Using LanguageⅡ教学设计第二课时

高考专题------短文改错

广东省江门市新会陈经纶中学

梁美霞老师

I. 题型特点

1. 体裁：以记叙文为主。

2. 内容：100个词左右的学生习作，贴近学生生活。

3. 考点：名动冠代介连词性。

4. 考法：设置修改、增加和删除三种错误类型，8+1+1。

II. 解题方略

解题三步骤：1.浏览全文，弄懂文意，标出明显错误。

2.逐句阅读，依据考点，逐句寻找错误。

3.重读全文，仔细推敲，解决个别难题。

改错要高分，考点须牢记；根据考点找错误，又快又准。

III. 考点分析, 逐个击破

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名词考点归纳

（1）不可数名词没有复数，如：fun, advice, information, work(工作), homework, housework, progress, luggage, furniture, equipment, money等。

（2）可数名词前有these, those, several, few, many, a large number of, each of, one of, 或被大于1的数词修饰时，一定要用复数形式。

（3）名词的所有格

①… he stopped at a box of golden ball for Christmas trees. ②

I stayed there for one and a half hour and made sure that the girl was all right. ③

I first met Li Ming at a friend birthday party five years ago.

2. 介词考点归纳

主要考查介词在短语中的搭配、介词惯用法、介词的漏用和多用等。

①

From then on, we’ve kept touch with each other through e-mails.

②Nearly five years ago, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes. ③Luckily, I had all my money on my pocket.

3. 冠词考点归纳

主要考查定冠词the和不定冠词a/an的区别、冠词的固定短语、不定冠词a和an的区别、零冠词、冠词的漏用和多用等。

①

In a fact, he even scared my classmates away. ②…and they found me a comfortable one on second floor.

③

My mother is very kind and is friendly to everybody. So when I have the problem, I will turn to her for help.

Practice: 名词、介词&冠词共三处错误

If you hear the fire alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire.

4.代词考点归纳

主要考查前后一致（包括人称、单复数和性别一致）、物主代词的漏用、不定代词之间的区别等。

①We must find ways to protect your environment.

②Before her leaving, I prepared a gift to show my best wishes to him. She said…

③I was happy when the toys worked, but when things went wrong, I got angry and broke it.

5. 连词考点归纳

主要考查连词的并用、选择、递进、转折等区别，以及连词的漏用和多用，重点在于理顺句意的表达。其中，并列句考查得最频繁，其次是状语从句和名词性从句。

①In the countryside, the air is clean or the mountains are green.

②Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. ③But before long, they began to see which was happening.

6. 动词考点归纳

（1）该动词在句中作谓语时，主要考查时态和语态、主谓一致和情态动词的运用等（已连续五年考查一般过去时）。

①My dream school look like a big garden.

②

So real friendship should able to stand all sorts of tests. ③A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside the shop. ④Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very serious problem.

（2）该动词在句中作非谓语时，主要考查非谓语动词形式的运用。

①After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found that his parents

were missing. ②Last year, she decided study abroad.

③Looking forward to hear from you soon. ③

My friend Nick told me a story about his experience back in the US, which was very interested.

Practice: 代词、连词、谓语动词&非谓语动词共四处错误

Before long, a train inspector comes to check out tickets. A passenger realized he couldn’t find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began search for the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner.

7.词性考点归纳

主要考查形容词和副词、比较级和最高级的运用、名词误用成形容词等。

①The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. ②Mom said, “How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.”

③I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. ④This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.

8.其他考点归纳

①My dream school starts at 8: 30 a. m. and ends at 3: 30 p. m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon.

②Much rare animals are dying out.

③I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buying a ticket to Hangzhou. I was going to visit a friend here. ④He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. Practice: 词性等共四处错误

Dad lost his job, and as Mom explained, “He was lucky to find other one.” His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmates and my school. To make matters bad, I have to share a room with my sister. Tomorrow is the first day of school. I am awful tired, but I know I’ll never fall sleep.IV. Practice. watch TV after school. I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can She holds view that senior three

students have to make full use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am allowed to do

that, I’ll be unable to control me and forget all about my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. And I really can’t

accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hardly work. Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad. Thus, we shouldn

’t be forbidden to watch TV. It was 7:15 in the morning of February 8, 2007. I was walking along Park Road towards the east while an old man came out of the park on the other sides of the street. Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and make a right turn into Park Road. The next moment the car hit the man while

she was crossing the road. He fell with a cry. The car didn’t

stop and drive off at fully speed heading west. I noticed the

driver was young man wore a pair of glasses and the plate

number was AC864. After two minutes later, I stopped a

passed car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.

I’m very gladly to hear you are coming to visit me the next Friday. Unfortunately, I won’t be able to meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon. You won’t find difficult to getting to the city center. The airport bus leaves every 30 minute and will take you to the Friendship Hotel. My classes will be over by then or I will pick you up here. I will take you to a hot pot restaurant for dinner and we’ll talk with our plan for the weekend over dinner. Having a pleasant trip and see you Friday.

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