Writing教学实录及点评

A teaching plan of writing

教学目标Teaching aims:

1.知识目标Knowledge aim Students can learn how to write an article about a hot topic--microblog . 学生可以学习如何写一篇关于热门话题的文章——微博。

2.能力目标Ability aim Students can master the writing skills of making an outline for an article . 学生可以掌握撰写文章大纲的写作技巧。

3.情感目标Emotional aim Students can learn to work cooperatively with others. 学生可以学会与他人合作学习。

教学重难点

Teaching important and difficult points:

教学重点teaching important points: 1.Students can discuss the hot topic “microblog”;

学生可以讨论热点话题“微博”；

2.Students can write an article about microblog. 学生可以写一篇关于微博的文章。

教学难点 Teaching difficult point: Students can work individually to write an article about microblog. 学生可以单独工作，写一篇关于微博的文章。

教学方法Teaching methods:

Discussion, Presentation 教学工具 Teaching tools:

1.The multimedia 2.The blackboard

教学过程Teaching procedures：

Step 1 热身Warming-up:

Ask and answer

T:Today the hot topic we will talk and write about is microblog. How much do you know about microblog? Can you answer the following questions? (Show the following 3 questions on the ppt) 1) what is the use of microblog? 2) what are the advantages and disadvantages of microblog? 3) what is your opinion about using microblog? Let’s have a discussion. Step 2 写前活动Pre-writing:

Have a discussion

T: Now, the students in row 1,row 3 and row 5 turn around and join in your group to have a discussion.（Divide the students into 10 groups , with each group including 6 students）

T: everyone, you must talk in English.For each group’s leader, not only need you organize your group well, but also you need to take some notes of what your members talk about. SS: Discuss in groups about 10 minutes. （During the discussion, the teacher should join in them to express opinions or give some advice or offer some help when it is necessary.）

Step 3 写中活动While-writing:

1、Making an outline

T:Ok. Since each group has discussed about microblog, now let’s write an article about it.What factors should your article contain? Please make an outline . You can use some key words or phrases to make your outline. It is not necessary for you to write down the whole sentences. SS: Work individually to make an outline for their article at first. and then ask their partners to give them a hand.such as some words’ usage, some phrases’choice. activity 2、Making a draft

T: Now , please make a draft of your article.Now you need to write using the whole sentences to make your draft this time. SS: Finish their draft by themselv Step 4 写后活动Post-writing:

1、Individual work

SS: Look through their own article to correct some obvious mistakes alone,such as spellings and the tense . 2、Pair work

SS:Exchange their articles with their partner and ask their partner to read their article to point out the mistakes.And at the same time,they need to give each other some suggestions about writing,such as : how to express the same meaning better. 3、Summary:

To sum up the points for attention of how to write this kind of articles. Step 5 Homework:

Write an artical with the title of “the popularity of micro-blogging”

1．近年来“微博”越来越流行，许多人利用“微博”来表达心声、交流想法。

2．微博流行的原因。

3．微博可能引起的弊端。

4．你的看法。

5．不少于80个单词。

板书设计Blackboard design：

板书略

教后记Reflection after teaching ：

This class is about writing. Themain content of writing is micro-blog. Based on the actual situation of students: some students are afraid of writing, while some students feel that there is no words to write, and even some of the students lack of vocabulary. Therefore, before writing, let the students participate in the group discussion to complete the composition outline and the main points with the parters, so as to further complete the writing task of the writing. This will reduce the difficulty of writing , and also cultivate the spirit of cooperation with their classmates.

The inadequacy of this lesson is that in the discussion, some students do not communicate in English, but speak in their native language and then translate them in English. To remind students that composition is not a word for sentence translation.