Writing优质课教案整理

Period 4 Integrating Skills

1.理解并能够自主运用重要语言点,如cover, be divided into, take part in的用法。

2.把握重点句式“make +宾语+宾语补足语”的句式特点,掌握表达“……也是……”的句式。

3.积累语言学习的技巧,形成适合自己的语言学习策略。

1.

n.

鼓励;激励 2.

n.

流利;流畅 3.

n.

误解 4.

v.

包含 5.

n.

制度;体系;系统 重点单词

6.

n.改正;纠正 7.

adj.失望的 8.

n.少年 9.

vi.消失 10.

n.文凭 1.

the start of在……开始的时候 重点短语

2.be divided

被分成……

3.take part

参加 4.go to

上大学 —I’ve just been to my first language class.

重点句式

—Oh, really? So have I! 写作讲座

电子邮件写作

cover

v.to place sth over or in front of sth in order to hide or protect it; to include sth

阅读下列句子,注意cover的意思及用法。

She covered her face with her hands.她双手掩面。

The survey covers all aspects of the business.调查包括这家企业的各个方面。

The lectures covered a lot of contents.这些讲座涉及的内容极为广泛丰富。

通过观察以上句子,我们发现cover作(1)

词,意思是“(2)

”。

盖住

看完

采访

Ⅰ.写出cover的含义

1.The revision covers everything we learned last week. 2.The mountain is covered with snow all the year round. 3.We need $700 a month to cover the rent. 4.It would not be easy to cover ten miles on that amount of petrol. 5.Many reporters will be sent to cover the 2016 Olympic Games. Ⅱ.单项填空

(2014江苏)—How much do you know about the Youth Olympic Games to be held in Nanjing? —Well, the media

it in a variety of forms. A.cover B.will cover C.have covered D.covered (

) (

) (

) (

) (

)

take part in

阅读下列句子,注意take part in的意思及用法。

We all took part in the sports meeting held last month. 我们都参加了上个月举行的运动会。 When will you take part in the tree-planting?你什么时候参加植树?

通过观察以上句子,我们发现take part in的意思是“

”。

take part in, join, join in和attend的用法区别: take part in

通常指参加群体性或集体性活动,并发挥一定作用

join

join in

attend

通常指加入某一组织或团体,join sb in (doing) sth“同某人一道参加……活动”

指参加活动,多指参加小规模的活动,如“球赛、游戏”等,常用于日常口语中

常指参加会议、典礼、婚礼;上学;听讲座、报告、音乐会等

选词填空

join; take part in; attend; join in (1)I will

the important meeting to be held next week. (2)Would you like to

the English test? (3)When did you

the League? (4)They will

us

the game.

—I’ve just been to my first language class.我刚上完我的第一堂语言课。

—Oh really? So have I.哦,真的吗?我也是。

翻译句子

(1)他是个好学生,你也是。

(2)如果你不去参加婚礼,我也不去。

电子邮件写作

假设你是小明,你购买了一部iPhone 6手机,因有质量问题,要求该公司更换。请根据下列要点,用英文写一封电子邮件。

要点:1.手机不响铃,不能发短信;该产品已售完,无法更换;型号新,无配件,无法维修;

2.要求公司尽快予以更换。

注意:1.词数100左右; 2.电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。

参考词汇:配件

spare part Dear Sir, I am writing to you for the mobile phone of iPhone 6 I bought on 20th Apr.2015 at Tele Mall in Wuhan, China.

