Using LanguageⅡ教学设计与反思

Writing—How to Write a Letter of Advice

江门市新会第一中学

李娟

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Writing—How to Write a Letter of Advice Enable students to write a letter of advice by using some useful sentence patterns and transitional words. Apply sentence patterns of giving advice to writing a passage; polish a passage by using transitional words.

explanation and practice; group work, individual work Multi-media

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Step one: lead-in Read aloud a letter of advice.

Step two: introduction of the structure of a letter of advice beginning: state your purpose body: give advice & reasons ending: express your hope

Step three: sentence patterns A. state your purpose: 1. I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on…

2. I am writing to express my views concerning…

3. Knowing that…, I’d like to give some suggestions.

B. give your advice: 1. It’s helpful/ important to…

2. It would be a good idea to…

3. I would like to suggest that…

C. express your hope: 1. I would appreciate it if you could take my advice into consideration. 2. I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. 3. I'm sure if you take my advice, you will …

Step four: the use of sentence patterns Try to make sentences according to the Chinese given below using different sentence patterns learned above. 表明意图：1. 你给Jane回信就如何减肥提建议。

提出建议：2、健康饮食

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3、多锻炼

4、喝足够多的水

表达愿望：5、我相信如果你接受我的建议，你会变得更加苗条和保持健康。

Step five: polish a passage using transitional words

Step six: writing 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。

1. 参加中文学习班；

2. 看中文书刊、电视；

3. 学唱中文歌曲；

4. 交中国朋友。

注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Step seven: comment and share

Comment on your writing according to the following criteria, and then share it to the class.

评分标准：

1、是否覆盖所有内容要点

2、是否恰当使用语法结构

3、是否运用多样句式和丰富的词汇

4、是否使用连接词

5、全文结构是否完整合理

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memorize the sentence patterns;

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polish your writing after class and then hand it in