Using LanguageⅡ第一课时评课稿

Proof Reading 短文改错备考

广州市第六十六中学英语科

刘丽芳

班级：高三（3）班

教师：刘丽芳

教材版本：人教版

授课时间： 40分钟

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本班多数学生思维活跃，对英语感兴趣，能积极参加各种讨论活动，但苦于英语表达词组句型贫乏，不懂得拓展写作内容; 2、

本班学生属于本科临界生，英语平均分在70分左右。

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本班作为普通文科平行班，对于学习较吃力的同学，尤其是7个基础薄弱的体育生，应尽量让他们在合作学习的模式下参与学习，设计任务时由易到难，难易适中，在活动过程中给予他们必要的支持和鼓励。

本节内容是高考中短文改错的备考，主要介绍6种短文改错的常见错误，旨在引导学生归纳总结几种常见错误，引导学生掌握方法，从而提高短文改错的存活率。

1、知识目标：

1）学生了解短文改错的基本考点；

2）学生基本掌握6种常见错误，能够从多角度发现错误，再通过操练来巩固所学；

2、技能目标：

1）学生在能够熟悉几种常见错误的基础上，能有针对性地识别文章里的显著错误；

2）学生在识别的基础上能对错误进行改正并得分。

3、策略目标：

学生能有效地运用积累、归纳等认知策略在学习过程中理解、掌握和延伸所学内容。

4、情感目标：

1）学生能养成良好的学习习惯，增强短文改错的信心，；

2）学生能在合作学习的轻松氛围中提升自我。

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采用任务型教学法和合作教学法

2、

教具：电脑，投影仪，黑板

课型：语法复习课

一、学生分析

二、教学内容分析

三、教学目标

四、教学方法

教学媒体

五、教学步骤Teaching procedures：

Step 1: 近三年真题总结

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(105词/10句)

文

文

词/8句)

(93词/8句)

名词（2017）

代词（2015,2016）

冠词（2015,2016,2017）

数词（2017）

介词（2015,2016,2017）

连词（2015,2016*3,2017）

谓语（时态/语态，情态动词结构）（2015*3,2016*2,2017*2）

非谓语（2015）

词性误用（2015,2016*2,2017）

比较等级（2017）

其他（2015much/many,2017 late/later，2017so much nervous…）

Step2：二模回顾

本文段有7处错误，每句最多有两处错误，每处仅涉及一个单词的增加、删减或修改。

Daniel was born with a brain disorder. Because of it, he was differently from other children.

As a boy, he likes to play alone and acted strangely. To many of his classmate, Daniel

seemed unusual and we laughed at him. This hurt Daniel deeply, but he became very shy.

As a teenager, things were changed. Daniel found he could solve difficult maths

problems almost instantly. He also discovered another talent: he could learn to speak a

language very quickly. Today, he is fluent in twelve languages.

As adult, Daniel has overcome his shyness. He has written two books and now he

travels constantly to talk to people about his life. (110 words，10sentences)

Step3：观察表中的典型例析，填写考点类别和对短文改错的启示。

考点

典型例析

对改错的启示

(2017全国Ⅱ卷) Besides, they often get some 关注_______的数量和谓语useful informations from the Internet.

动词或者句子内容是否匹

information 配

(2014全国II卷) For example, we can do reading 可数名词大于一时

for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour 要用

____；

hours ________一般没有

every day.

复数形式。

(2016全国Ⅱ卷) If we go on a trip abroad, we can 明确所使用的代词

broaden your view and gain knowledge we cannot

的指代对象，即到

our

底是指代人还是

get from books.

物，是男还是女，

是单数还是复数。

确保三个一致：

前后的

_____一致; 前后的

_____一致; 前后的_____一致。

(2017全国Ⅲ卷) When I look at this picture of myself, I realize how fast time flies… This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of

your high school days.

my (2017全国Ⅲ卷) About one month after this photo 在A and /or B或A, B and Cwas taken, I entered my second year of high school 这类结构中，A, B, C的形式and become a new memberof the school music

应一致，常见常用的如并列became 谓语的时态形式应该一致

club.

(2015全国I卷) When I was a child, I hoped to live __________的时态

in the city. I think I would be happy there.

须与上下文的时态

thought 一致。

(2017全国I卷) It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle of the road. 副词->_________

sudden (2016全国Ⅰ卷) My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. ______->________

honesty (2015全国II卷) Mom said, “How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.” Tony

_______->_______

terribly promised her that this would never happen again. ——

(2016全国Ⅱ卷) If we stay at home,it is comfortable but

there is no need to spend money.

转折关系

-> _______ and

(2017全国Ⅰ卷) Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so

_________-> but

_________ once I started the car, my mind went blank. (2017全国Ⅱ卷) In their spare time, they are

逗号后的非限制定语从句interested in planting vegetables in their garden, 不该用that that is on the rooftop of their house.

which (2017年全国Ⅰ卷) In the summer holiday following my eighteenth birthday, I took driving _______的缺失

lessons.

I still remember how hard first day was.

the (2016全国Ⅲ卷) At the first, I thought I knew ______的______ everything and…

(2016全国Ⅰ卷)My uncle says that he never dreams of becoming rich in the short period of ______的_______ time.

a

Step 4：Exercise下列各小题中有一处错误（多一个单词、少1个单词、错一个单词），请指出并改正过来，然后说明理由。

1 (2017全国Ⅰ卷) The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up!” “Slow down!” “Turn left!”

2. Sixteen years later, I met a family that bad needed help. I gave them enough money to get through.

3. Thirty years ago, my world almost fell apart. I had operation and was fired.

4. (17茂名一模)My parents expect me to study abroad, and go abroad is also my dream. 5.(2017全国I卷) Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, but once I started the car, my mind goes blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. 6. (17茂名一模) Even though I clearly learn that it isn’t a easy job, I’ll overcome all the difficulties.

7. We don’t need to spend much time going to the shops or markets with such a good number of different choice on the Internet. 8. The houses are beautiful and I hold the belief that your parents will find the house to my taste. 9. It is convenient to travel from here to other areas of the city. You will definite be happy here. 10. Among them, I like my English teacher best, who is enthusiastic but popular with us.

11. The data have been suggested that the price will go up in the near future. 12. It was the first time I have lived away from my home, so I found it difficult to fit in.

Step 5：Challenge yourself! Mr. Johnson is a hard-working teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with his work.

With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have

made him ill. “He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him.”

That is which other

teachers say. Yesterday afternoon, I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but

outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw

him lying in bed, looking at some of the photo we had taken together. I understood that he

missed us just as many as we missed him.

Step 6: Homework. I still remember my middle school life in Tianjin. Iwas then in a school for students from

Tibet. As we all left home at early age, we met lots of problem in our daily life. We had to do

the washing, cleaning and shopping by us. However, we seldom felt lonely or helplessly. We

enjoyed our happy life. At weekends, we would played basketball, swimming in the pool or

go for a picnic. We were living in a big family. We treat each others as brothers and sisters. If

any one of us had any difficulty in our life and study, the other would help him out. It has

been five years when we graduated from, but those memories are as sweet as ever before.