Using LanguageⅡ课堂实录及点评

高考备考写作指导（1）

＊简单句到高级亮点句的蜕变

(1). 非谓语在写作中的运用

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to do

(作

，作

表动作

)

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doing （作状语，常表

、

、

和

，作

表

，

关系）

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done （作状语，常表

和

，作

表示

，

关系）

○1.

（有这么多工作要做）, he worked from morning to night.

○2.

(面对如此多作业), we have to stay up late.○3.

（当遇到问题的时候）, we can turn to teachers

for help. (2). 并列句在写作中的运用

常用连接词如下：

1）and/or/or else/but/so /for/ as well as/

both...and/ not...but... not only...but (also), neither...nor , either...or..,

2）however/therefore/otherwise/ while/ still/yet等连用。

○1. He is our teacher. He is also our friend.

○2. Our teachers shouldn’t be too kind or strict.

(3).复合句在作文中的运用

复合句由就是主句或几个从句，由关联词相连接，如定于从句,状语从句或名词性从句。复合句的使用不仅能使句子结构清晰，层次分明，上下文更加流畅，同时也能充分展示作者运用较复杂语法结构的能力。如：

○1. Water is important because man can’t live without it.

○2. Protecting our environment is very important.

○3. The life of Senior 3 is busy and hard.

We should persist in studying hard.

○4. You study hard and you can succeed.

(4).其它固定句式（强调，倒装，感叹，祈使句，复合结构）

固定句式可以使文章的语言充满层次感，从而较好地反映考生

的语言运用能力。如：

○1. We can only lead a happy life when everyone takes care of the

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environment. (倒装句)

○2. I’m lucky to be his student. (感叹句)

○3. We make great progress with Mr. Wang’s help and encouragement. (强调句）

○4. We should turn off the light when we leave the classroom.

(祈使句)

○5. There is too much homework to do, so we stay up late at night.

(with 的复合结构)

○6. When some people are taking a shower, they make water run

all the time. (with 的复合结构)

(5). 高级、亮点词汇的运用

在作文写作中，除多用复杂句式外，多运用高级、亮点词汇同样能让你文章出彩和与众不同，给阅卷老师留下深刻印象。如：

○1. A good relationship between teachers and students is good for our study.

○2. It’s very

important to protect our environment.

○3. I think only in this way can we get on well with our teachers.

○4. I think we will realize our dream if we study hard.

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