Writing教案1

外研版高中英语

必修1 Module 6

The Internet and Telecommunications

教学设计

河津市第二中学

高一英语组

柴华梅

Book1Module6 The Internet and Telecommunications

Writing Teaching Plan

Instructor:

Chai Huamei

Book1Module6

Subject (Wrting) 本部分是Book1 Module6的写作部分，描述网络和通讯相关话题。此话题通常以议论文形式出现，而且以正反观点对比类文章最为常见。诸如Analysis of the text book 中学生该不该上网交友，中学生上学该不该带手机等。通过写作让学生掌握正反观点对比类文章的常见写法，包括结构、句型、词汇、表达等。同时培养学生学习、模仿、创作文章的能力，提高其写作水平的同时培养学生对待网络和通讯的正确态度。

该话题对学生来说并不难，对于要点论据大都能列举一二。只要给与范例，对结构和常见句型进行展示和指导，大体能写出文章轮廓来。此为Analysis of students 写作课的重点。难点在于学生能否用适当的话语把意思准确表达出来。因高一本班学生英语语言能力不是很强，对于要点往往只会逐字翻译，缺乏英文意识和长句高级句型的使用能力。因此要点翻译将是本课的难点。

By the end of the class, students should be able

Teaching aims School：河津市第二中学

Grade：Senior1

Date: Dec,6th,2017

1. to know how to write an Pros and Cons Essay; 2. to master some useful expressions; 3.to improve writing skills. To master the structure of Pros and Cons Essay and common sentence patterns;

The key points To improve students’ writing skills. To get students to take proper attitude toward the Internet and mobile phones.

The difficult points Teaching methods Teaching procedures

To express the ideas in proper sentences Exemplification, generalization and deduction Module 6

(Writing) Teacher’s activities Students’

activities Ask students

to read an example of Read the essay To let students Purpose Pros and Cons Essay and

and conclude the find out the basic conclude the basic structure of structure of

Pros structure of Pros Pros and Cons Essay

人们对于学生上网持不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于学生上网的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的看法。

赞成的理由：1.增长知识

2.广交朋友; and Essay Cons and Essay

Cons I.Structure（文

章结构）

Part 1 (开头)

Part 2（主体）

Part3（结尾）

Warming up

sample essay

反对的理由：1.沉迷游戏，影响学习2.损害视力3.交到不良朋友; 你的看法。

Recently going online has

become more and more

popular with students. Students have different opinions. There are some advantages for the students to go online. First, it can broaden our knowledge. Second, we can make many online friends.However, there are some disadvantages. Most students spend too much time

playing computer games instead of studying. What’s worse, going online too often can do harm to our eyes. Besides, without much experience, it’s easy for us to make bad friends and be influenced to do stupid things. So I think as students, we should use the Internet online properly. We should choose things which are valuable to our study and life. What’s more, we must place study, health and safety first.

Get students to be familiar with some expressions and transition words and phrases most used in Pros and Cons Essay

Part 1 Raise the topic.

1.There is a heated discussion on whether students should make friends online. Sentence patterns and expressions 2.With the popularity of the Internet and wide use of smart phones, people spend most of their free time on phones, and this has caused great concern. 3.Different people hold different opinions. 4.Views vary on this subject. Part 2 Express opposite views 1. Some of them hold the To master some expressions and transition words and phrases most used in Pros and Cons Essay

To prepare students for the following writing practice with the sentence patterns and expressions.

opinion that …. Some people are in favor of the idea that…

People who are for/against the idea think …

Some people believe that…. Others argue that …

However, …of them hold a different view. / hold the opposite opinion. 2.Transition words and phrases

并列关系：and, as well as

递进关系：besides, in addition, moreover, what’s more…

对比：

on the contrary, on the other hand…

Part3 Personal view personally, as for me, in my view, as far as I’m concerned The disadvantages outweigh the advantages.

Step One: get students to look through the given information审题

1. Style 体裁:_________ 2.Person人称:__________ 3.Tense时态:_____

To get some basic

information of the To help students Passage.

get some basic information of the Passage.

Pre-writing

根据以下写作要求，完成下列任务。

智能手机日益成为人们生活中的必备品，对于中学生上学应不应该带手机人们观点各异。请你分析手机进校园的利与弊，并谈谈你的看法。

Step Two : ask students to Translate the following sentences individually and show their answers on the blackboard in groups and check their expressions and better their sentences. 1.

随着科技的发展，手机越来越普及。

__________________________________________________2. 一方面，学生方便跟家人和朋友联系。__________________________________________________ 3.

另一方面，手机上网可以查资料和信息，解决学习中的问题。

__________________________________________________ 4.

而且，通过使用手机可以使生活丰富多彩，缓解学习压力。

_________________________ 5. （提出另一优点并翻译）_________________________

6.但是，学生花费太多时间在手机上，影响学习。

_________________________ 7.浪费金钱，造成攀比。_________________________ 8.损害视力，影响健康。_________________________ 9.（提出另一缺点并翻译）_________________________ 10.依我看来，（补充完整并翻译）_________________________

Translate the To check any following sentences individually.

Show mistakes in their translation and help them make more proper and their complicated answers on the sentences. blackboard.

Let students write their own Write the passage To help students

passage.

by themselves practice writing with the help of what they learned in the lesson While-writing

Ask students to sum up how to Sum up how to To know how to Post-writing write an argumentation.

write an write a Pros and Cons Essay

argumentation.

Ask students to

read essays of Read essays of To get students to Homework their classmates and try to their classmates learn from others’

learn from them. and try to learn mistakes as well as advantages. from them.

Teaching reflection

Module6

Pros and Cons Essay

1.Structure（文章结构）

Part 1 (开头)

板书

Part 2（主体）

Part3（结尾）

2.Translations