Learning about Language教学设计及教案分析

Writing suggestion letter Teaching goals: 2.

Help students to understand how to write suggestion letter. 3.

Through exercise to enable students to properly give suggestion. Important points: Key sentences, key structures

Teaching steps 1.Enjoy two passage of giving suggestions and tell which one is better and why. Dear Sam

I’m sorry you are having trouble in learning English . However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you. I think you should listen to the teachers carefully in class and review the lesson in time after class. you should read loudly in the morning reading. In this way, you can improve your spoken English. Thirdly, it would be a good idea to watch English films and listen to English songs. Follow my advice, you can become more interested in learning English. Best wishes.

Yours,

Miss Yang Dear Sam

I’m sorry you are having trouble in learning English. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you.

First, it is important to listen to the teachers carefully in class and review the lesson in time after class. If you do this, you can learn well. Secondly, it is important to read loudly in the morning reading. In this way, you can improve your spoken English. Thirdly, it would be a good idea to watch English films and listen to English songs. By doing this, you can become more interested in learning English.

I hope you will find my advice useful.

Yours,

Miss Yang

2. Pick out some useful sentences from the passage. And then brainstorm some other useful structures. Some useful structures to start the letter. 1. I’m sorry you are having trouble in............ /I know you have trouble in…after reading your letter. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you. 2. It is nice to receive your letter. You have asked me for my advice about your problem. Here is my advice. 3.You have asked me for my advice about__(问题), and I will try to make some suggestions here 4. After I read your letter in the newspaper, I am sorry to know that

…

5. I am very glad to hear that you want to…

6. I am writing to you for the purpose of -----

Sentences to give suggestions（body）

1.I think you should...If you do this, you can... 2.It is important to ...In this way, you can ...... 3.As far as I am concerned, it would be a good idea to...By doing this，you can... 4. I would like to suggest/recommend that…

5. If I were you, I would…

6. In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action. 7. When it comes to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you can…

Some useful sentences to express your wish 1. I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions /advice practical/useful/helpful. 2.I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration. 3. I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard. 4. I feel that it would be beneficial if you stick to it. 5. In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.

3. what else do we need to consider when we are writing?

Who are you writing to? person, tongue

Some important sentences to join the passage together 并列关系

and, more than that, also, moreover, in addition, what is more, for example 转折关系

although, however, on the contrary, yet, otherwise 顺序关系

first, second, third, then, after, before, next

因果关系

as a result, for, thus, because, for this reason, so, therefore, as, since, because of/owing to/on account of/as a result of

归纳关系

as a result, finally, therefore, in short, thus, in conclusion, so, in brief, in a word

4.

Exercise: let’s have a try! Pay attention to those we have discussed.

你的朋友mark准备去月球旅行，但是不清楚需要注意什么，感到很焦虑，给你写信寻求帮助。现在你要写一封信给他一些去月球中应该怎么做，以消除他的忧虑并享受旅行。内容包括：

1.

没有地球这样的大气层，太阳辐射强。要注意保护自己的皮肤不要被灼伤。

2.

失重，避免身体和食物飘走

3.

祝他旅行愉快。

太阳辐射：solar radiation

灼伤：

burn 失重：weightlessness

5.Ask students to share their work and the whole class will assess their writing. And then give my version.