Thank you for your consideration. Sincerely yours, Xiaoming

1.命题分析

英文的e-mail和中文的信件的写法大致相同,但稍有差别。一般来说,英文的e-mail大体包括五部: (1)标题栏

一般写在左上角,包括发件人的姓名、地址、发件日期、收件人的姓名、地址以及邮件主题。排列格式: FROM:发件人的姓名、地址

DATE:发件日期

TO:收件人的姓名、地址

SUBJECT:简单明了地介绍信的内容。可以是单词、短语或句子。

(2)称呼

位于正文的开头,顶格写,后加逗号。怎样称呼要视发件人和收件人的关系而定。若是同学、朋友可直呼其名;若是长辈或上级,要在姓名前加上称呼或职位。

(3)正文

正文要简单明了。简单的问候之后,便开门见山地说明目的。如果内容很长,可以就重点作简单的介绍,把详细的内容以“附件”的方式发送。

(4)信尾客套话

e-mail的客套话很简明,如Yours, Thanks等。

(5)签名

一般写在左下方,有时也可写在右下方。签名视两人的关系而定,可签全名、昵称等,只要对方明白就行。

2.布局谋篇

本文属于电子邮件格式。内容部分是投诉所买的iPhone 6的问题。

(1)电子邮件的开端,在文中可以省略。

(2)称呼:可用Hello / Hi, ... (3)正文

①开头(说明发邮件的目的,若回复邮件,通常先说什么时候收到邮件),如: I am writing to you to ask about ... ②

邮件主体

根据汉语提示介绍相关情况。

③

总结全文并适当发挥。

3.写作模板

Dear

,

I am

(写信人的身份).I venture to write you a letter concerning

(抱怨的内容). The focal point of the complaint is

(抱怨的中心点).For one thing,

(抱怨内容的一个方面).For another,

(抱怨内容的另一个方面).Honestly speaking,

(客观的评论), but

(抱怨产生的原因). All in all, there is still much room for improvement.Before I take any further action, it is my hope

(表达本人的愿望).Thank you for your time and kind consideration. Sincerely yours,

4.词汇翻译

(1)发短信

(2)至少一个月

(3)没有配件

(4)等那么长

5.翻译句子

(1)我把手机带到销售商那里,但是我被告知同一款手机已经卖出去了。

(2)要是没有恰当的配件,要修好该手机是不可能的。

(3)听到这个消息,我感到非常惊讶和失望。

Dear Sir, I am writing to you for the mobile phone of iPhone 6 I bought on 20th Apr.2015 at Tele Mall in Wuhan, China. Ten days after that, ①it didn’t ring and can’t send short messages. Then I took it to the seller, but I was told that the model had been sold out and I had to wait at least three months for a new one. Later I went to the repairman. He said since it was a new model in China, ②it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts. ③I was so desperate on hearing that. How can I wait that long? ④Therefore, I require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month. Thank you for your consideration. Sincerely yours, Xiaoming

选词填空

be similar to; look forward to; be divided into; at the end of; go to college; take part in; at the start of; all over the world

1.We have similar opinions; my opinions

his. 2.He is a great traveler and has moved about

. 3.He suggested that our class should

five groups. 4.The players were nervous

the game.

5.The daughter

seeing her parents after many years’

departure. 6.You’ll never

if you drop out of high school. 7.He

a swimming competition last week. 8.I ought to be fit for work

the month.

●温馨贴士

本课时核心部分是“电子邮件写作”,思维导图如下:

参考答案

知识体系梳理

重点单词: 1.encouragement 2.fluency 3.misunderstanding 4.cover 5.system 6.correction 7.disappointed 8.teenager 9.disappear 10.diploma 重点短语:

1.at 2.into 3.in 4.college 思维探究与创新

重点单词探究

品句会意

(1)动

(2)掩蔽;盖;包含;涉及

即学即练

Ⅰ.

1.包含

2.覆盖

3.支付

4.走完

5.采访

Ⅱ.

C 考查时态。根据本句中的well可知后者对青奥会很了解。这主要是因为媒体多种形式的报道,本句使用现在完成时体现出过去所发生的事情对现在的影响。句意:“你对即将在南京举行的青奥会了解多少?”“了解很多,媒体以多种形式对青奥会进行了报道。”

重点短语探究

品句会意

参加

即学即练

(1)attend (2)take part in (3)join (4)join; in 重点句式探究

即学即练

(1)He is a good student,and so are you. (2)If you don’t go to the wedding. Nor will I.

写作讲座探究

写作指导

4. (1)send short messages (2)at least one month (3)without spare parts (4)wait so long 5. (1)I took the cell phone to the seller, but I was told that the same model had been sold out. (2)It is impossible to repair it without the right spare parts. (3)I felt very amazed and disappointed on hearing that. 技能应用与拓展

基础智能检测

1.are similar to 2.all over the world 3.be divided into 4.at the start of

5.is looking forward to 6.go to college 7.took part in 8.at the end of