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河北蒙中高二英语组

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主备人：卜有存

课题

学习目标

composition - argumentative writing? 1.

了解正反观点类作文的特点，并记住一些常用的句式及结构。

2.

练习写此类作文。

重难点

How to write the composition.

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Recently we had a heated discussion on whether we students should make friends on line ?

Some people are for it .The internet helps make many friends .Chatting on line ,students can more freely express their ideas, and even get help with their foreign language studies .

However, others are against it .They say making friends on line is a waste of time , which will have a bad influence on study . Besides , some students get cheated on line.

In my opinion, students should place their study , health and safety before other things . As for friendship ,we can find it easily in our classmates and other people around us . 二、Summary (正反观点对比范文结构

)What should be included in an argumentative writing?

Part 1.

Part 2.

Part 3.

三、Useful Sentences 1.介绍讨论的主题(开头句)

开头常用的句型：

1）讨论型

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(Recently) We have had a heated discussion about/on（whether we should）

...…. (近来)我们就(是否)……展开了热烈的讨论。

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We have held a discussion about whether it is good or not... 

We had a heated discussion about whether it is necessary to...

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I’m writing to tell you about a discussion we have had about /on whether …

我写信是要告诉你我们的一场讨论，讨论内容是否可以……

2）调查与问题型

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We’ve had a survey （调查）on how to ... 

The topic of…… is becoming the most popular recently.

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Recently the issue （问题

）on …

has become a heated topic.

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There is a widespread concern over……人们对……广泛关注．

2．主题句之后的过渡句

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Opinions are divided on this issue / question. 人们对此问题看法不同．

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Opinions are mainly divided into two groups 

Different people，however，have different opinions on this matter. 

Different people，however，think quite differently on this matter. 

People’s views/opinions on it vary/differ from person to person. 

People have taken /adopted different attitudes towards …

3．介绍正方观点

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45% of the students hold the view that...... 

60% of the students are for/are in favor of

the idea that...

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60% of the students believe that it is necessary to……

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…of them hold the opinion that ….

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Some who are in favor of … think that…

4．介绍反方观点

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However, others hold a different view(that……)

However others hold a competely

opposite opinion

However, some are against(反对) the view that…. On the other hand others have just the opposite (相反的)opinion. They think that……

What’s more,………

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However, others hold the view that……In their point of view, on the one hand，...

On the other hand,…

Therefore, there

is no

doubt

that…

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然而其他人持这样的观点…..。以他们看，一方面……，另一方面……．所以，无容至疑……

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On the other hand, people object that ….

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However, …of them hold a different view. / …of them hold the opposite opinion.

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However , others prefer to …

5.自己的观点

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I firmly believe that …

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In my opinion,

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Personally speaking,…

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As far as I am concerned, …

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From my point of view, ….

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It’s my opinion that

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Personally,

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As far as I am concerned, I am in favor of the first/second view./ …… For one reason,………. For another reason………

In a word,……. 就我的观点而言……，一个理由是……，另一个理由是……．总之一句话，……

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As far as I am concerned, I

firmly

support

the

view

that…

It

is not only because …, but also because….就我的观点而言……，我非常赞同……的观点．不仅仅因为……，还因为……．

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For me, the former is surely a wise choice . 

As far

I am concerned ,… is the best way to solve the problem…

6 比较、对比的连词

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However,

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on the other hand, 

on the contrary, 

unlike …

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be different from …,

7.表顺序，次序关系的关联词

1）firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally（不推荐，原因：俗）

first, second, third, last（不推荐，原因：俗) 2）

first and foremost, besides, in addition, what’s more/ furthermore，moreover, last but not least（强烈推荐）

(否定）

What’s worse / Even worse / Worse still / To make matters worse 3) to start with\ to begin with, next, then, furthermore, finally（强烈推荐）

如果只有两层意思,可选用下列中的任一组. 4）on the one hand, on the other hand（适用于相对立的两点的情况）

5）

for one thing, for another thing（适用于两点的情况）

6) not only--- but also---,

每类句子至少背会一至两个！！！

Dexterity comes by experience.熟练来自经验

河北蒙中高二英语组

使用时间：2015年

月

日

主备人：卜有存

课题

学习目标

composition - argumentative writing? 3.

了解正反观点类作文的特点，并记住一些常用的句式及结构。

4.

练习写此类作文。

重难点

How to write the composition.

[英语写作实战]

<<学生双语报>>就“城市内是否可以养宠物（如猫或狗）”在学生中组织了一场讨论。请根据下面提供的信息，用英文给报社编辑写一封信，介绍讨论情况，并说明自己的观点和建议。

反对者认为：花钱，污染环境，吵闹，伤人，增添负担。

支持者认为：安慰孤独者，学会和动物相处，培养责任心，增添情趣。

注意：1. 信的开头已为你写好; 2. 词数120左右。

Dear Editor,

I’m writing to tell you about the recent discussion that …….

Thanks for reading the letter.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

五、审

题

1.文体：

2.格式：

3.中心：

4.要点

5.人称：

6.时态：

7.结构：

8.词数：

六、连词成句

1 .我写这封信想告诉你我们最近举行的一次关于“城市内是否可以养宠物（

keep pets ）”的讨论的有关情况。

2. 一些学生认为养宠物是个好主意，因为宠物能陪伴（

offer company for sb.）孤独的人。

3.他们还认为养宠物能教我们怎样和动物相处(get along well with )，培养责任心(responsible )，增添情趣。

4.但是，其他人认为养宠物会污染环境，吵闹(noisy )，伤人(attack people)。

5.

他们还认为养宠物不仅增添负担，而且会花费很多钱。

6.

就我个人而言，我喜欢在家里养宠物，但是应采取措施(take measures to )阻止(prevent ……

from doing)他们污染环境。

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Dear Editor,

I’m writing to tell you about the recent discussion that

Thanks for reading the letter.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

Dexterity comes by experience.熟练来自经验