Task(2): Writing an advertisement: Skills building 3教学设计与反思

Learning Sheet for Task -Based Writing

Step 1 : Lead in (Watch the video and tell the main idea of the speech)

Step 2: Practice writing a summary. 阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

Bike-sharing has taken off in china far faster than in any other market. The market has become flooded with new companies in recent months. They use apps that allow users, after paying a deposit, to unlock the wheels with their smart phones. After the journey, users can leave bikes anywhere in public and pay a little money for the use. The service is very popular as it provides an effective solution to “the last kilometer” problem.

The promoting of the bike-sharing service is also raising questions about profitability, wide –spread bike destruction and theft, and growing government regulation. A hong Kong man who was arrested for throwing several bikes into rivers said he had no regret destroying them because the GPS devices in the bike give away users personal information, such as their location. 写作内容：1. 用约30个词概括上述内容

2. 用约120词发表你的观点，内容包括：

（1）支持或反对共享单车的推广

（2）用2-3理由支持你的观点

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Summary

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1.Tips:

读【写作内容】2，预测文章的theme 2)

预测文章与theme相关问题

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读并回答你预测的问题---key points 4)

用自己的语言改写key points 5)

依据逻辑重组

rewritten key points 6)

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Step 3: Write the second part of the composition.

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TIPS:

Structure of Part2

1) 表达你的观点或态度

（topic sentence）

From my own perspective, I strongly argue against/ am in favor of

the idea that…

2）说明理由

(衔接句+连接词）

There are many reasons for their failures/…..First of all/ In other words Secondly/ Actually…..

3）进一步举例说明

To make my opinion as plain as the nose on my face, I will take…as an example…../ For example,…./

for instance,…

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Steps for writing:

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Read and underline supporting facts 2.

Rewrite and extend the underlined key points 3.

Connect information in logical ways

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Polish up your writing

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1) polish up your writing

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读写任务套用句型与典例

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A．句型与典例：

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1.发表看法类（自己对…发表看法）: •

表示赞同:

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From my own prospective, I firmly hold the view that…. for the reason that ………./ In addition,….就我而言,我坚决支持……原因之一是……其次,……..

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表示反对:

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From my own prospective, I strongly argue against the idea that…… for the reason that……./ In addition,……\就我而言,我坚决反对……原因之一是……其次,…….

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2.说明重要性类: •

[提出观点]There is no deny the fact that +话题+plays an irreplaceable role in sth, for the reason that [正面论证]………. In addition…[正面论证]……

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[提出观点]From my own prospective, A is of great significance to B,

for the reason that [正面论证]……….On the contrary, if …[反面论证]

3.心得体会类

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①Having read the humorous story, I realize a kind thought should be always harbored by everyone, which can create a harmonious community for us.

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②After looking through the story, I was deeply touched/impressed. I am aware that a good communication is very important to preserve the relationship between parents and their children.

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③I was lost in thought after reading the story. It occurred to me that we shouldn’t be afraid of pain and that things that bring us pain can make us mature(=I came to realize that we…).

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4.经历感受类

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①The author’s story reminds me of the similar experience in my childhood. At that moment I was poor and couldn’t afford computers. I t was my friend Lily that offered to invite me to his apartment to share the computer with me happily.

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②What an unforgettable/embarrassing it is! In my case, I have ever been faced with the similar situation.

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③Based on what I experienced, it is well worth the effort to develop and build up self-confidence and self-respect and self-discipline.

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It is the same with our work. Only if we stick to our jobs will we succeed in the end. •

5.提出建议:

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①Suggestions on how to ….can be listed as follows.

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②Here are my suggestions on how to…..

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③First, it’s advisable to ….., which will of great help to ….In addition, ……Last but no least,…….

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