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英语写作：应用文专项训练

(一)建议信(Suggestion Letters) 一．建议信常用句型：

1.I’m glad to receive your letter asking my advce on how…

2.I’m

sorry that you are having trouble/ difficulty in ... I’m writing to give you some suggestions/ give you a hand. 3.The following are my suggestions/My suggestions are as follows. 4.When it comes to/As for... I would like to suggest/recommend... 5.You may/might as well do.../You’d better do.../why not do...

6.If I were you, I would... 7. In my opinion/Personally/As far as I’m concerned, it would be a good idea if you…/I feel that it would be beneficial if you... 8. I hope you will find these ideas useful. 9. I hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you. 10.I hope you will take my advice into consideration.If you have any questions,please do not hesitate to tell me. 二．建议信常用模板：

Dear ________ , You have asked me for my advice with regard to（关于） __________, and I will try to make some constructive（建设性的） suggestions here. In my humble（低下的，卑微的） opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: _____________ （建议的内容）. I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. Good luck with you. 三．例文：1.假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Lisa将于2022年来中国张家口参加冬奥会，她来信咨询如何提高汉语水平，请你用英语给她写一封回信，提出建议并说明理由

Dear Lisa, learning that you will come to China for the 2022 Winter Olympic Games, I’m more than delighted. As for how to improve your Chinese, I’d like to give you some suggestions. To begin with, make more Chinese friends in your daily life, with whom you can practice your spoken Chimese. What’s more, listening to Chinese songs and watching Chinese movies are also good ways, which can broaden your horizons and gain a better understanding of Chinese. Last but not least, we can keep in touch with each other by writing letters in Chinese, mainly benefiting your writing level. Keeping a diary is also a great choice I hope you will find these suggestions beneficial and make great progress in Chinese. Yours Li Hua 2.假如你是Tom,你的中国朋友李华刚到英国作交换生，下周被邀请参加一个家庭聚会，请你给她写一个邮件，给她一些建议。

1.穿着整齐；准时到达。

2.不必带礼物，要带一件小礼物即可。3.注意餐桌礼仪，不要高声喧哗，不要喝太多酒。4.告别时要表示感谢

Dear Li Hua I am glad to know you are enjoying yourself in the Uk.As for the family dinner, I’d like to give you the following advice. As you are invited to a family party, dressing smartly and tidily is necessary. It would be better if you are puncutal. Generally speaking, there is no need to bring gifts.

If you would like to bring something, a little gift will be OK. The English care about table manners a lot so do remember to mind your table manners at table. Never should you drink too much or make noise. Before you say goodbye to the host and hostess, please don’t forget to convery your gratitude to them.

I hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you. Yours sincerely Tom 四．练习：假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Jack正在为即将到来的考试焦虑不已，严重影响了生活和学习，为此写信向你求助。请你根据以下要点，用英语给他回一封信。

1. 制定复习计划，树立信心；2. 坚持锻炼身体；3. 保持良好睡眠。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Jack,

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Yours, Li Hua

建议信参考范文：

Dear Jack, I am sorry to hear that you feel extremely nervous before an important exam. I'd like to give you some suggestions. First, make careful plans before exams to master what you've learned completely. It will help you build up your confidence. Second, take proper exercise regularly, which will help you keep healthy and energetic. Last but not least, don't stay up late studying. It's very important to have a good sleep at night if you want to be energetic during the day.

I hope my suggestions can help you reduce the pressure of exams and perform well in them.

Yours,

Li Hua