Using LanguageⅡ优质课教案设计

The Participles as the Adverbial in Writing 分词作状语在写作中的运用

I.

Teaching aims II.

Lead-in

Enjoy an English song Yesterday Once More and pay attention to two sentences using the participle as the adverbial.

III. Read the examples from the textbooks aloud. 1. Using his hybrid rice, farmers are producing harvests twice as large as before. 2. Arriving at a strange-looking house, he showed me into a large, bright clean room. 3. The Christian Church rejected his theory, saying it was against God’s idea.

4. Unfortunately, his father died, leaving the family even worse off. 5. It means that more heat energy tends to be trapped in the

atmosphere causing the global temperature to go up. 6. Having studied volcanoes now for many years, I am still amazed at their beauty.

7. Not having seen a rainbow before, he was very excited. 8. The first person to arrive was Tony Garcia from Colombia, closely followed by Julia smith from Britain. 9. Worried about the journey, I was unsettled for the first few days. 10. Hit by a lack of fresh air, my head ached. Conclusion 1.

分词作状语有三种形式

一般式

doing 现在分词

完成式

过去分词

否定式：在分词前加____ 。

2. 现在分词与过去分词的区别

分词短语作状语时，要看分词与句子____ 的关系。

如果句子的主语是分词动作的执行者，用_________；

如果句子的主语是分词动作的承受者，用__________.

IV. 分词作状语的几种情况

1. They sat there and talked happily. =They sat there, ________ happily.

(表

) 2. When they heard the bad news, they couldn’t help crying. = ________ the bad news, they couldn’t help crying.

(表

) 3.Because I had spent all night reading the documents, I was very tired the next day. = ________ all night reading the documents, I was very tired the next day. (表

)

4. If I had been given a little more time, I would have worked out the problem. = _______ a little more time, I would have worked out the problem.

(表

) 5. We set off very early, so we arrived there ahead of time. = We set off very early, ________ there ahead of time.

(表

) 6. Although they were tired, they went on working. = Although ______ , they went on working.

(表

)

1

Conclusion：

1.分词作状语，可表示伴随、时间、原因、

____

_____ ______，表示伴随时可转化为并列谓语，其他情况一般可转化为相应的

_________。

2.分词作状语，有时前面还带有连词，即连词+_____/_____形式。

You must be careful _____________________ (过马路时）. I won’t go to their wedding _____________ (除非得到邀请）.

V.

分词作状语在写作中的运用

a. 基础写作分话题常用句型填空

1. 经历感受

①We bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees on the morning of March 12th, __________________ (talk and laugh) all the way.

②_____ (see) the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement.

③_____ (move) by his words, I praised him for his deeds. 2. 学习生活

①

I almost buried myself in books every day, _____ (go) over my lessons and doing a lot of exercises. ②

When _____(face) with difficulty, I usually choose to refer to relevant learning materials or Web pages.

3. 人物简介

①

_____ (bear) into a wealthy family on December 11,1911, Qian Xuesen was so clever that he was regarded as a “super talented” boy in his childhood. ②

_________________(graduate) from Shanghai Jiaotong University in 1934, he went to America for further study. 4. 地点介绍

①

________(cover) a total area of 7,434 square kilometres,

this city has a population of about ten million. ②

_______(locate) in the south of China, Guangzhou is considered as one of the most modern cities in our country. 5. 自然灾害

①

The snowstorm lasted for a whole day, greatly ______ (affect) the life of people. ②____________________(not experience) earthquakes before, I was very frightened. ③

It is reported that the heavy rainfall caused rivers to break their banks, ______ (wash) away bridges. 6. 调查报告

①

A quarter of students will tell their teachers or parents about their troubles and ask them for help, _______ (hold) that teachers and parents are trustworthy and have rich experience. ②When ____(ask) how they felt about the Spring Festival, most said they enjoyed it .

7. 节日介绍

①_____ (fall) on August 15th of the Lunar calendar, Mid-autumn Festival is an influential traditional festival observed by us Chinese. ②After dinner, children will play with their own toy lanterns or set off fireworks, ______(have) fun with each other. ③

In 2010, the government declared Tomb Sweeping Day as one of the legal holidays, _____ (give) the whole nation one day off. 8. 正反观点

2

However，others are against the idea, _____ (say) that learning English is useless. b.

Practice

[写作内容] 学校英文广播站向全校同学征稿。请你写一篇英语稿件，介绍同学们都很感兴趣的光棍节。

光棍节（Singles Day)

时间

11月11日

起源

1993年由南京大学4个男生发起的以11月11日为光棍节的活动。

1. 就这样，只是由几个朋友想出来的主意慢慢变成了大学里的一项传统。

2.现在说到光棍节，让人想到的就是网购。

发展

3. 2009年阿里巴巴第一次在光棍节举行网购狂欢活动，为顾客提供了折扣。其他电商如京东看到阿里巴巴的成功后决定效仿。

现状

今年光棍节，阿里巴巴在

24小时内的销售额已达100亿美元以上，打破了去年和前景

的记录。但阿里巴巴并不满足于此，而是决定把光棍节的网购狂欢全球化。

参考词汇：阿里巴巴

Alibaba

京东

JD

电商

ecommerce

效仿

follow suit

网购狂欢

online sales [写作要求]

只能用5个句子表达全部内容。

[评分标准]

句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

Swap your writing with your partners and check each other’s work, following the criteria.

Content（内容）

All the points covered?

Five sentences? Language（语言）

Any mistakes? (tense, spelling, grammar)

The participle as the adverbial used? Coherence（连贯）

Any necessary transitional words?

3

c. 读写任务

阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150左右的短文。

There was excitement but a little heartache too for millions of bargain hunters yesterday as China's Singles Day evolved into what is probably the world's biggest online shopping event..

The 50,000-plus merchants on Alibaba's consumer-oriented Tmall.com took in 13.2 billion yuan (US$2.1 billion)，

the company said, after discounts of at least 50 percent were promised on a massive range of goods. Sales on Alibaba's Taobao marketplace took the 24-hour total to 19.1 billion yuan. The Tmall total was more than three times the amount raised on the same day last year and more than double the amount Shanghai retailers took during last month's week-long National Day holiday. It also surpassed the US$1.26 billion online retailers in the US earned on last year's Cyber Monday, a marketing term dreamed up in 2005 to encourage online shopping for Christmas. However, many people failed to secure a bargain yesterday because of technical glitches and exaggerated price cuts. "I waited for the moment to come but what I found were nothing but constant error alerts," said Cathy Lu, a Shanghai office worker who had been carefully putting a dozen or so items on her wish list over the past a few days. "I was either stuck in the shopping cart or the payment page. I gave up and went to bed with huge disappointment." Others said there were few genuine discounts as retailers had merely raised price tags so they could boast of huge price cuts.

Tmall yesterday apologized for the "inconvenience" the technical glitches caused.

[写作内容] 1.

以约30词概括上面短文的内容要点；

2.

以约120词就“光棍节网购狂欢”发表看法，要点包括：

(1)

你是否赞成光棍节网购狂欢？为什么？

(2)

列举一次你或你身边的人光棍节网购的经历；

(3)

你对光棍节网购狂欢的建议。

VI. Homework

4