Writing名师教学设计

英语书面表达——基础写作训练

一，

素材积累

1，

看见

see - -catch sight of

2，

遇见

meet –come across 3，

遇见meet with –encounter 4，

拥有have---possess 提高develop/improve—promote 5，

替代replace—substitute 6，

面对face—be faced with 7，

容忍bear—put up with 8，

解决solve—deal with 10决定decide—determine/make up one’s mind

二，

谚语

1，

The best mirror is an old friend. 老朋友是最好的镜子

2，

An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 一天一苹果，医生远离我。

3，

A good beginning is half done. 良好的开端是成功的一半。

4，

Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it. 世上无难事，只怕有心人。

5，

Never leave today’s work for tomorrow. 今日事，今日毕，

三，

课前回顾

1，

句子成分

2，

句子种类

简单句的五种基本句型

并列句和并列连词

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3,高级表达

四，

课堂训练

（一）

句型改写

1，

People suggest that the conference be put off.（被动语态）

改为_______________________________________________________

2，

She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.（非谓语动词做状语）

改为_______________________________________________________

3，

Once it is seen ,it can never be forgotten.（省略）

改为______________________________________________________

4，

If the weather permits, I will come tomorrow.（独立主格）

改为_______________________________________________________

5，

To his surprise ,the little girl knows so many things.（主语从句）

改为_______________________________________________________

6，

The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written.（定语从句）

改为_______________________________________________________

7，

This is the house. A famous writer once lived in it.（定语从句）

改为_______________________________________________________

8，

Though I’m weak ,I’ll make the effort.（倒装）_

改为_______________________________________________________

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二)，扩写作文

假如你是成都七中的学生李华，你的网友Peter听说美国第一夫人米歇尔访问了你的学校，他想了解情况，请按照以下要点给Peter回一封信，具体情况

1，

发表演讲，并与学生互动

2，

与40多名学生上了一堂英语课

3，

参与了一堂太极课

同时发表自己的感想，注意

1，

词数100左右

3，

可以适当增减细节

4，

参考词汇

太极

——Tai Chi Dear Peter,

In the last letter,

you ‘d like to know something about Ms, Obama’s visit to our school.____

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例文

Dear Peter, In the last letter, You’d like to know something about Mrs.Obama’s visit to our school .Now ,I am writing to tell you something about it. Mrs,Obama

gave us a speech and interacted with us. She had an English class with 40 students. And she also had a Tai Chi class. The First Lady made me know more about American education and culture. I hope

that our school can organize more activities like this.

Yours sincerely

Li

Hua 扩写训练

1，

I’m writing to tell

you something about it.

2,Mrs,Obama gave us a speech and interacted with us.

3,She had an English class with 40 students.

4,And she also had a Tai Chi class.

__________________________________________________________________________ 5,I hope that our school can organize more activities like this.

__________________________________________________________________________

五，

课后巩固

根据汉语提示，完成短文

____________________________________(这是我

的妈妈)，an ordinary housewife. Just now _________________________________________________(她正坐在那里)，watching TV.

Much to my surprise ______________________________________________(她正在哭泣).I don’t know ______________________________________________(她为什么这么悲伤).In order to make her happy ,_________________________________________(我给她讲了一个有趣的故事)，Sure enough _______________________________________(她禁不住笑起来).

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