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Skills on Proof Reading -------改错解题技巧

藁城三中 贾素领 Learning Goals : You are expected to:

1) Be clear about what are the most common mistakes tested in a proof reading; 2) Fully understand the limerick on proof reading and mater some basic rules. 3) Consolidate the rules through practice and writing. Teaching procedures

Step I.

Warming up Enjoy a wonderful song

Step II. What kinds of mistakes are commonly tested?

考点

题量

动词

名词

形容词年份

和副词

代词

关联词

介词

冠词

全国Ⅰ

2 1

3

1

1

1

1

2017

全国Ⅱ

2

1

2 1

2

1

1

全国Ⅰ

2

1

1

1

3

1

1

2016

全国Ⅱ

3

1

0

2

2

0

1

全国Ⅰ

3

1

2

1

1

1

1

2015

全国Ⅱ

3

1

2

1

1

1

1

合计

15

6

10

7

10

5

6

A limerick 动词形，名词数。

还要注意形和副。

代词格，细领悟。

介词短语须关注。

习惯用法要记住。

冠词连词常光顾。

StepⅢ.

Explore the limerick in details through practice.

一、动词形(谓语；非谓语) 1.动词的时态和语态错误.

⑴.2016年四川卷：Both Dad and I panned to do something on Mother’s Day. We get up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went shopping. ⑵.2016全国卷I：Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables and high quality oil are using for cooking. 2.主、谓不一致的错误(特别注意：过去时改为一般现在时，主谓一致)

⑶.2014全国卷II: My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of flowers.

⑷.2017全国卷II：When summer came, they will invite their students to pick the fresh vegetables.

3.非谓语，细辨别(to do/doing/done)

①. and 连接的非谓语形式前后一致

②.动词用法；固定短语

③. Doing/done主被动错误

④.动名词作主语

⑸.2016全国卷II：We can choose between staying at home and take a trip.

⑹.2016浙江卷：He would ask who we were and pretend not to knowing us.

⑺.Greatly encouraging, I began to get my life back on track.

⑻.Walk quickly is difficult for an old man.

⑼. The film is very interesting. It is worth see twice. ⑽. However, the rest of the students interviewing hold the opposite opinion.

二、名词数

指名词单、复数形式及可数与不可数的用法错误。

三、还要注意形和副

1.修饰名词及系动词后用形容词；

2.修饰动词、形容词、整个句子用副词; 3.比较级和最高级的误用

四、代词格

1.前后人称不一致。

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2.人称代词，物主代词,反身代词的误用。

3.不定代词的误用及混用。

五、介词短语需关注

主要考查习惯搭配方面的基础知识，其错误表现形式主要有三种：多词、少词和搭配错误。

六、冠词、连词常光顾

1. a, an, the的误用、缺失及多词

2. 连词

but，and，or, so和although的用法错误

3. 从句引导词误用

①. 2016全国卷II：If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money.

②. 2016全国I：My uncle says that he never dreams of becoming rich in the short period of time.

③. 2017全国卷I：…,I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was.

④. 2018 质检一: I’m also sending you a few records of our daily conversations, from that you can hear real American English.

⑤. It may be useful to you as English teacher.

⑥. 2016全国卷II：My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday.

⑦. 2016全国卷I：

Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. StepIV. 实战演练

改错

Exercise1 改编自2017年质检一书面表达

How’s everything going? As your birthday is drawing near, I’ve prepared gift for you. It’s a Chinese painting “bamboo”, that I specially drew for you.

In Chinese culture, bamboo carries many best wishes and excellent quality. On one hand, it stand straight and stays green all year round, but it’s always full of life. I wish you as strong and energetic as them. By the other hand, it’s hard outside but hollow inside. If comparing to a bamboo, one is usually considered to be strong-willed and modest. All in all, we use bamboo to represent a noble and gently person.

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I hope you like the gift and wish you to a happy birthday. Exercise2改编自2017年全国卷二书面表达

I am writing to invite you attend the Chinese paper cutting art exhibition to be hold in the art gallery from 8：00 am to 5：00 pm on next Sunday in our city center.

Paper cutting is the traditional art form in China, that has a history of more than 1,500 years. People often decorated their homes with paper cutting during festivals and weddings. In this exhibition, you can see amazed paper cutting with all kinds of patterns. Beside, there are famous artist who will perform how to cut paper on the spot. I wish that you could grasp this opportunity to learn traditionally Chinese culture further.

Looking forward to your reply.

StepV

Consolidate the skills in writing (group work)

假定你是李华，你想邀请在中国留学的英国好友Peter观看京剧表演，但Peter不在家，你给他写张留言条，包括以下内容：

1、你到Peter家的目的；

2、介绍京剧（Beijing Opera）；

1. 我想要邀请你跟我下周一起去看京剧。

2. 京剧是中国传统戏剧(theater)的一种形式，它有近200年的历史（定语从句）。表演者（performer）通过唱和跳舞的方式（介词短语）来表演历史上发生的（doing/done作后置定语）故事。我们见面时我会告诉你更多关于京剧（用代词代替）的事儿。

3. 我真诚地希望你能接受我的邀请。

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StepⅥ

Homework

Make a summary by yourself. Draw a mind-map about the common mistakes