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高考短文改错主要考点归纳

高三年级：王小晓

教学目标：

1）学生在课前完成2015,2016,2017这三年的高考短文改错，为课堂上的高考短文改错考点归纳做铺垫。课堂上指出学生在完成这三篇短文改错中出现的典型问题，并归纳近几年高考短文改错的六个必考考点。

2）强调短文改错解题步骤和怎样规范答题。

3）

在了解六个必考考点的基础上让学生通过独立思考和小组合作两个环节完成2018年高考短文改错。

教学难点：

能牢记六个必考点和两个常考点，每个人争取短文改错这个大题能得4--6分以上！

教学步骤：

课前：（课前对答案，讲解）

【2015全国一卷】When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the

mountains are green.Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret it.

【2016全国一卷】My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.

【2017全国一卷】In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the

instructor's orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank, I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up!”

“Slow down!”

“Turning left!”

I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.

课中：Step1: 4.连词

（主要考察并列句l（and,but，so,or),定语从句(which,who,that,where等)，状语从句(when,if,because等)

2015Ⅰ卷

1

1

1

1

2016Ⅰ卷

2017Ⅰ卷

2018 I卷

1

1

1

3

1

1

2

1

1

4

5. 冠词(a,an,the的基本用法和固定搭配，参考高考调研P343页画出的重点）

考点设置

（抓好六个必考点）

1. 动词

(一般现在时和一般过去时的转换)

2.名词（绝大多数是考单复数的转换）

3.形容词和副词的转换

6.介词（固定搭配）

其他

1

1

1

1

1

1

1

2

1

1

1

1

4

3

除六个必考考点以外，补充两个常考考点：

7.

代词（主要考人称代词的前后不一致），参考高考调研P345做的笔记

8.

非谓语（doing,done）

Step2: 参照上面的表格，在三年高考题中依次把六个必考点找出来，进一步熟悉短文改错一定会考什么。

Step3: 针对六个必考点，练一练单句改错。

1)Some classmates suggest we go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. 2) To her disappointment, her parents don't agree with her decision at first. However, Li Hui would not change her mind. 3)He give me some advices on how to write like a real writer. 4) Christie was one of my best friend at high school. 5)We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost. 6)Dad and I were terrible worried. 7) With the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes. 8)We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sit by the lake listening to music.

9) As result, the plants are growing everywhere.

10) Besides, a friend is always good listener when you need one. 11) The more friends we have, the more we can learn from one another, but the more pleasure we can share together. 12)Having tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o'clock at night.

短文改错做题步骤：

1）把六个必考点和两个常考点写在草稿纸上。立足语篇理解的基础上，逐句排查。（一遍）

2）对照必考点和常考点查漏补缺。（两到三遍）

3）最后确认无误再写在答卷上，注意格式！

Step4:独立思考+讨论，在文章里找出十个错误（重点找六个必考点，并按照归纳表格里的六个必考点顺序依次写在横线上）。

【2018全国一卷】

During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents.I find a big change there. The first time I went there, they were found living in a small house with dogs,ducks and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. They also had a small pond which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years,but he agreed. 1_______________,

2________________,

3_________________ 4_______________,

5________________,

6_________________

课后：

【2017百校联考】Last Saturday, I, with a friend of mine, were having a picnic in a park when it began to rain heavily. We packed everything up rapid and were ready to leave. My friend, her hair was already wet, suddenly couldn’t move and speak. Her eye were rolling and she was about to lose consciousness. I was so frightening that I didn’t know how to do. Luckily, a woman on a bicycle appeared. Struggle with the rain, she managed to call an ambulance. My friend has recovered the next morning. I am so grateful for the woman. But I haven’t even got chance to thank her.