Learning about Language公开课教学设计模版

正反观点对比类议论文

【文体指导】

本模块要求写一篇正反观点对比类议论文，写作时应注意下面几点：

1．主体结构：本文可分为三部分：

1)开头部分：论点的提出；

2)第二部分：使用论据来论证论点；

3)第三部分：得出结论或提出解决问题的措施或建议。

2．主体时态：常用一般现在时。

3．主体人称：议论文常用第三人称。

【常用句式】

1．引出讨论话题

(1)Recently...had a heated discussion about whether...or not. (2)There have been many reports of... (3)People hold different opinions about... (4)The reasons for that are as follows. 2．对比双方观点及陈述理由

(1)表达支持的：

Some people think it...；Some are in favour of...；Some support...；The majority of them think...；Many of them are for...；There are many advantages of...；...play an important part in...；...be of vital significance...；...benefit a lot from... (2)表达反对的：

But I disagree；Others are against...；Some hold the different view that...；There are also some disadvantages of... (3)承接词汇：

firstly；secondly；besides；in addition；what's more；furthermore；in a word；in short；even worse... (4)引出另一方的转折词汇：

however；on the other hand；while；on the contrary；whereas... (5)表明作者的看法及理由：

in my opinion；in my view；Personally，I think...；Taking everything into consideration，we should make good use of...；Only in this way can we do... 【写作任务】

现在，网购正在被越来越多的消费者所接受。但是，由网上购物所引发的问题也引起了人们的高度关注。请根据以下内容，写一篇英语短文，分析网上购物的利与弊，并简述自己的观点。

1．利：方便快捷，便宜，产品种类多。

2．弊：无法保证质量，容易受骗，网上付款有风险。

注意：词数100左右。

参考词汇：网上购物online shopping

方便的convenient (adj.) 便利

convenience (n.)

保证ensure (vt.)

质量quality (n.) 【审题谋篇】

第一步

明确要求

本文为网购利与弊的正反观点对比类议论文。

第二步

确定段落

Part 1

引出议论话题

Part 2

网购的益处

Part 3

网购的弊端

Part 4

我的观点

第三步

词汇热身

1．比较喜欢做某事

prefer doing sth 2．益处和弊端

3．人们普遍认为

4．挑选

advantages and disadvantages it is widely believed that...

choose from cause many problems 5．引起很多问题

6．确信

be sure about 第四步

句式升级

1．随着互联网的流行，越来越多的人喜欢网上购物。

(一般表达)As the Internet is becoming popular，more and more people prefer going shopping online. (句式升级)With the Internet becoming popular，more and more people prefer going shopping online.(with复合结构) 2．网上有很多广告，顾客容易上当受骗。

(一般表达)There are lots of advertisements on the Internet，

so customers are easily cheated. (句式升级)There are lots of advertisements on the Internet，making

customers easily cheated.(现在分词短语作结果状语) 3．在我看来，我们在享受网上购物的便利的时候，应该小心。

(一般表达)In my opinion，we should be careful while we are enjoying the convenience of shopping online. (句式升级)In my opinion，we should be careful while enjoying the convenience of shopping online.(现在分词短语作状语) 【连句成篇】

With the Internet becoming popular，more and more people prefer going shopping online.In fact，there are both advantages and disadvantages in online shopping. Generally speaking，it is widely believed that there are several advantages as follows.We can buy things on the Internet without leaving our houses.Shopping online can save a lot of time for us.What's more，there are many different kinds of goods for us to choose from，which may be cheaper than those in real shops. However，shopping online also causes us some problems.Since we can see only pictures of goods on the Internet，we are not sure about their quality.Besides，there are lots of advertisements on the Internet，making customers easily cheated. In my opinion，we should be careful while enjoying the convenience of shopping online.