Using LanguageⅡ名师教学视频（文字实录）

Unit 3 Inventors and Inventions Name___________ Class_____________ Writing---教学设计

Learning aims: 1. To develop our speaking, reading and writing ability

2. To enable us to write a letter applying for a position. Step 1 Writing preparation 1.

Read the recruitment ad (招聘启事)to find out what kind of person they need.

An Assistant Wanted

We decide to invite an assistant to work in our company to aid Mr. Dyson to invent more useful things.

The applicant should have a master’s degree in mechanical engineering, who has related experience in designing new projects will be preferred. (优先)

If you are interested, please send an application letter to Mr. Dyson.

James Dyson Inventors Company

2. Make a dialogue with you partner about how to write the application.A:. Can you give me some advice on how to write the application? B: Why do you think you are suitable for this job? A: I have got a.... I have some related work experience.... B: Anything else? A: ... B: ... 3 Imitations Let’s enjoy a good sample of this application on page 27. Step 2. Learn to Write 1. The structure of the letter Let’s revise what we have read just now by translating these sentences.

I The beginning: A. 我想申请成为你公司的助手。

I would like to _________ ____ become an ____________ in your ____________. II. The body:

B. 我将于2008年获得北京大学机械工程硕士学位。

I expect to ____ ____ __________ __________in mechanical engineering from Beijing University in 2008. C. 我在设计新物品方面有一定的经验并且有很强的专业技能。

I have got _____________ _______ designing new projects and _____________ good _____________ ________________ in my subject. D. 我相信我具备贵公司需要的品质和经验。

I understand that I ________ _____ _________________ _______ ______________ that you need for the ______________in your company. III.The ending E. 如果你们能够雇用我, 我将不胜感激。

I would be ____________if you would __________________ ______________ me in your company.

2. Conclusion

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How to write an application for a job. Read the recruitment ad;

Analyze (分析) your own ability

Write it

Correct it

Make a perfect final version.

Step 3 Writing practice. 1.

Read the ad carefully and underline the important information.. An English Secretary

Wanted

Our company needs an English secretary, less than 25 years old. The applicant must be majored in English and fluent in oral English. The main responsibilities of the secretary include using the computer, typing... If you are good at literature, singing and sports, also if you are active and have great characteristic, you will be preferred.

Please send your application to B&B Company, Mr. Smith.

We’re looking forward to your coming.

B&B Company 2.

Analyze you own ability (Imagine that you are the right person) 

年龄

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学习情况及英语水平；

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兴趣和特长；

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性格特点。

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Some useful words and expressions. 

I have worked as….. 

I have got a Bachelor’s degree / Master's / Doctor's degree in…. 

I got the first prize in…. 

I am good at….. 

I am the top student in my class …

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I can speak….fluently. 

I have strong knowledge of

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I have highly developed ability to solve problems

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I own excellent communicating and organizing skills

4. Write it in 7minutes Dear Mr. Smith,

I learned from the newspaper that your company needs an English secretary. I am really interested in this position and hope I can work for you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2

5. Correct it and make the perfect final version. 6.

Let’s enjoy the sample Dear Mr. Smith，

I learned from the newspaper that your company needs an English secretary. I am really interested in this position and hope I can work for you.

I am 18 years old and will be graduating from Xinxing Foreign Languages School this July. I’m an excellent student, among the top 5 in my class of 50 students. I’m good at English, especially spoken English. I often use the computer and I type very fast. In my spare time, I read a lot. Poems are my favorite. I enjoy music very much too. Being an active young person, I like sports and outdoor activities. Besides, I’m easy to get along with and I like to make friends.

I would be grateful if you would consider employing me in your company.

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Sincerely yours, Li Hua

Writing tips:

要点要齐全, 句式要多变,

错误要避免, 书写工整是关键

Never speak the sentence that you have never heard.

Never write the sentence that you have never read. Step 4. 拓展训练

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拓展阅读(Read for information and more useful expressions and sentences about how to write an application. Read it, and finish not only the multiple choices but underline the useful words and sentences.

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拓展写作Try your best to write an application for this internship (实习)position. Internship research Job ---September 1, 2016 The Research Unit at Greenpeace International is offering a 6-month internship (实习)position. Research internships are based in Amsterdam, Netherlands as full-time positions (40 hours per week) for a fixed term of 6 months. Monitor, capture and organize information into databases for reports to ensure strategic information is available for Green peace’s campaigns and projects. This role is very detail-oriented(注重细节的), involving a few daily deadlines and administrative tasks within the research unit. Academic background in natural or social sciences (minimum of a Bachelor’s degree) is required. Master’s, or higher, in natural or social sciences, with environmental focus, is preferred.

Essential Skills / qualifications:

Strong knowledge of global environmental issues and motivation to achieve Green peace environmental campaign aims.

Must be fluent in written and spoken English and must have written and spoken fluency in, at least, one of the following languages: Spanish, French, Portuguese, Mandarin / Cantonese, German, Arabic, Russian, or Japanese.

Highly developed skills in computer use, including databases, spreadsheet and word processing. Proven high skill level of online research knowledge and content analysis.

Highly developed ability to solve problems, using various analytical techniques.

Required Personal characteristics

Self-confident, focused active and result-oriented 3

Highly stress resistance Flexible attitude to constantly changing tasks Self-motivated team player Excellent communicating and organizing skills The money pay is 800 euro. Please provide proof of legal ability to work in the Netherlands for the indicated period and indicate your date of earliest availability to start working. Apply for this internship by providing a single file, named ---insert your full name, including your detailed resume +motivation letter +detailed present contact details ( your email, home phone, mobile). Please indicate your grades achieved for any academic degree. Due to the large number of applicants we regret we are unable to respond to individual applicants. If you have not been contacted within 6 weeks of the date of your application, we regret that you have not been chosen for further consideration. Apply for the internship: Tony Sadownichik: tony.sadownichi@green peace.org CC; Human Resources department: Recruitment.int@greenpeace.org

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How long will the work in the Research Unit last? A.

3 months

B. 6 months

C. 1 year

D. 2 years. 2.

We learn from the ad that the Research Unit at Green peace International needs a person who_______. A. can speak at least 3 languages

B. has strong leadership

C. is able to solve any problem

D. has good computer knowledge 3. If you get the job, you will ____

A. have free time to do other full-time jobs

B. lead the Research Unit at Green peace International

C. work in Amsterdam, Netherlands

D. have chances to taken up advanced studies.

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