Using LanguageⅡ教学实录及点评

Writing—A Letter of Advice 高三7班

邹馥励

Teaching Goals（教学目标）: 1.

Teach students to write a letter of advice according to the writing requirement and grading standards. 2.

Lead students to revise a letter of advice. Key Teaching Points（教学重点）:

1. Teach students to write a letter of advice with proper contents, structure and expressions. Difficult Teaching points（教学难点）：

1. How to teach students learn to revise and improve their letters.

Teaching methods（教学方法）: Task-based teaching and learning, Cooperation learning , Discussion. Teaching tools（教学工具） : The multi-media

Teaching procedures（教学步骤） Step 1.

Lead-in & introduction 1.

Introduce the writing style, functions, structure and contents of a letter of advice

This step is to help students learn about the key information of a letter of advice.

Step 2.

Useful expressions 1.

Help students build up some relevant expressions and sentence patterns by finishing exercises.

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Teach students how to use the expressions in their own writing. This step is to help students learn to use more expressions in their writing.

Step 3. Revise letters 1.

Teach students the writing requirements of a letter of advice, including the structure, contents, cohesion, length, etc. 2.

Lead students to pay attention to the excellent expressions and grammar patterns of the writing.

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Ask students to comment on the writing and revise the writing. This step is to teach students how improve their writing.

Step 4. Model Essay Appreciation 1.

Read out the model essay together. 2.

Appreciate the model essay. 3.

Conclusion: how to improve your writing and what grammar patterns should we use. This step is to lead students to appreciate and learn from the model writing.

Step 5. Homework Revise your own letter of advice.

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