Writing教案和学案内容

Writing---- letters of apology I. Teaching aims:

1.Students are able to organize a passage about asking for help and find the key points.

2.Students are able to improve their ability to make correct simple sentences. II. Teaching key and difficult points:

1. To teach the students to master the skills of writing. 2. Let the students know how to write a letter of apology. III. Teaching procedures: Step1 Lead-in

Task 1: Enjoy two pictures Step2 Pre-writing: analyzing a passage:

假如你是新华中学的学生李华，上周在外教Mr. Jackson的口语课上使用手机被老师发现，手机被收走。请用英语给外教写一封道歉信，

注意：

1. 可适当添加细节使文章连贯；字数100。

2 .信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Mr. Jackson,

I’m really sorry about my using the mobile phone in your lecture last week. Please accept my sincere apology for being so rude a student.

I know any word might sound a made-up excuse. But I did not use the mobile phone for no reason. I was trying to find a part-time job last weekend that day, I got a job offer and they needed my further information immediately. Therefore, I had no other choice but to try sending them a text message in class and that was exactly what I was doing when you discovered.

I really hope that you can accept my apologies and forgive me. I have already studied the lecture again by myself and I swear（发誓）

it will not happen again.

Yours

Li Hua

Task 1: Make clear of the structure of this passage and fill in the blanks: Type of writing：

Person：

_______________

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Tense：

_______________ Key points：

Task 2 Group work: how many parts can we divide this passage into? (that means how many key points in this passage

求

Paragraph 1(part1)

助信

_____________ Paragraph2 (part2)

Paragraph3 (part3~4) _____________ 1 _____________

Task 3: let’s remember

Important words:

apology n.道歉

apologize v.道歉

forgive v.原谅

sincere adj.真诚的

appreciate v.感激

accept one’s apologies 接受某

人的道歉

Step3 While writing 说明上课睡觉的原因。

1.词数100左右。

2.可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。

Task 1: Organize the passage :

1). Type of writing：_______________

2). Tense：_______________ 3). Person：_______________ 4). Structure：

Paragraph 1 _______________________

Paragraph 2 _______________________

Paragraph 3 _______________________

Task 2:write the passage

Useful sentences:

1. I am terribly sorry to say that…

2. Will you please accept my apology?

3. Please accept my sincere apologies for this unhappy experience and I do hope you will understand me

4. I would appreciate it if you can give me another chance.

如果你是Pink Ming 的话，你现在需要向Miss Liu 写一封道歉信，表达你真诚的歉意并解释________________________________________________________________ Beginning ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ 2 ________________________________________________________________

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Body ________________________________________________________________

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Step4 Post-writing：

share your works with us

Step5 Summary 1.How to organize a letter of apology? 2.Some useful words and sentences about writing a letter of apology. Step6 Homework Finish your passage and correct it . _______________________________________________________________________________________ 另附学习材料：（要抽时间看哟，早自习拿出来大声朗读！）

一. 道歉信优秀范文

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I’m very sorry that I can’t go on a trip to Beijing with you next weekend, which I have promised you. I’m writing to tell you the reason for it.

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Just now, my cousin, Li Ming, who went abroad for further education last year, informed me that he would return the next Saturday morning. He asked me to pick him up at the airport with his parents. As you know, we haven’t seen each other for about a year, so I’ll have to help him in the first place.

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I really hope that you can accept my apologies and understand me. I would appreciate it if you allow me to fix another time to show you around some places of interest in Beijing.

Wish you have a good time this weekend! 三、求助信常用模板

Dear__________,

My name is ___________. I’m _______.

I have met much difficulty in________________. To begin with, ___________. In addition,

___________. What’s worse/Worse still, _________.

Faced with/Facing so much difficulty, I have to turn to you for help. Would you like to ___________ so that/in order that ________________? In the meanwhile/Meanwhile, ___________. Also, I would like you to __________ to ________.

I’m sure that I can ________ with your help./I will be much appreciated if you help me to ________.

Thank you for your time.

Yours,

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