficult Everyday , they have too many homework to do after class. Every day much The courses are becoming more and more difficult.

They have to do more homework after class, which leaves them

little time to do exercise and activities. 四：没有时间参加课外活动

Key words or phrases:______________________________________ _______________________________________ _______________________________________ Incorrect Sentences: 1.______________________________________________________ 2.______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________

have no/little time to do sth. ; take part in There is little time left to do sth. ; join in after-school activities ; activities after school __________ They have no time to take part in after school

activities. after-school There is little time left for us to join activities after class. in

五：40%的学生认为他们适应并喜欢高中生活

Key words or phrases:_______________________________________ _______________________________________ Incorrect Sentences: 1.______________________________________________________ 2.______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________

Wonderful sentences: 1._______________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________ 2._______________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________

adapt to ; be/get used to sth. ; like / love/ enjoy / be interested in / fall in love with

Have 40% students enjoy the Senior High school life.

40% of

the students used to the Senior High School life

and enjoy it. are 40% students think they have adapted to the new life in Senior

High school and are becoming interested in it.

There are 40% students thinking they are used to the new life and have begun to fall in love with it.

六：课程更有趣，活动更丰富，受益匪浅

Key words or phrases:_______________________________________ _______________________________________ Incorrect Sentences: 1.______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ 2.______________________________________________________ Wonderful sentences: 1._______________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________ 2._______________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________

Interesting/funny ; take part in ; join in ;

all kinds of; enrich; benefit (greatly) ; learn ; colorful / rich They think the courses is more interesting and the activities

are more colorful. are

kinds They can take part in all kind of after-school activities. The courses are becoming more and more interesting and the activities can also enrich their school life. What’s more, they can learn a lot from that.

They think the courses are more funny and they can also join in all kinds of after-school activities. So they can do much better in study./ So they can get a lot of benefit from it. 七：自己的观点或建议

Key words or phrases:_______________________________________ _______________________________________ Incorrect Sentences: 1.______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________

Wonderful sentences: 1.______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ 2.______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ 3._______________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________

In one’s opinion/view/idea/eyes ;

sb. thinks/believes ; study hard ; be helpful for sb.

In my opinion, pressure benefit our study. We will get

good grades if we study hard. benefits We should study hard and I believe that if we do this, we’ll

become much better and better. I can learn more knowledge and make more friends in Senior High

school, which can let me make it. So I love my senior high life very much. I think the senior high school life is very helpful for us. We can learn

more about how to deal with the trouble we meet in our study.

Recently, a survey has been carried out in our school whether the freshmen have adapted to the life in senior high school.

Most of the students think that there is much pressure at Senior High School. They think many courses are very difficult. And there are so much homework that they almost have no time to join in after-school activities.

However, other students think that the Senior High School life

is very good, and they like it. They think all the courses are more interesting and activities are fun. And they think taking part in these activities benefits themselves.

I think any stress is good for us, which can make us try our best to study. Hope we all learn well. Come on!

Recently, a survey has been carried out in our school whether the freshmen have adapted to the life in senior high school.

From the results of the survey, we can find that different people have different opinions. 60% of the students hold the opinion that life in senior high school is very stressful. The reasons are as follows. Firstly, the subjects they are learning now are obviously more difficult. Besides, they have to do endless homework after class, which leaves them no time for exercise and other activities.

On the contrary/However, others say they have adapted to the new life and have begun to enjoy it. They say that they find the courses more interesting and the activities more colorful, which surely benefit them a lot.

As far as I'm concerned/In my opinion, we should balance our study and other activities and do everything well. Only in this way can we learn more and enjoy our life better.