Using LanguageⅡ特级教师教学实录

Book8 Unit3 Inventors and inventions Writing(Letter of application

【学习目标】

By the end of this lesson, you will be able to (1). be clear about the forms of writing a letter (2). learn some useful strategies(策略) for writing a letter of application (3). grasp some useful sentence structures and expressions for a letter of application (4). write a good letter of applying for a job

【学习过程】

Step1范例赏析

假如你是刘雪，从中国日报上了解到某公司需要招聘一名工程师。请用英语写一封求职信。内容应包括：学历、能力、工作经历。

Dear Sir,

I learn from China Daily that an engineer is needed in your company. I wish to apply for the position 。

I’ m Liu Xue. I expect to get a Master’s degree from Beijing University in 2010. In the past few years, I have got experience in designing new projects and developed good professional competence

in my subjects. I worked in my holidays for a company that designed engines for jeeps. I helped them design several parts of the new engine. It made me think I would like to work in a company like yours. I understand that I have the qualifications and experience that you need for the personnel in your company. I would be grateful if you would give me an early reply.

Yours faithfully, Liu xue 【设计意图】：给出一篇例文，让学生去阅读和赏析，学生对自荐信有初步的认识和了解。

Step2【总结归纳】

文章基本结构

人称：________________，时态：________________

Para1:开篇句往往交代________________，并表________________

Outline

Para2:介绍________________，表明自己的优势和特长。

Para3:介绍________________，说明自己适合从事这份工作。

Para 4:末尾__________，表达盼望________________的迫切愿望并表明__________之情。

基本格式

1.开篇点题，交代消息来源、写明写信的目的

常用句式: ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

2.介绍个人简历，重点放在与所申请的工作相关的知识技能的介绍上，要有详有略

常用短语: graduate from…

be good / skilled at be expert in have rich working experience in be in good health enjoy doing sth in one’s spare time

be strict with get on well with 常用句型：

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

3.

自我评价，表达盼望尽快收到答复的迫切愿望并表明感激之情

常用句式: ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【设计意图】：学生自主合作探究，归纳总结出自荐信的基本结构和基本格式。学生对自荐信的结构和格式有了更深刻的理解和认识，为后面的写作打下了结实的基础。

Step3 实战演练

你从网络上得知需要招聘2022届世界杯志愿者，写一封申请信。

Dear Sir or Madam, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【设计意图】：学生独立完成写作后，同桌之间互相修改作文，最后展示自己的文章。锻炼了学生的写作能力和短文改错能力。

教学反思：

1.More oral practice should be included.

2.More chances should be given to students to show their writing.

3. Evaluation should be improved.