Writing公开课教案（教学设计）

Writing—想象类作文

一、写作要领

想象类作文是作者根据已有的生活经验和知识，超越实际生活来勾画从未见过的或者不曾出现过的生活图景的文章。写作时应注意以下几点：

1．采用记叙文或说明文的形式，围绕主题来逐一列举所给要点；

2．可采用第一人称或第三人称来叙述；

3．时态以一般将来时为主。

二、增分佳句

1．文章开头常用句式：

①Sometimes I dream about life in the future. ②I imagine life in the future from time to time. ③I am curious about future life. ④It is fascinating to image life in the future. 2．表达预测的常用句式：

①Maybe in the future we can ... ②There is a possibility that human beings will ... ③Perhaps some people will ... ④We will be living ... in the future. 3．文章结尾常用句式：

①I believe the dream will come true some day. ②In my opinion, the dream will be turned into reality one day. ③As far as I'm concerned, we will realize the dream sooner or later. 五步写作规范

[题目要求]

随着科技的发展，人们的生活发生了巨大的变化，人们对自己的未来充满了期待。请展开想象，以“An Outlook on Future”为题，描述一下将来人们工作、学习、生活三个方面的情景。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

第一步：审题构思很关键

一、审题

1．确定体裁：本文为描写未来的说明文；

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2．确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第三人称；

3．确定时态：主要以一般将来时为主。

二、构思

1．首先说明未来生活在各方面都会有很大提高。

2．然后逐一列出在智能机器人、高科技、环境、教育、旅游等方面具体的变化。

3．最后总结未来生活难以预测，但对其充满了期待。

第二步：核心词汇想周全

1．with the development of

随着……的发展

2．science and

technology

科技

3．as a result

结果；因此

4．be likely to

有可能……

5．achievement

成就

6．with the help of

在……的帮助下

7．living environment

居住环境

8．scientifically

科学地

9．get rid of

摆脱，去除

10．be thirsty for

渴望，渴求

11．on the whole

总体上，总的来说

12．lead a ...life

过着……的生活

13．for sure

确保，确定

14．in space

在太空中

第三步：由词扩句雏形现

1．随着科技的发展，人们的生活发生了巨大的变化。(简单句) With the development of

science

and

technology,

our

life

has

changed

a lot. 2．在电脑、机器人和其他高科技产品的帮助下，人们做的工作将会更少。(将来进行时) People will be working less with the help of computers, robots aqnd other hi-tech products. 3．人们的居住环境会更干净，因为人们开始科学地处理垃圾。(get rid of) The living environment will be cleaner ,because people begin to get rid of wastes more scientifically. 4．人们重视保护环境。(stress the importance of) People stress the importance of protecting the environment. 5．每个渴求知识的人都可以受到高等教育，无论他们年轻还是年老。(whether ... or ...) Everyone who is thirsty for knowledge can receive higher education, whether they are young or old. 2

6．未来是难以预测的。(主语＋be＋形容词＋to do) The future is hard to predict. 7．但是我们确切地知道先进的科技一定会给我们创造美好的未来。(advanced) But we know for sure advanced science and technology will shape our bright future. 第四步：句式升级造亮点

．用分词作定语合并句3和句4 The living environment will be cleaner, because people，stressing the importance of protecting

the

environment, begin to get rid of wastes more scientifically. 第五步：过渡衔接联成篇

An Outlook on Future

With the development of science and technology,

our life has changed a lot.

As a result, I think there are likely to be great achievements in every area.

People will be working ess with the help of computers, robots and other hi-

tech products. The living environment will be cleaner,

because people stressing the importance of protecting the environment,

begin to get rid of wastes more scientifically. Everyone who is thirsty for knowledge can receive higher education, whether they are young or old.

On the whole, people will lead a happy and free life and they can travel not only all over the world but also inpace . Though the future is hard to predict, we know for sure advanced science and technology will shape our bright future if we use it properly.

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