Writingppt课件配套教案内容

STEP 1 LEAD-IN Pictures------travel Last lesson we have learnt the passage My First Ride on a Train in module 3. It’s about travel.

Do you like travel? Why do you like travel? STEP 2 NEW LESSON 一

Next we’ll see another travel in an MV. videoSongs: 坐上火车去拉萨

坐上火车去拉萨

- 央金兰泽

山有多高

水有多长

通往天堂的路太难

终于盼来啊

这条天路

象巨龙飞在高原上

穿过草原

越过山川

载着梦想和吉祥

幸福的歌啊一路的唱

唱到了唐古拉山

坐上了火车去拉萨

去看那神奇的布达拉

去看那最美的格桑花呀

盛开在雪山下

坐上了火车去拉萨

跳起那热烈的雪山朗玛

喝下那最香浓的青稞酒哇

醉在神话天堂

My Travel to Lhasa(拉萨) on a Train Time:终于盼来啊

这条天路

象巨龙飞在高原上-----青藏铁路通车

Place:坐上火车去拉萨------拉萨

Persons:视频------我

What to do:去看那神奇的布达拉

去看那最美的格桑花呀

盛开在雪山下

Process:穿过草原

越过山川

幸福的歌啊一路的唱

唱到了唐古拉山

attitudes and emotions:载着梦想和吉祥，幸福

Results:跳起那热烈的雪山朗玛

喝下那最香浓的青稞酒哇

醉在神话天堂

作文第一步列出主要内容

My Travel to Lhasa(拉萨) on a Train

Time

attitudes and emotions Place

Persons

process

results

What to do 作文第二步用列出的每个内容写一个英语句子

My Travel to Lhasa(拉萨) on a Train Time:终于盼来啊

这条天路

象巨龙飞在高原上-----when the Qinghai-Tibet (青藏)Railway was finished in 2006 (7.1.2006) Place:坐上火车去拉萨------Lhasa（拉萨）

Persons:视频------I What to do:去看那神奇的布达拉

去看那最美的格桑花呀

盛开在雪山下------went to visit the Potala（布达拉）Palace（宫）

and see the most beautiful galsang（格桑）

flowers at the foot of the snow mountain Process:穿过草原

越过山川

载着梦想和吉祥

幸福的歌啊一路的唱

唱到了唐古拉山------went through the grassland , climbed over the mountains and sang happily all the way attitudes and emotions:载着梦想和吉祥，幸福------with a dream and for a good luck , happy

Results:跳起那热烈的雪山朗玛

喝下那最香浓的青稞酒哇

醉在神话天堂------danced to the music about the snow mountain , drank wine called Qingke and felt happy

My Travel to Lhasa(拉萨) on a Train

Time: when the Qinghai-Tibet (青藏)Railway was finished in 2006 (7.1.2006) Place: Lhasa(拉萨)

Persons: I

What to do: went to visit the Potala（布达拉）Palace（宫）

and see the most beautiful galsang（格桑）

flowers at the foot of the snow mountain Process:

went through the grassland , climbed over the mountains and sang happily all the way

Attitudes and emotions:

with a dream and for a good luck , happy

Results: danced to the music about the snow mountain , drank wine called Qingke and felt happy

作文第三步

分成三段

连句成文

作文3 paragraphs Para.1点出目的地

Para.2旅行的全过程

Para.3感受或希望

连句成文加入必要的连接成分

My Travel to Lhasa(拉萨) on a Train

I went to my favorite city , Lhasa,(我去了我最喜欢的城市，拉萨) when the Qinghai-Tibet Railway was finished in 2006.

During the journey to Lhasa , (在去拉萨的旅途中）I went through the grassland , climbed over the mountains and sang happily all the way.On the train,I was very happy with a dream

and for a good luck. Finally, I arrived in my destination.（最后我到达了目的地）

In Lhasa,（在拉萨）

I went to visit the Potala Palace and see the most beautiful galsang flowers at the foot of the snow mountain.What’s more ,(然后) I danced to the music about the snow mountain and drank a special wine called Qinke.

The travel is so unforgettable.(旅行非常难忘。) I’m looking forward to visiting Lhasa again.（我期望下次再去拉萨）

作文步骤总结：

第一步：列出自己要写的主要内容，如：time , place , persons , what to do , attitudes and emotions , process , results 第二步：用列出的每个内容写一个英语句子。

第三步：根据内容分成三段。把分散的句子连起来，加入必要的连接成分，组成三个段落，一篇文章。

二PICTURES

Composition: My Travel to Beihai Composition: My Travel to Beihai 第一步：每人确定一个题目，列出自己要写的主要内容，如：time , place , persons , what to do , attitudes and emotions , process , results 第二步：用列出的每个内容写一个英语句子。

第三步：根据内容分成三段。把分散的句子连起来，加入必要的连接成分，组成三个段落，一篇文章。

Activity 1 ：根据以上步骤写一篇作文

My Travel to Beihai Activity 2 ：

两人活动，把初步写成的短文读给同桌听。

同桌根据所听到的内容提出修改意见。

每人自己做最后润色修改

Activity 3 ：学生作文展示

三

作文步骤总结：

第一步：列出自己要写的主要内容，如：time , place , persons , what to do , attitudes and emotions , process , results 第二步：用列出的每个内容写一个英语句子。

第三步：根据内容分成三段。把分散的句子连起来，加入必要的连接成分，组成三个段落，一篇文章。

第四步：每人自己做最后润色修改。

STEP 3 HOMEWORK Go on improving the composition after class.