Using LanguageⅡ主要内容及教案内容

How to correct a composition

Class 14 Senior 1

梁剑平

Teaching important &difficult points:

To know the correcting standard of an English composition Teaching procedure

Step

Ⅰ:Step 1 Revision 1.To review an invitation Dear Ms Smith

This is Li Hua, President of the Student Union of Yucai Middle School, which is located near your university . I’m writing to see if we could have the honor to ask you to be a judge in our coming competition.

To promote students’ interest in learning English, we’ve planned to hold an English speech competition, the theme of which is “Man and Nature”. It will begin at two on the afternoon of June 15th, lasting three hours. Ten participants will compete with each other in Classroom 501.

We would feel much honored if you could join us. You can reach me through my phone number 44876655 . Looking forward to your reply.

Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua 2.The standard of correcting an English composition Step

Ⅱ：To show the students’ writing and analyze them

StepⅢ: To correct the mistakes 1.It will hold in classroom 501.---杨斌

2.We will hold an English speech contest which the topic is “man and nature”.

3.There will have ten students join in it.---李浩贤

4.It will so exciting that many people will enjoy it. 5.If you want to known more, you can call me.麦明昊

6. Our school hope pass this speech to know more about man and nature.-黄玉晴

7.I wait to your called.任骏贤

8.I hope the contest will be held success.---梅秀雯

9.Our students are very want you can come.--梁子轩

10.Everyone who are interested this are warmly welcomed.---李颖珊

11.It will be more funnier.---麦栩淳

1.It will be held in classroom 501.---杨斌

2.We will hold an English speech contest whose topic is “man and nature”.

3.There will be ten students joining in it.---李浩贤

4.It will be so exciting that many people will enjoy it. 5.If you want to know more, you can call me.麦明昊

6. Our school hopes to pass this speech to know more about man and nature.-黄玉晴

7.I wait for your call.任骏贤

8.I hope the contest will be held successfully.梅秀雯

9.Our students hope you can come.梁子轩

10.Everyone who is interested this is warmly welcomed.---李颖珊

11.It will be much funnier.---麦栩淳

Step

Ⅳ: To appreciate the writing of 2012 NMET Hi, Susan, We’re holding a party for Xiaoming’s birthday. I’m now writing to invite you to join us. We would feel much honored if you could come and enjoy it. The birthday party will be held at the Students’Club in the teaching building from 8 pm to 9 pm this Friday evening when we are all free. There will be many activities for us.

We will not only sing “Happy Birthday” to him, but also we will enjoy birthday cake as well as play some games. What’s more, we’ll all prepare some secret birthday gifts for him. And it’ll be great to see how surprised he will be seeing the gifts.

I’m sure that you’ll have a good time staying with us. We do hope that you could manage to attend it.

Looking forward to your coming.

Step

Ⅴ: Homework to write an invitation after class